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12-04-2017, 08:46 PM | #2 | |
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Some things im not used to. Now i know i have a match every week lol.
Will put more effort in this week. See you baron
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12-04-2017, 10:45 PM | #3 |
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posting mag now
warnig because i read each verse and broke down my vote....its 40 mins enjoy lol |
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It’s processing now should be another 30-40 mins until the mag is posted I’m proud of it tbh. Hopefully it sparks your interest I think I did a decent job for the first time. Trust the next couple of mags will be shorter and more thought out |
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yeah. no chops but, I like a quicker delivery, dunno. the cat's I've done tracks with are all clean and I can't pull off slow shit. predictions: Mr. J vs Incredible Diablo vs Pent uP YDK vs Requiem (no clue) DVS vs dead man Last edited by symetrik; 12-05-2017 at 01:06 AM. Reason: spelling |
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Word I feel you on that but you gotta throw audio flows out the window when trying to vote on a topical. Most topical heads will sacrifice flow for content. So even though you find an audio flow it doesn’t necessarily mean that fact equates to what the writer was Trying to convey |
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I'm super out of touch about what you guys look for in a topical or not - But I'm under the assumption the verse you are writing is written so you can rap it and it works. Like you should be trying to achieve both content and audio flow. But that's just what I aim to do, not sure what others process is. |
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That said tho, I'm kinda neutral to the whole thing as well. If you're up for it you can find a picture that inspires you and I'm down to write to the same. Good luck regardless what you're up for.
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It's definitely not important for it work in a audio flow but a certain internal flow is definitely appreciated.
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I place a HUGE emphasis on flow in my shit tbh
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am i 2-0 because I won two matches last week?
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second row, #6, like a bunch of apartment balconies with a red head sitting on a dock or third row, #6 as well, the like stone giants and air balloons and shit. |
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I got the link for us this time around: https://i.imgur.com/mqbUq9J.jpg
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