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Georgia
I was a country boy; barefoot; running through the countryside.
Smile on my face, ’cause it was all about the fun in life. Happy-go-lucky; plucky. Had his own puppy. Buddies with the next door neighbors. A Rockwell painting of a couple friends attached to the jungle gym out back. Summers spent like Huckle Finn. For months on end we’d have daily games of H-O-R-S-E on a faded, aging court. Play-by-play reports by the players playing. Scores kept in your head… The rain delayed no sport. Tire-swings tied to trees where forts resided. These were norms provided me. July; we’d treat the fourth to Hide-and-Seek and S’mores. … lord. My wildest dreams couldn’t rival Springs I had before... we moved to… Last edited by dull boy; 01-31-2018 at 04:13 PM. |
01-31-2018, 12:32 PM | #2 |
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Dope takes me back man
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Ill. Nice Gaussian blur.
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02-01-2018, 11:23 PM | #4 |
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I'm at a loss here.
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02-03-2018, 01:07 PM | #6 |
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02-03-2018, 01:07 PM | #7 |
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Reminded me of "now is the hour"
It's a good book. Kinda strange. But good
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I got a sling blade vibe from it.. good imagery though !
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02-08-2018, 05:19 AM | #9 |
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02-08-2018, 06:45 AM | #10 |
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Nice onslaught of imagery. Fascinating read.
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02-13-2018, 02:14 AM | #11 |
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so dope.
left me hanging, wish it was longer can read this style forever, loved it made me happy and sad within seconds of each other lol good shit , so glad to see you're still here
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succinct. flowed organically with impressive imagery.
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