09-01-2016, 04:09 AM | #41 |
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@Cimmerian its 16 lines minimum bruh!
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09-01-2016, 07:34 AM | #43 |
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lmao it was just a heads up
i wasn't sure if you had mistakenly copied/pasted the verse was all im sure @Bags will have no problem with it
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09-02-2016, 01:07 PM | #44 |
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09-02-2016, 03:01 PM | #46 |
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EXTENSIONS ALL ROUND BY THE LOOK OF IT, I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW LONG I'M GIVING YOU ALL LOL!!
YOUVE GOT UNTIL I GET HOME FROM WORK TOMORROW, PROB ABOUT 4PM UK TIME I MAKE THAT AROUND 18 HOURS FROM NOW!!!! LETS MAKE THIS GOOD PEOPLE!!!!
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09-02-2016, 05:42 PM | #47 |
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So we're just going to act like that didn't happen?
Fine.
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09-02-2016, 05:51 PM | #48 |
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Yeah, Bags wrote his own jawn so there it is.
No point in unnecessary drama at this point. Threads open.
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09-02-2016, 05:53 PM | #49 |
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Alright I posted. went over the line limit by a bit but wrote a lot of words. its hard to tell in an offline text editor. idk. shout out pent
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09-02-2016, 05:57 PM | #50 |
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Lol but tell me how u knew
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09-02-2016, 06:07 PM | #51 |
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I've been reading Camarac since before he even had a style.
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09-02-2016, 06:14 PM | #52 |
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Lol.....was thinking.....who the fuck is gonna believe I wrote this tho
Was alot quicker then I thought tho lmao bravo |
09-02-2016, 08:05 PM | #53 |
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lmaoooooooooo I red it & wus lykbags isn't dos smart????? then I redit agrnand was like I'd fucckalTRASH BAGS LOL GET IT LMAO
rhymed 2 much and way too many cliches anyway. ROAD TO SILENCE HEART OJ YOUR SLEBEES DESRY DEPARTED. SHE DEPARTED FROM ME MLISTNE HERE BEARDICHIO DONT J FUCKING DARE CUM AT BB WITH BAT WEAK GARBAGE IDC EHO THE FUCK IT IS I SWEAR 2 FUCKA JEHOVA NIGGA YOU EVER CUM IN BERE DISRESPECTING MAH FUCKA BB GANGSTA I EILL DEMOLISH UR FUCKA SOUL U GOT IT BUB U THINK U CAN WALTZ IN HER WIT YA FUCKA BEARDIO AND TINKLE LIKE S FUCKA CINDERELLA ASS NAH NAH FUCK YOU I WILL FUCKA EAT UR FUCKING BEARD FOR BREAKFAST SHIT IT OUT SND UCK IT IN BUTT^! TINK BB FOGET BOUT DA FUCKA PARAGRAPH H LEFT ME FEE DAIS AGO? FUCK U BEARD FUCK U |
09-02-2016, 08:06 PM | #54 |
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09-02-2016, 08:12 PM | #55 |
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This is the beef that will either end the site or renew it with more intense vigor than ever before seen.
About 20-25 lines into my verse. Going to fantasy draft here soon. Will finish in the AM, hungover. Very excited to match up against Richard Corey. I've been reading all of his blog posts. I have some critiques but in general I thought they were fine! Very nervous. Thinking about scrapping this grandiose idea and just WRITERING, man. Straight from the heart. Against such a behemoth, one gets reticent. But I'll do this thing. I hope people like it. I hope I'm not crossing any unspoken boundaries with this paragraph. Would feel sheepish and reclusive if I was. Pharaoh's Army is one of the craziest (legitimately) people in the country. Get help bub. Well thought out response, bb.
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I swear to fucking christ bb
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Bags why didn't you write about one of your coworkers and have funny lines of dialogue like that one piece I read that made me include you in my list of topicalists just curious will hang up and listen to response.
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09-02-2016, 08:22 PM | #58 |
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@PancakeBrah aym
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Frank's prediction tricked me and made me i think i was a hood classic
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@big baby ok
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