11-21-2016, 10:00 PM | #1 |
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CBA 0-0 vs Jayson Fresh 0-0 - CBA WINS
NBL Season 10 Week 2 Due SUNDAY 11/27/16 Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines - NO BITING - NO FEEDING - NO SWAYING - AGREE ON LINE LIMIT Don't edit after your opponent has posted. 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in. Don't be an idiot. Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle. May God have mercy on your souls! @CBA @Jayson Fresh |
11-22-2016, 01:45 PM | #2 |
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alright , any line count is fine with me
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11-22-2016, 07:07 PM | #3 |
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Let's do 12 then
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11-23-2016, 11:46 AM | #4 |
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knock, knock..
I'll knockkk u da faaak out wanna spar b ? knock'll end with an exposed chest like surprise at da door of a bachelor party. naa u ain't touchin me.. aiiyo i'll beat this kid with eaaaase cuz you & winnin' go together like germaphobes at da ballpit of chuck-e-cheese AND soo fresh on some javelin stabbin' watch my spear access ya abdomen CPR'll be useless when I throw your heart into a mannequin challenge aaand when ya moms was pregnant with u she would cry & pray.. for a coat hanger to leave her uterus emptier than wal mart's shelves after black Friday fressh in da club with ya sis.. homie we flowin' Bacardi cant handle da flow., naa dumbfak type to bring a lifejacket to a foam party & real talk my drive to win is suttin' i never let slack.. CBA? kinda username is that? faaag thought of letters instead.. to win his boyfriend back |
11-25-2016, 10:38 PM | #5 |
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Battle rap's Vietnam Vet vs a jobber that's making no noise,
I'll take the biscuit and starting poppin' fresh for the dough, boy Oh boy, you're in the gay club singing "it's raining men" in a tube top I'm singing "it's raining men" throwing this fag off a roof top Almost half way through the fucking verse and I'm bringing lava Your chick said my cock fill her (filler) non-stop - that's the Frieza Saga While you were at Wal-mart, me and your chick were getting it on, son He was out buying baby products while I was giving her Johnson and Johnson And I said "this will shoot your eye out" as I humped your sis For the turkey, I'll have my dawgs in your house like the Bumpeses You're a born loser kid, no chance of success, that ship sailed Ever since his mom pushed Fresh out the oven he's been stale
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11-26-2016, 07:11 AM | #6 |
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Ready for votes!
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11-26-2016, 10:21 AM | #7 |
Prayers won't help.
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AND soo fresh on some javelin stabbin' watch my spear access ya abdomen
CPR'll be useless when I throw your heart into a mannequin challenge Vs Battle rap's Vietnam Vet vs a jobber that's making no noise, I'll take the biscuit and starting poppin' fresh for the dough, boy Oh boy, you're in the gay club singing "it's raining men" in a tube top I'm singing "it's raining men" throwing this fag off a roof top I'm sure fresh nameplate against him is dead, but i like the direction it went. The other bar becuz it made me chuckle. You write as if you were once a long barer. Orc is like a chameleon w. sneezes & Fresh steez looks like one of the many orc highlandered into his own style & did it better. You like to see it because it gives you entertainment visually but in your case, fresh.. it lacks in the power of the punches. Maybe you're rusty. Idk. Mvgt- cba Came off a bit stronger imo. |
11-26-2016, 11:51 AM | #8 |
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JF - mannequin challenge
CBA - Johnson and Johnson I'm gonna give it to CBA for stronger non-quotables
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11-26-2016, 10:34 PM | #9 | |
Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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Wasn't feeling that many bars in this battle tbh, JF could've went harder w/ the 'mannequin challenge' concept, but I liked it. As for CBA's quotable, it wasn't crazy, but it was funny enough to edge my vote, CBA takes it.
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11-27-2016, 07:16 AM | #10 |
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I'll knockkk u da faaak out wanna spar b ?
knock'll end with an exposed chest like surprise at da door of a bachelor party. Ehh naa u ain't touchin me.. aiiyo i'll beat this kid with eaaaase cuz you & winnin' go together like germaphobes at da ballpit of chuck-e-cheese Cheesy AND soo fresh on some javelin stabbin' watch my spear access ya abdomen CPR'll be useless when I throw your heart into a mannequin challenge Tf? aaand when ya moms was pregnant with u she would cry & pray.. for a coat hanger to leave her uterus emptier than wal mart's shelves after black Friday Too wordy fressh in da club with ya sis.. homie we flowin' Bacardi cant handle da flow., naa dumbfak type to bring a lifejacket to a foam party Dumb & real talk my drive to win is suttin' i never let slack.. CBA? kinda username is that? faaag thought of letters instead.. to win his boyfriend back Auto loss lol tf you talking about. Battle rap's Vietnam Vet vs a jobber that's making no noise, I'll take the biscuit and starting poppin' fresh for the dough, boy Played concept Oh boy, you're in the gay club singing "it's raining men" in a tube top I'm singing "it's raining men" throwing this fag off a roof top Heh Almost half way through the fucking verse and I'm bringing lava Your chick said my cock fill her (filler) non-stop - that's the Frieza Saga Dont hate on dbz foo While you were at Wal-mart, me and your chick were getting it on, son He was out buying baby products while I was giving her Johnson and Johnson Could of been better And I said "this will shoot your eye out" as I humped your sis For the turkey, I'll have my dawgs in your house like the Bumpeses Obscure reference You're a born loser kid, no chance of success, that ship sailed Ever since his mom pushed Fresh out the oven he's been stale Not worded great V cba It look like fresh got drunk before he wrote this and didnt proof read it. He was real hype for not saying anything. Last edited by Greed; 11-27-2016 at 07:27 AM. |
11-27-2016, 10:12 AM | #11 |
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Fresh, kinda lackluster, I get where u were going with the mannequin challenge but felt short
Cba, plz don't put wordplay in parentheses, we get it, no need it looks amateurish, rooftop was cool, so was j&j Cba wins
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11-27-2016, 08:19 PM | #12 |
YUUGE
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AND soo fresh on some javelin stabbin' watch my spear access ya abdomen
CPR'll be useless when I throw your heart into a mannequin challenge This was your best line and I almost feel like it was an accident how good it turned out for you vs. While you were at Wal-mart, me and your chick were getting it on, son He was out buying baby products while I was giving her Johnson and Johnson Yep... I liked it. well, the second line.... 1st line was trash Vote - CBA Overall more consistent verse and delivery, punches were decent overall... Jayson's verse felt a little forced and lackluster for my taste
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11-27-2016, 09:36 PM | #13 |
Try this shit
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nada
mannaquin been already done twice or at least i seen it twice and this was probably the wors tone Vs Battle rap's Vietnam Vet vs a jobber that's making no noise, I'll take the biscuit and starting poppin' fresh for the dough, boy light battle here folks honestly going for the harsher hit here, cba
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