Week 9: Predictions/Chat - Page 8

Ghost1 · 02-07-2018, 09:58 AM

right...you guys have sortve created this wordplay bias imho...especially broke coming over here with his voting antics lol....its like a line was drawn in the sand

as far as the latter portion of your comment I disagree....but I can see both sides to it.....personally I feel like if you cant get your point across coherently IMMEDIATELY upon first read than impact suffers first and foremost......if im reading the verse I want it to read smooth...quick....harsh...if I got to stop reading....google a word read the definition then come back to the verse read the bar again and piece together your attempt it just completely sucks any fluidity you may have had initially out of the verse and hurts the effectiveness of the punch......ALSO people barely want to vote at all....if they find themselves having to do EXTRA footwork just to get a vote in its even more discouraging

as a writer its YOUR job to get your point across as coherent and succinctly as possible...youre an artist.....you cant paint a picture and then tell your audience its their fault they cant see the picture that you intended to paint.......

Habitat · 02-07-2018, 10:05 AM

I can kinda see what ur saying about looking up definitions. But I am painting a picture properly its kinda out of my control if people don't know the word. I've looked up words before and then re read the bar and been like "damn thats fire" so i guess I'm different than some people.

i was also kidding about not liking idiom / phrase based punches lol i think when done right they're dope.

Amen · 02-07-2018, 10:06 AM

Lmao well look it up. Nigga fuck you, adjust your wording and execution so we don’t have to waste our time putting your shit together.

Habitat · 02-07-2018, 10:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Amen

Lmao well look it up. Nigga fuck you, adjust your wording and execution so we don’t have to waste our time putting your shit together.

its not wording dumbass its literally people not knowing a definition.

Amen · 02-08-2018, 09:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Habitat

its not wording dumbass its literally people not knowing a definition.

Nah, wording has everything to do with it.

Your formula is wrdplay blah blah blah tie in definition < as the execution.

Its not creative, its corny when EVERY BAR IS THE SAME FORMULA. That is why people are hounding you guys about it.

Ok if 1 or 2 bars in a 10 line battle NOT EVERY.

I've said this all long even on RB when you guys over do it... Shit is corny and boring.

Habitat · 02-08-2018, 12:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Amen

Nah, wording has everything to do with it.

Your formula is wrdplay blah blah blah tie in definition < as the execution.

Its not creative, its corny when EVERY BAR IS THE SAME FORMULA. That is why people are hounding you guys about it.

Ok if 1 or 2 bars in a 10 line battle NOT EVERY.

I've said this all long even on RB when you guys over do it... Shit is corny and boring.

one second you're saying i lost because of names the next you're saying its wording. Dementia or Alzheimer's?

Amen · 02-08-2018, 12:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Habitat

one second you're saying i lost because of names the next you're saying its wording. Dementia or Alzheimer's?

Wtf are you even talking about? You took that L way to hard, bro.

I am speaking about WORDPLAY in general and the over use of it. I'm not referencing your battles. I'm simply pointing out your formula to verse key ups, you faggot fucker.

Don't make me, son. I will nuke your existence.

2tripple0 · 02-07-2018, 10:59 AM

yeah I got a problem with going back over a bar like twice or three times er whatever.... I think if a verse flows correctly you should be able to even just glance at it and know after you've read it properly whether its dope or not... sometimes I just read a verse real quickly and if its fluid throughout a line or a bar even a verse in total i'll be like yeah I like that verse that was ill... whereas if I have to read a bar twice just to get it I don't know it kind of bothers me to have to think it out... I realize like you could have a dope wordplay and it might take ya mind a second especially if ya tired er sumn but if your reading it and your like on top ya game at the time you should just be able to read it straight through and get everything right away as long as it was written well... I think that's the real nature of a dope verse imo anyways...

Habitat · 02-07-2018, 11:01 AM

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Originally Posted by 2tripple0

yeah I got a problem with going back over a bar like twice or three times er whatever.... I think if a verse flows correctly you should be able to even just glance at it and know after you've read it properly whether its dope or not... sometimes I just read a verse real quickly and if its fluid throughout a line or a bar even a verse in total i'll be like yeah I like that verse that was ill... whereas if I have to read a bar twice just to get it I don't know it kind of bothers me to have to think it out... I realize like you could have a dope wordplay and it might take ya mind a second especially if ya tired er sumn but if your reading it and your like on top ya game at the time you should just be able to read it straight through and get everything right away as long as it was written well... I think that's the real nature of a dope verse imo anyways...

you're a fuckin weirdo

Flow · 02-07-2018, 01:39 PM

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Originally Posted by 2tripple0

yeah I got a problem with going back over a bar like twice or three times er whatever.... I think if a verse flows correctly you should be able to even just glance at it and know after you've read it properly whether its dope or not... sometimes I just read a verse real quickly and if its fluid throughout a line or a bar even a verse in total i'll be like yeah I like that verse that was ill... whereas if I have to read a bar twice just to get it I don't know it kind of bothers me to have to think it out... I realize like you could have a dope wordplay and it might take ya mind a second especially if ya tired er sumn but if your reading it and your like on top ya game at the time you should just be able to read it straight through and get everything right away as long as it was written well... I think that's the real nature of a dope verse imo anyways...

