02-01-2018, 02:28 AM | #1 |
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BA Round 2: bleak vs Incredible - OPEN FOR VOTES
BA Rookie Tournament 2018 Round 2
Due Dates: Verses are due, by THURSDAY Feb 8th, 2018 11:59 PM PST. Check Ins are due by MONDAY Extensions are 24 hours Opponent may grant extension. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of 3 votes. Line Limit: Min. = 8 lines Max. = 24 lines General Rules: 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. Feeding = DQ. Recycling = DQ. Biting = DQ. No freeposting or swaying.Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will be disqualified. A check in IS mandatory. Competitors should agree on a line limit asap.If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount. Choices: May agree to swag&flow, picture or gimmick battle this round. @bleak @Incredible Last edited by Saint; 02-06-2018 at 02:43 PM. |
02-01-2018, 03:54 AM | #2 |
yeet
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Swag &flow? I'm trying to flex these multis
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02-01-2018, 09:28 AM | #3 |
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Check, I'd rather just do straight bars
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02-05-2018, 10:00 PM | #4 |
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Sent 12 to @Infiltration @bleak
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02-06-2018, 02:39 PM | #5 | |
yeet
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I hope your shit packed. Ur here cause Dark is big trash Thinkin u made it. This an Ego trip that's ending w/ you kidnapped Rd 2's a given. On my mild days ur child's play/fresh meat. act like ur Arm's strong... na, ur bars long but won't Stretch out to next week! I'll gun him quick, run ya shit. The money's coming hot today or it's 2 arms flailing off top... like Shane o'Mac is on the cage I'm on Toppo the bracket. Lose to Dyspo bitch? quite the statement No cheers, they're Jiren you when I knock you off the fighting stage quick Shootin soup cans, need 2 hands &harness if I spray this stan. You wrap two hands around the pole while in a harness like the cable man.. They love bleak when he Cooks foes, this rook knows he needs his meds. I'll pull up from the side &brand In with the force that Malcolm Jenkins did. |
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02-06-2018, 02:42 PM | #6 |
Scream
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Incredible verse:
His bitch get me from flacid to hard, 2hrs later back to flacid Fucka gun bar, that AK already took his head off in the classic If he pull up like a aero, that's a crossbow...boi I'm searing tissue He whip up on a ho, "what? cant hear you"...that's a power steering issue Dude Lotto said you been putting in work, he must mean an 8hr day Cuz from what I've read your more like the first name of his aka He just a stain that no one wants on their shit like a left over container I'm having a out of body experience of me winning, I call that a no brainer! He dress his lines up for the show, so go on and stylize Cuz When this big ordeal is about over, it'll need the inc to finalize Just get the truth through ya head, UR GONE! that's a stored fact that loud bang wasn't the 45, was you getting booted...Door smack! |
02-07-2018, 03:59 PM | #7 |
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bleak, decent stuff. that cable man punch was fire.. arm strong was aight.. lacked in consistency but u def had one haymaker.
Inc, man u surprised me here. opener was personal n had sum sting, the no brainer shit was dope n the inc to finalize was nice too. those won it for u sign into the league bro vote - incredible |
02-08-2018, 06:40 PM | #8 | ||
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02-10-2018, 02:59 PM | #9 |
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Arms flailing off top and cable man were prettt good
vs Opener was koo and I was diggin the no brained one but more bragging bar than a harsh direct diss. I’m a have to go wit bleak here wit the cleaner executed punches. Vote / bleak |
02-11-2018, 12:25 AM | #10 |
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Bleak you had a few really solid lines. Liked Shane O’ Mac/in the cage and that cable man line was sick lol. DBZ line was aight.. felt like you could of set these up a little cleaner and it actually would of been 110% doper because it has the concepts there. But you had the harder punches clearly.
Inf, I enjoyed your set ups tbh big thought some lines also could of been reworded for a harder hit.. They were pretty alright anyway tho . Think you did alright trying to use personals .. good multi usage.. power steering issue was more funny than good.lmao.. V/Bleak for Harder punchlines that’s what mattered in the end for this one. |
02-12-2018, 08:15 PM | #11 |
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02-13-2018, 07:46 PM | #12 |
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I hope your shit packed. Ur here cause Dark is big trash
Thinkin u made it. This an Ego trip that's ending w/ you kidnapped --- cool. Like the personal tie in. Punch was ite... Rd 2's a given. On my mild days ur child's play/fresh meat. act like ur Arm's strong... na, ur bars long but won't Stretch out to next week! --- this is well worded but all Armstrong plays are played... I'll gun him quick, run ya shit. The money's coming hot today or it's 2 arms flailing off top... like Shane o'Mac is on the cage --- played.... I'm on Toppo the bracket. Lose to Dyspo bitch? quite the statement No cheers, they're Jiren you when I knock you off the fighting stage quick --- I watch dbz but haven't caught up on the new shit so idk wtf this is... Shootin soup cans, need 2 hands &harness if I spray this stan. You wrap two hands around the pole while in a harness like the cable man.. --- good way to say he gay......... They love bleak when he Cooks foes, this rook knows he needs his meds. I'll pull up from the side &brand In with the force that Malcolm Jenkins did. --- didn't like........... Vs His bitch get me from flacid to hard, 2hrs later back to flacid Fucka gun bar, that AK already took his head off in the classic --- ak flips r played even using em in other battles........ If he pull up like a aero, that's a crossbow...boi I'm searing tissue He whip up on a ho, "what? cant hear you"...that's a power steering issue --- didn't like at all....... Dude Lotto said you been putting in work, he must mean an 8hr day Cuz from what I've read your more like the first name of his aka --- what's his aka? He just a stain that no one wants on their shit like a left over container I'm having a out of body experience of me winning, I call that a no brainer! --- better wording this coulda been dope. Good concept....... He dress his lines up for the show, so go on and stylize Cuz When this big ordeal is about over, it'll need the inc to finalize --- see what u did but it wasn't harsh enuff for me........ Just get the truth through ya head, UR GONE! that's a stored fact that loud bang wasn't the 45, was you getting booted...Door smack! --- door wack! This line bad.......... V. Bleak
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02-13-2018, 08:55 PM | #13 |
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Ego Trip, Harness
Inc to finalize, No Brainer A lil generous w/ the quotes - but i think bleaks hit harder. 5-1 bleak wins |
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