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Old 04-11-2016, 03:05 PM   #1
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Old 04-11-2016, 03:12 PM   #2
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Old 04-11-2016, 05:18 PM   #3
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Cash.

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Old 04-13-2016, 01:29 AM   #4
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Old 04-14-2016, 09:33 AM   #5
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100 rounds letting off for 60 seconds before this nigga get slayed
Blood looking like spilled juice everywhere! That's what the Minute Maid
U look like a junkie that does meth so stop all the shenanigans
Judging by ur face that Chyna got the best of you.. Rob Kardashian
Catch 'em at the crib & blow his brains all inside of the place
Hipster ear ring replacement how I put that gage to the side of his face
Stop acting like a stoner. I'm rollin' pounds, blunts of loud stay stuffed
U ain't blowin O's. Smoke only comes out that way cus ur lips are fucked up
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Old 04-14-2016, 10:43 AM   #6
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Cred got the corner on lock? nah my Cowboys a give u a run for ya cash, geek
the way ill have a Dez runnin routes on u, u'll start havin flashbacks of last week
Girls hate u with a passion, they've spent their whole lives dodgin' you
face it dude, u were never able to put a dent in the pink like it was majin buu
This geeks the softest in the chi, if he hears shots he'll just jet
we all knw ur not the shooter, wenevr u Trigun u jus whip out the collection set
Ur car foreign? Bitch foreign? It ain't nun for me to dismantle you two
stuff you and ur hoe in the back of my Chevy, nigga that's domestic abuse
You barely made it past HS. ur whole life u've been fiendin' progression
boy I'm not the Sharpest of minds but I still came to ur class to teach u a lesson

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Old 04-15-2016, 12:21 AM   #7
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C:

100 rounds letting off for 60 seconds before this nigga get slayed
Blood looking like spilled juice everywhere! That's what the Minute Maid
multi off, and concept ok but ehhh
U look like a junkie that does meth so stop all the shenanigans
Judging by ur face that Chyna got the best of you.. Rob Kardashian
lol ok
Catch 'em at the crib & blow his brains all inside of the place
Hipster ear ring replacement how I put that gage to the side of his face
nah fam
Stop acting like a stoner. I'm rollin' pounds, blunts of loud stay stuffed
U ain't blowin O's. Smoke only comes out that way cus ur lips are fucked up
ha aiiiiiiiiight
The chopper'll have u learning how to walk again. Click n squeeze'n
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coool



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Cred got the corner on lock? nah my Cowboys a give u a run for ya cash, geek
the way ill have a Dez runnin routes on u, u'll start havin flashbacks of last week
hmmm a bit wordy but not bad
Girls hate u with a passion, they've spent their whole lives dodgin' you
face it dude, u were never able to put a dent in the pink like it was majin buu
ok
This geeks the softest in the chi, if he hears shots he'll just jet
we all knw ur not the shooter, wenevr u Trigun u jus whip out the collection set
yooo stop with anime references lol
Ur car foreign? Bitch foreign? It ain't nun for me to dismantle you two
stuff you and ur hoe in the back of my Chevy, nigga that's domestic abuse
I get it but no
You barely made it past HS. ur whole life u've been fiendin' progression
boy I'm not the Sharpest of minds but I still came to ur class to teach u a lesson
fienden progression ? lol and no to the punch


I liked both verses even though my comments show otherwise . I'll go with Cred here though.. Yea, verse was cleaner. Dez line was nice though


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Old 04-16-2016, 12:45 AM   #8
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Wears majin buu bar was the botb for me but overall cred got this with better wording and a few less misses. The kardashian bar was creative and connected well, closer was a nice concept but could've been better if worded differently. And like I said wear had the buu bar which was dope to me, and the opener was oook. Wasn't really feeling the rest.

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Old 04-16-2016, 06:35 PM   #9
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Rob K, gage face, smoke o's & closer.
Nice joint, wouldn't have cited the entire verse, except your opener reminds me of an old URL punchline, other than that good shit, bro.

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Opener & majin buu.
Idk bruh, u started out well, but the rest of that verse were just mediocre concepts.

Overall CRED comfortably.
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Old 04-17-2016, 11:45 AM   #10
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Catch 'em at the crib & blow his brains all inside of the place
Hipster ear ring replacement how I put that gage to the side of his face

The chopper'll have u learning how to walk again. Click n squeeze'n
This Rocket Power have u reliving ur childhood for a WHOLE different reason

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Cred got the corner on lock? nah my Cowboys a give u a run for ya cash, geek
the way ill have a Dez runnin routes on u, u'll start havin flashbacks of last week
Girls hate u with a passion, they've spent their whole lives dodgin' you
face it dude, u were never able to put a dent in the pink like it was majin buu

closer to me than the votes are showing, but I got cred edging this slightly. his lines i didn't quote were stronger than wear shhh's lines that i didn't quote. Although I thought the domestic abuse line had potential, rhyme scheme just didn't work for me (dismantle you two/domestic abuse).

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Old 04-17-2016, 11:55 AM   #11
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U look like a junkie that does meth so stop all the shenanigans
Judging by ur face that Chyna got the best of you.. Rob Kardashian
Catch 'em at the crib & blow his brains all inside of the place
Hipster ear ring replacement how I put that gage to the side of his face
The chopper'll have u learning how to walk again. Click n squeeze'n
This Rocket Power have u reliving ur childhood for a WHOLE different reason


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Cred got the corner on lock? nah my Cowboys a give u a run for ya cash, geek
the way ill have a Dez runnin routes on u, u'll start havin flashbacks of last week
Ur car foreign? Bitch foreign? It ain't nun for me to dismantle you two
stuff you and ur hoe in the back of my Chevy, nigga that's domestic abuse


got Cred here.
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Old 04-17-2016, 12:45 PM   #12
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Cred got it off a few more bars I liked.. Zelph had majin buu bar, but more eh lines..

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