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Old 04-11-2016, 03:08 PM   #1
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Old 04-11-2016, 06:30 PM   #2
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Old 04-12-2016, 07:33 AM   #3
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Old 04-13-2016, 10:56 AM   #4
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This is war, on some 300 shit I'ma leave him bloodied and pulped
If I'm bringin an army, that's a Roman Charge.. This faggot can't even call a buddy for help
This text shit is beyond you, I ain't leavin til this poser is dead
anyone afflicted w/ that Aero Dynamic- have concepts go right over their head
My shit is Godly, ur shit is shoddy... it's no fable u're a half wit
Appraisal never make it's way to you unless God himself labels you a faggot
Dawg I heard u were Asian, with a sideways vagina tho
So if you ever clean my clock- That's a Maid in China joke
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Old 04-14-2016, 11:42 PM   #5
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Pissed on his Girl & Mom & as they were

Coated in pee with their face down ass up I was feeling concerned
I had no condom & the golden arches assured over 1 billion were served
Know what rhymes with Habitat? Fag attack. I don't wonder at all
I'm fucking waitRESSES, he likes D on waiters no Thunder involved
After I do a show chicks race to my dressing room hot & bothered
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My crew is legit, I don't care if you roll deep boyyyy you is a bitch
Of course you got niggas down to ride they're using you for the whip
"Where's the dough?!" squeeze cans for green's what Popeyes about
Hab's like Popeye too, way he starts talking when the pipes in his mouth
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Old 04-15-2016, 10:48 AM   #6
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This is war, on some 300 shit I'ma leave him bloodied and pulped
If I'm bringin an army, that's a Roman Charge.. This faggot can't even call a buddy for help
--- roman/roaming, ehh. And don't u get roaming charges when u make a call. So the flip doesn't make sense........
This text shit is beyond you, I ain't leavin til this poser is dead
anyone afflicted w/ that Aero Dynamic- have concepts go right over their head
--- Aero np's is a nah bruh, it'd have to be super dope.........
My shit is Godly, ur shit is shoddy... it's no fable u're a half wit
Appraisal never make it's way to you unless God himself labels you a faggot
--- this is cool. I like the wp flip is cool...........
Dawg I heard u were Asian, with a sideways vagina tho
So if you ever clean my clock- That's a Maid in China joke
--- does nothing for me..........
A cup half empty kinda guy w/ one foot in the grave, now u have to die
If the grass seems greener on the other side, it's because ya Pasture Prime
--- Naa. Wp is doodoo. Angle is doodoo..........


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Coated in pee with their face down ass up I was feeling concerned
I had no condom & the golden arches assured over 1 billion were served
--- I don't see the tie in between Mickey d's and a condom...i think I'm missing something here..........
Know what rhymes with Habitat? Fag attack. I don't wonder at all
I'm fucking waitRESSES, he likes D on waiters no Thunder involved
--- nice..........
After I do a show chicks race to my dressing room hot & bothered
You had a girl rush backstage when Maury revealed you are not the father
--- ehh...........
My crew is legit, I don't care if you roll deep boyyyy you is a bitch
Of course you got niggas down to ride they're using you for the whip
--- lol dope............
"Where's the dough?!" squeeze cans for green's what Popeyes about
Hab's like Popeye too, way he starts talking when the pipes in his mouth
--- blah..........





Cool battle. Habitat got potential if he learn what WP and angles are played. I like his style. But....



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Old 04-15-2016, 11:07 AM   #7
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This is war, on some 300 shit I'ma leave him bloodied and pulped
If I'm bringin an army, that's a Roman Charge.. This faggot can't even call a buddy for help
This didn't hit for me at all.
This text shit is beyond you, I ain't leavin til this poser is dead
anyone afflicted w/ that Aero Dynamic- have concepts go right over their head
woooo liked this a lot.
My shit is Godly, ur shit is shoddy... it's no fable u're a half wit
Appraisal never make it's way to you unless God himself labels you a faggot
thought this coulda been better, but wasn't hitting with the way you worded it
Dawg I heard u were Asian, with a sideways vagina tho
So if you ever clean my clock- That's a Maid in China joke
wtf lmao at the setup. i kinda liked the punch ... i think
A cup half empty kinda guy w/ one foot in the grave, now u have to die
If the grass seems greener on the other side, it's because ya Pasture Prime
alright this was dope



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Pissed on his Girl & Mom & as they were
don't do him like that man!!!

Coated in pee with their face down ass up I was feeling concerned
I had no condom & the golden arches assured over 1 billion were served
I'm sure they appreciated your concern. This was not very good to me lol
Know what rhymes with Habitat? Fag attack. I don't wonder at all
I'm fucking waitRESSES, he likes D on waiters no Thunder involved
jesus christ this is such a reach
After I do a show chicks race to my dressing room hot & bothered
You had a girl rush backstage when Maury revealed you are not the father
this a personal? if so kinda funny i guess, if not just kinda weird
My crew is legit, I don't care if you roll deep boyyyy you is a bitch
Of course you got niggas down to ride they're using you for the whip
lmao liked this a lot
"Where's the dough?!" squeeze cans for green's what Popeyes about
Hab's like Popeye too, way he starts talking when the pipes in his mouth
Ight this was solid


Thought Aero started picking up steam towards the end of his verse, but it was a bit too late. Habitat was much more consistent throughout and his lows were way higher than aero's lows.

