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Old 04-26-2016, 02:55 AM   #61
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Old 04-26-2016, 04:33 AM   #62
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ah uh I'm going to be a professional/response-with it is "Ke$ha - tic toc"

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Contendership: Artifice (4-1) vs. Just Write (6-1)
Adverse (2-0) vs. 2tripple0 (5-2)
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NYCSPITZ (0-0) vs. Cereal_Killer (0-0)

Dandy than..
has anyone seen half 23 (the movie)watt..
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Old 04-26-2016, 09:11 AM   #63
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Old 04-26-2016, 10:53 AM   #64
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lmao many lulz were had

I don't think banning active participants is the way to go about this though

2trip been a staple of the league for a long time, and was in the contendership match only last week

you cant discredit the guys dedication, imo, given his length of service in the AWOL

that said, A++++ post

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Old 04-26-2016, 11:15 AM   #65
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Titled: KAMA..

I once knew this human being with its pants hanging low,
and one gangster licked a red letter box and spat his whisper in the air.. DEEP/so deep how deep like soooo DEEP that he flung a price set for a stamp set through that wind..

AND it hit that human being in the back off the head, making him still stuck dropping all its coins to pass to the next WORLD/fucking movement..

it hit that hard it had hit before,

a doughboy just tryna carry and care for dough boy and slammed a door in its face..

(GUESS who was left standing)
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IT hit that hard
that whisper
it turned a human being into an IT
(&) a human being into STUCK STILL
THAT IT the whisper itself connected to the original carriers..

It comes out from the next red letter box licker stamp set seller for that price to have it pulled out in a public place acknowledged by everybody as the majority..

WITH THEM SCREAMING - "it counted it"

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Old 04-26-2016, 03:59 PM   #66
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Titled: KAMA..

I once knew this human being with its pants hanging low,
and one gangster licked a red letter box and spat his whisper in the air.. DEEP/so deep how deep like soooo DEEP that he flung a price set for a stamp set through that wind..

AND it hit that human being in the back off the head, making him still stuck dropping all its coins to pass to the next WORLD/fucking movement..

it hit that hard it had hit before,

a doughboy just tryna carry and care for dough boy and slammed a door in its face..

(GUESS who was left standing)
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IT hit that hard
that whisper
it turned a human being into an IT
(&) a human being into STUCK STILL
THAT IT the whisper itself connected to the original carriers..

It comes out from the next red letter box licker stamp set seller for that price to have it pulled out in a public place acknowledged by everybody as the majority..

WITH THEM SCREAMING - "it counted it"

You on mushrooms, or is that a copy/paste of one of those foreign spam ads that has a bunch of vaguely related statements slightly mixed together?
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Old 04-26-2016, 05:40 PM   #67
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i was starting battle reviews and got mad. 2k's sign in is welcome. my rant is still relevant.

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Old 04-26-2016, 05:54 PM   #68
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Is that Cereal Killer guy always like this? Lol
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Old 04-26-2016, 06:22 PM   #69
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yo ck. you quoted me but then... didn't quote me?
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Old 04-26-2016, 08:39 PM   #70
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Just wanted to say thanks for the critique week in and week out guys, it really helps as an artist
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Old 04-26-2016, 09:44 PM   #71
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Sorry guys I didn't have a chance to lewvevfeed before work. @asylum leave the battles open until tomorrow and I'll leave feedback tomorrow morning when I get home from work.
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Old 04-26-2016, 11:20 PM   #72
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... not sure if ill be voting tonight either. @2tripple0 my bad on that scathing rant. I appreciate your participation. I really came off like an arrogant prick tho. Embarrassing.

I cant pull a mag this week. If anyone wishes to do one, youre more than welcome to.
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Old 04-27-2016, 12:57 AM   #73
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@asylum, I'll put the mag together for this week
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Old 04-27-2016, 03:51 AM   #74
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thanks bro!
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Old 04-27-2016, 04:10 AM   #75
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pancake, pancake, strawberry flip...
its a slobberknocker where the commentary is..
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Old 04-27-2016, 04:10 AM   #76
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@Adverse @MMLP @NYCSPITZ @Cereal_Killa @breathless @2tripple0 @Artifice @timeless


Mmlp NYC owe another vote I believe. Everyone else is at 0 votes. Get them shits in, due tomorrow around 5 pm Pacific time. I'm posting topics and threads tomorrow, and if voting don't improve rules will be enforced.
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Old 04-27-2016, 04:12 AM   #77
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you made me stay up & vote to say its extended til tomorrow...you dick...
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you made me stay up & vote to say its extended til tomorrow...you dick...
I gotta be up in 4 hours to work. Just came to help out.


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Thank you for voting though. Jay, Frank and symmetric
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Only automatic cycled electricity inside itself dragging..

HOW much does spam loose,
when it looses a what was that..

Especially dragging an I..
in I follow..

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