04-26-2016, 09:16 PM | #1 |
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Adverse 2-1 vs Habitat 2-1 - ADVERSE WINS
NBL Season 9 @Adverse @Habitat
Due FRIDAY Extension will be given if asked due to late start. You MUST ask though. Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
04-26-2016, 10:03 PM | #2 |
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04-27-2016, 09:01 AM | #3 |
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I really didn't want in this week but I guess I'll get it in.
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04-27-2016, 03:29 PM | #4 | |
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RIP you no pussy getting faggot
Aaayyooooooo Dawg, the ho's don't respect you... with women ur just Aladdin trouble like a scene with jafar If a bitch ever say "I'd hit that" she means with her car this lame winning against anyone's a robbery, u're a disgrace and a failure If someone ever con-verse? It'll be of his life when I stomp his face with my taylors Quote:
the only Arch I've been a part of, was the uppercut that shattered your glass jaw as a matter a fact brah, u shouldn't be here and it's truly blatant his work's so scorned that a lifelong Banana deletion would suit this fruity faggot ur verses' are so horrid it should be criminal to look at em if Addenda career, it's because @Detective Mike Hunt, NCPD threw the book at him as a parent I heard you're really shittin' the bed those kids better get fedora cap is the answer when I place a hit on ya head 12 Last edited by Habitat; 04-27-2016 at 06:56 PM. |
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04-28-2016, 11:11 AM | #5 |
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I got quick hands my fist lands with impact so kid don't irk me
Or I'll break habit so fast they'll think I quit cold turkey Got advice to rid of the parenthesis on my punches, pointing out the obvious I'd give you the same feedback but nothing you spit is worth quoting to start with Cross my path and I'll blast as fast as your ass blinks And the coroner will be covering Tat up like an episode of Bad Ink Coming into this cage match with such stamina and torque I'll CASH in on your head this battle, your fam will witness you vanish just like Orc Barrel at his chin, watch me tear his soul from him I'm the dude that just went toe to toe with Nik, while you're recognized as Aero's only win Listen up, you ain't getting no bitches you faggot Even crack whores gotta be high as shit to pick up a habit |
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04-28-2016, 01:01 PM | #7 |
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Addenda, fedora
Vs. Quoting, bad ink, aeros only win V/ adverse |
04-28-2016, 03:34 PM | #8 |
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Habitat
Converse was ok. Seen a fedora concept it was ok too. Other then wording and execution didnt work for u here Adverse Opener played Bad ink was cool nice np reference Aero personal V/Adverse slighty more consistent here |
04-29-2016, 04:11 PM | #9 |
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ADVERSE more polished & impactful wording, w/ harsher concepts. Hab's concept were very ineffective & the wording didn't cause any damage.
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04-29-2016, 08:10 PM | #10 |
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Adverse got the W.. I stop reading habitat verse after the Aladdin bar.
I thought adverse verse was cool tho so gets the w imo. |
04-29-2016, 08:13 PM | #11 | |
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04-29-2016, 09:04 PM | #12 | |
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04-29-2016, 09:14 PM | #13 |
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04-29-2016, 09:15 PM | #14 |
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I know niggas aint emotional..
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04-30-2016, 09:02 AM | #16 |
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with women ur just Aladdin trouble like a scene with jafar
If a bitch ever say "I'd hit that" she means with her car This is very old. Very, very old. we can't wait for ur shit to be hidden, that's rightfully chutzpah the only Arch I've been a part of, was the uppercut that shattered your glass jaw I dont get it. as a matter a fact brah, u shouldn't be here and it's truly blatant his work's so scorned that a lifelong Banana deletion would suit this fruity faggot I dont get thios either. ur verses' are so horrid it should be criminal to look at em if Addenda career, it's because @Detective Mike Hunt, NCPD threw the book at him This was decent but not really hard hitting. The wordplay doesnt work both ways honestly. as a parent I heard you're really shittin' the bed those kids better get fedora cap is the answer when I place a hit on ya head This was cool but again, the wordplay doesn't both ways. I got quick hands my fist lands with impact so kid don't irk me Or I'll break habit so fast they'll think I quit cold turkey Got advice to rid of the parenthesis on my punches, pointing out the obvious I'd give you the same feedback but nothing you spit is worth quoting to start with Cross my path and I'll blast as fast as your ass blinks And the coroner will be covering Tat up like an episode of Bad Ink Barrel at his chin, watch me tear his soul from him I'm the dude that just went toe to toe with Nik, while you're recognized as Aero's only win Listen up, you ain't getting no bitches you faggot Even crack whores gotta be high as shit to pick up a habit This whole verse was pretty much fire. That feedback line was a really hard hitting personal and the Bad Ink line was a really dope nameplay. Adverse was consistent here and more polished. Vote- Adverse. |
04-30-2016, 12:02 PM | #17 |
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lmao I only read the first line of each to make sure its a fair vote...