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Old 04-15-2016, 11:31 AM   #8
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[QUOTE=Habitat;578682]This is war, on some 300 shit I'ma leave him bloodied and pulped
If I'm bringin an army, that's a Roman Charge.. This faggot can't even call a buddy for help
ok
This text shit is beyond you, I ain't leavin til this poser is dead
anyone afflicted w/ that Aero Dynamic- have concepts go right over their head
nah this isnt executed so well here
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good idea cool wp wording was weak and u didnt end the line on the punch
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really dope idea, still a ok line but so much potential. wording was soooth tho
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Pissed on his Girl & Mom & as they were

Coated in pee with their face down ass up I was feeling concerned
I had no condom & the golden arches assured over 1 billion were served
trash
Know what rhymes with Habitat? Fag attack. I don't wonder at all
I'm fucking waitRESSES, he likes D on waiters no Thunder involved
trash
After I do a show chicks race to my dressing room hot & bothered
You had a girl rush backstage when Maury revealed you are not the father
lol ok
My crew is legit, I don't care if you roll deep boyyyy you is a bitch
Of course you got niggas down to ride they're using you for the whip
ehh but ok I guess its not trash
"Where's the dough?!" squeeze cans for green's what Popeyes about
Hab's like Popeye too, way he starts talking when the pipes in his mouth
wording is ass concept is fire

Aero won by KO with the Maury line. Really only thing way above par in this battle. Alot of good ideas not really fleshed out on both sides. Habitat could of easily won this cuz Aero didnt bring anything good.
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This is war, on some 300 shit I'ma leave him bloodied and pulped
If I'm bringin an army, that's a Roman Charge.. This faggot can't even call a buddy for help
lil forced, decent
This text shit is beyond you, I ain't leavin til this poser is dead
anyone afflicted w/ that Aero Dynamic- have concepts go right over their head
decent at best
My shit is Godly, ur shit is shoddy... it's no fable u're a half wit
Appraisal never make it's way to you unless God himself labels you a faggot
decent, could have ended it better
Dawg I heard u were Asian, with a sideways vagina tho
So if you ever clean my clock- That's a Maid in China joke
lol made me laugh, ok
A cup half empty kinda guy w/ one foot in the grave, now u have to die
If the grass seems greener on the other side, it's because ya Pasture Prime
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Pissed on his Girl & Mom & as they were

Coated in pee with their face down ass up I was feeling concerned
I had no condom & the golden arches assured over 1 billion were served
wtf no bro
Know what rhymes with Habitat? Fag attack. I don't wonder at all
I'm fucking waitRESSES, he likes D on waiters no Thunder involved
this is such a reach, credit for dion waiters but still
After I do a show chicks race to my dressing room hot & bothered
You had a girl rush backstage when Maury revealed you are not the father
lol alright
My crew is legit, I don't care if you roll deep boyyyy you is a bitch
Of course you got niggas down to ride they're using you for the whip
alright
"Where's the dough?!" squeeze cans for green's what Popeyes about
Hab's like Popeye too, way he starts talking when the pipes in his mouth
lmfao

Aeros first half of his verse really pissed me off but he finished fair. Habitat had a lot of decent shit but nothing really quotable. Aero wins this.

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Nice opener wordplay was decent
2nd bar nice nameplay flip
3rd bar had the direction of wordplay just didnt like how u ended the finisher
4th bar lmfao creative awesome personal flip
Closer wordplay is,played

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Wth was the opener didnt feel like a directed hit at opponent seemed statementish
2nd bar hella reach on wordplay
3rd bar lmfao nice flip
4th bar lmao again dope flip
Funny closer too

Damn aero started off shaky af then just finished it with 3 hilarious bars saved his ass. Hab had a good opener aero dynamic and the maid in china bar was funny af. Tied in concepts but i gotta give it to the one with humor factor.

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Old 04-16-2016, 02:21 AM   #11
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Ehhh. Overall I just felt like the majority of habitats concepts seem stale. The Aero dynamic name play seems like the obvious route and has to have been done alot on him. Pasture/past your has BEEN played out. Appraisal wp are old even though this was worded decent. Wasn't feeling the maid in china bar or the opener. I'm sorry but this verse is a no for me dog.

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Maury bar y'all. Dat maury bar.

..the follow-up made me laugh too no bs. Idk, simple but effective.

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Know what rhymes with Habitat? Fag attack. I don't wonder at all
I'm fucking waitRESSES, he likes D on waiters no Thunder involved

a bad verse against a light verse, this was truly a easy call here. v/Aero
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