05-04-2016, 10:39 PM | #141 |
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I have the same problem some time. Trying to do too much. Multi-layered concepts can work but it's gotta be done worded immaculately and come across unforced. Most of the time they just come across convoluted or straight messy. Less is more, which is why I fucked with that bar. It was slick and direct. But everyone is looking for different things when judging.
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05-05-2016, 10:44 AM | #143 |
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How that one muscle on your back bigger than my head tho.
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05-05-2016, 10:55 AM | #144 |
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probably cause u gotta pistachio head
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05-05-2016, 11:02 AM | #145 |
Lime Life
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Pistachio head is what I call your girl after I bust a nut on her face
Or something
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05-05-2016, 11:05 AM | #146 |
Make my day
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repped
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05-05-2016, 12:09 PM | #147 |
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....man
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05-05-2016, 12:26 PM | #148 |
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I got so many gun bars right now.
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05-05-2016, 01:02 PM | #150 |
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Im sitting on a shit load of bars but I don't think dis mawg gonna show
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05-05-2016, 01:28 PM | #151 |
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Cred lemme get like 2 of em
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05-05-2016, 01:29 PM | #152 |
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I got sum comedy bars u can get in exchange lol
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05-05-2016, 01:45 PM | #153 |
Lime Life
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I will write for you.
Ur welcome.
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05-05-2016, 01:58 PM | #154 |
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05-05-2016, 02:08 PM | #156 |
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Send ur verse....I'll take wat I please
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05-05-2016, 02:36 PM | #157 |
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On it.
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05-05-2016, 03:18 PM | #158 | |
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05-05-2016, 04:18 PM | #160 |
I'M A MONSTER!
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obv GOAT is obv.
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