Habitat: hit that, Arch Adverse: quoting to start with, covering Tat up, Aero's only win I think this was closer than some are saying, but I still got Adverse. That Tat up line was dope and the Aero one was funny. I thought Habitat's Arch line was a dope concept, but worded a bit odd (aren't you implying you were never part of an archive, as in you're not good? lol). Anyway.... Vote = Adverse |
04-30-2016, 09:30 PM | #18 |
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adverse got this though there were a lot of misses in this battle from both sides
I wasn't feeling much at all from habitat, a lot were almost there though, Mike hunt could have been decent. it was still ok I guess ad had the lotb easy with the cover tat up bar v/adverse |
04-30-2016, 09:50 PM | #19 |
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RIP you no pussy getting faggot
Settle down man wat is this a fuckin @Aero verse? Smh Aaayyooooooo Dawg, the ho's don't respect you... U still talkin.....!? This verse better be phenomenal with women ur just Aladdin trouble like a scene with jafar If a bitch ever say "I'd hit that" she means with her car Smh ....I'll go ahead an assume it won't be this lame winning against anyone's a robbery, u're a disgrace and a failure If someone ever con-verse? It'll be of his life when I stomp his face with my taylors Played we can't wait for ur shit to be hidden, that's rightfully chutzpah the only Arch I've been a part of, was the uppercut that shattered your glass jaw Nah as a matter a fact brah, u shouldn't be here and it's truly blatant his work's so scorned that a lifelong Banana deletion would suit this fruity faggot Ban and a ? Is this how u say banana? ur verses' are so horrid it should be criminal to look at em if Addenda career, it's because @Detective Mike Hunt, NCPD threw the book at him Wack as a parent I heard you're really shittin' the bed those kids better get fedora cap is the answer when I place a hit on ya head Wordings fucked 12 I got quick hands my fist lands with impact so kid don't irk me Or I'll break habit so fast they'll think I quit cold turkey Got em Got advice to rid of the parenthesis on my punches, pointing out the obvious I'd give you the same feedback but nothing you spit is worth quoting to start with Lol Cross my path and I'll blast as fast as your ass blinks And the coroner will be covering Tat up like an episode of Bad Ink Ok Coming into this cage match with such stamina and torque I'll CASH in on your head this battle, your fam will witness you vanish just like Orc Lol good Barrel at his chin, watch me tear his soul from him I'm the dude that just went toe to toe with Nik, while you're recognized as Aero's only win LMAO...yo did u sign out tgis week? Sign back in please Listen up, you ain't getting no bitches you faggot Even crack whores gotta be high as shit to pick up a habit Eh Adverse w the clear body here. Habitat still Trynna get the basics down.....also I'd prolly leave that goofball extra shit to the side too especially since it's obvious u still haven't even developed a style or really a basic understanding of how to construct a punchline V ad |
05-01-2016, 11:59 AM | #20 |
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Aaayyooooooo Dawg, the ho's don't respect you... with women ur just Aladdin trouble like a scene with jafar If a bitch ever say "I'd hit that" she means with her car hmm I tend to notice whenever there's wp in the first bar it doesn't work out so good at the end. Maybe if this was completely different with the Aladdin wp in the second bar it could have worked.. this lame winning against anyone's a robbery, u're a disgrace and a failure If someone ever con-verse? It'll be of his life when I stomp his face with my taylors this is played Originally Posted by Adverse View Post Any reason my battle is in the archive btw? It's not locked yet lol we can't wait for ur shit to be hidden, that's rightfully chutzpah the only Arch I've been a part of, was the uppercut that shattered your glass jaw decent as a matter a fact brah, u shouldn't be here and it's truly blatant his work's so scorned that a lifelong Banana deletion would suit this fruity faggot nah lol ur verses' are so horrid it should be criminal to look at em if Addenda career, it's because @Detective Mike Hunt, NCPD threw the book at him yikes as a parent I heard you're really shittin' the bed those kids better get fedora cap is the answer when I place a hit on ya head fedora been used 4048483 times bro 12 Vs got quick hands my fist lands with impact so kid don't irk me Or I'll break habit so fast they'll think I quit cold turkey this was cool Got advice to rid of the parenthesis on my punches, pointing out the obvious I'd give you the same feedback but nothing you spit is worth quoting to start with nah Cross my path and I'll blast as fast as your ass blinks And the coroner will be covering Tat up like an episode of Bad Ink ok Coming into this cage match with such stamina and torque I'll CASH in on your head this battle, your fam will witness you vanish just like Orc damn this coulda been dope but the way you did it was light. decent bar Barrel at his chin, watch me tear his soul from him I'm the dude that just went toe to toe with Nik, while you're recognized as Aero's only win lol good Listen up, you ain't getting no bitches you faggot Even crack whores gotta be high as shit to pick up a habit no Hab slacked this week man, adverse had some good stuff. Vote Ad
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