Keep preachin sir

Ghost1 · 02-07-2018, 11:01 AM

lmfao nc got me leanin today

2tripple0 · 02-07-2018, 11:28 AM

whatever and i totally respect your point of view

Ghost1 · 02-07-2018, 12:04 PM

stfu u handicapped fagot

Pinot Grij · 02-07-2018, 01:19 PM

Fuckin magggggggg

Nick James · 02-07-2018, 01:57 PM

all u wordplay dudes stick together lol

passin around words u aint even pronouncin right

Habitat · 02-07-2018, 02:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Unemployed

all u wordplay dudes stick together lol

passin around words u aint even pronouncin right

What's not getting pronounced right?

Nick James · 02-07-2018, 02:05 PM

'cocksucker' for one

its pronounced hab-i-tat

Lol

Barcotic · 02-07-2018, 02:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Unemployed

'cocksucker' for one

its pronounced hab-i-tat

Lol

lmaooo

Habitat · 02-07-2018, 02:17 PM

your life ain't worth a pinch of raccoon shit

2tripple0 · 02-07-2018, 02:49 PM

yeah right and you know everything

02-07-2018, 10:05 AM	#2
Habitat Make my day Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 742 Battle Record: 8-6 Champed - 1-2 LR Tournament Rep Power: 7519562	I can kinda see what ur saying about looking up definitions. But I am painting a picture properly its kinda out of my control if people don't know the word. I've looked up words before and then re read the bar and been like "damn thats fire" so i guess I'm different than some people. i was also kidding about not liking idiom / phrase based punches lol i think when done right they're dope. __________________

02-07-2018, 10:59 AM	#8
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	yeah I got a problem with going back over a bar like twice or three times er whatever.... I think if a verse flows correctly you should be able to even just glance at it and know after you've read it properly whether its dope or not... sometimes I just read a verse real quickly and if its fluid throughout a line or a bar even a verse in total i'll be like yeah I like that verse that was ill... whereas if I have to read a bar twice just to get it I don't know it kind of bothers me to have to think it out... I realize like you could have a dope wordplay and it might take ya mind a second especially if ya tired er sumn but if your reading it and your like on top ya game at the time you should just be able to read it straight through and get everything right away as long as it was written well... I think that's the real nature of a dope verse imo anyways... __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-07-2018, 11:28 AM	#12
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	whatever and i totally respect your point of view __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-07-2018, 01:19 PM	#14
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Fuckin magggggggg __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

02-07-2018, 02:17 PM	#19
Habitat Make my day Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 742 Battle Record: 8-6 Champed - 1-2 LR Tournament Rep Power: 7519562	your life ain't worth a pinch of raccoon shit __________________

02-07-2018, 09:58 AM	#1
Ghost1 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 26,334 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 84181445	right...you guys have sortve created this wordplay bias imho...especially broke coming over here with his voting antics lol....its like a line was drawn in the sand as far as the latter portion of your comment I disagree....but I can see both sides to it.....personally I feel like if you cant get your point across coherently IMMEDIATELY upon first read than impact suffers first and foremost......if im reading the verse I want it to read smooth...quick....harsh...if I got to stop reading....google a word read the definition then come back to the verse read the bar again and piece together your attempt it just completely sucks any fluidity you may have had initially out of the verse and hurts the effectiveness of the punch......ALSO people barely want to vote at all....if they find themselves having to do EXTRA footwork just to get a vote in its even more discouraging as a writer its YOUR job to get your point across as coherent and succinctly as possible...youre an artist.....you cant paint a picture and then tell your audience its their fault they cant see the picture that you intended to paint.......

02-07-2018, 10:06 AM	#3
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,462 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	Lmao well look it up. Nigga fuck you, adjust your wording and execution so we don’t have to waste our time putting your shit together.

02-07-2018, 11:01 AM	#11
Ghost1 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 26,334 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 84181445	lmfao nc got me leanin today

02-07-2018, 12:04 PM	#13
Ghost1 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 26,334 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 84181445	stfu u handicapped fagot

02-07-2018, 01:57 PM	#15
Nick James death to amen Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 1,279 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7423718	all u wordplay dudes stick together lol passin around words u aint even pronouncin right

02-07-2018, 02:05 PM	#17
Nick James death to amen Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 1,279 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7423718	'cocksucker' for one its pronounced hab-i-tat Lol

02-07-2018, 02:49 PM	#20
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	yeah right and you know everything __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/