...chasing money// you STARVING to win? Flies on faces. The RACE is UGLY.

Quarter O · 07-16-2016, 04:11 PM

We heavy movers leaving u hauled, we movin in, I deck the halls
with rapper portraits on the wall, hoverboard when giving tours
I'm in the house, movements large sorta like a mobile home
or trailer park, STATE of the art's NY. Know it yo
spread to Ohio, home where the champs reign
wipe CHAMPAGNE off the trophy, leave it in its GOLDEN state
pun intended, niggas mug with blunt expressions
uninvited, they POP STARS, send bullets "One Direction"
my engineer records out the trap house
as I write this my nigga's cookin up crack now
got starving artists on that DOPE SHIT if 5-o hit
they swallowing CRACK VALVES to PASS BOWELS
I'm just a black child ..that seen the good n bad took the book bag route
mixed knowledge with a bad mouth
got fed so much garbage, I'm how talking TRASH SOUND
SLAY the PAGE like PAPER MASHAY, got PAPER to CHASE
like a DOG and the paper boy is ASSED OUT
I blacked out in spots where they wanna keep the black out
got a grand scheme and the scene is "Dead Presidents"
except this much money bags will have em death sentencin'
..money talks and bullshit walks
I don't chase bitches. I let em stretch their leotards
walking that WALK of SHAME ain't mean to LEAD you on yo
with me relationSHIPS SPLIT fuck a Leonardo
he had relations the SHIP SPLIT now he SINKING all slow
in the deepest water now the nigga sleepy hollow
you lose money chasing women never lose women chasing money
STARVING to win? Flies on faces. The RACE is UGLY.

Pharaohs Army · 07-16-2016, 04:36 PM

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Quarter O · 07-16-2016, 04:51 PM

mY NERV...Preciate it..I may consider..and thats the thing..changing my writing style..if it dont go to a beat I dont write it..but I may for sum strictly a-capella url/kotd battle style. TRUUU

Quarter O · 07-16-2016, 04:54 PM

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Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army

I really like the narrative in this one.. Pretty entertaining for everyone involved.
&I'm sure the racism, misogyny, and curse words were just for shock value.
You should really consider joining the Battle areas, although you'd really have to make some big changes to the way you write.
Stay up Q... chase that paper.

And I'm nigerian myself. But born in america. I think i get a pass calling africans ugly.

07-16-2016, 04:11 PM	#1
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	...chasing money// you STARVING to win? Flies on faces. The RACE is UGLY. We heavy movers leaving u hauled, we movin in, I deck the halls with rapper portraits on the wall, hoverboard when giving tours I'm in the house, movements large sorta like a mobile home or trailer park, STATE of the art's NY. Know it yo spread to Ohio, home where the champs reign wipe CHAMPAGNE off the trophy, leave it in its GOLDEN state pun intended, niggas mug with blunt expressions uninvited, they POP STARS, send bullets "One Direction" my engineer records out the trap house as I write this my nigga's cookin up crack now got starving artists on that DOPE SHIT if 5-o hit they swallowing CRACK VALVES to PASS BOWELS I'm just a black child ..that seen the good n bad took the book bag route mixed knowledge with a bad mouth got fed so much garbage, I'm how talking TRASH SOUND SLAY the PAGE like PAPER MASHAY, got PAPER to CHASE like a DOG and the paper boy is ASSED OUT I blacked out in spots where they wanna keep the black out got a grand scheme and the scene is "Dead Presidents" except this much money bags will have em death sentencin' ..money talks and bullshit walks I don't chase bitches. I let em stretch their leotards walking that WALK of SHAME ain't mean to LEAD you on yo with me relationSHIPS SPLIT fuck a Leonardo he had relations the SHIP SPLIT now he SINKING all slow in the deepest water now the nigga sleepy hollow you lose money chasing women never lose women chasing money STARVING to win? Flies on faces. The RACE is UGLY. Last edited by Quarter O; 07-18-2016 at 04:21 PM.

07-16-2016, 04:36 PM	#2
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	0 Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 11-02-2016 at 05:18 AM.

07-16-2016, 04:51 PM	#3
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	mY NERV...Preciate it..I may consider..and thats the thing..changing my writing style..if it dont go to a beat I dont write it..but I may for sum strictly a-capella url/kotd battle style. TRUUU