Lotto Smirk vs Cable - LOTTO WINS

Orc · 03-20-2016, 02:30 PM

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Lotto Smirk · 03-21-2016, 07:21 AM

I'm good for 10

Cable · 03-22-2016, 01:42 PM

here and 10 is good

Lotto Smirk · 03-24-2016, 07:54 PM

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels

Over

Cable · 03-25-2016, 04:35 AM

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie

JShazo · 03-25-2016, 10:06 AM

Giving it to lotto,, better bars, punches hit harder imo

Schadenfreude · 03-25-2016, 04:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Opener, Neat Sparkys & colostomy bag.

Decent drop, overdosed on the name plays, had some nice hits, nonetheless.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cable

Opener, famine & closer.

Good showing (ducked me tho..lol), the one major problem was the lack of personals.

Overall this was pretty close imo, could go either way, but I give the slight edge to CABLE, due to the fresher use of concepts, otherwise this was extremely even.

e11even · 03-25-2016, 05:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
eh
play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
nah
trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
so-so, wording is eh
hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
I like this one
u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels
harsh, but could be worded a lil better

Over

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cable

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
lol, cool self name flip
kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
wording in setup is bad, nice punch though
the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
nah... wording was a stretch
spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
another stretch, but ok
ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie
lol, nice finisher

close battle, but I've seen better from lotto for sure. MVGT Cable for the edge.

SHECK WES · 03-25-2016, 05:54 PM

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
decent
play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
decent, could have been a lot better
trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
i liked this
hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
alright
u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels
could have been fire if u twerked ur setup a little, but not bad

vs

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
alright
kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
famine wp had to tie-in, hurt the punch. Just random wp smh
the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
nah lol
spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
this one was better, cool
ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie
alright

Ok ok ok, lotto was consistent in his verse with some mediocre lines and some cool ones. Cable had the harder hitting ones but more misses because of the random wp being used to make a punch. I ranked all of lottos lines at least decent or better where cable had the couple of bad ones I wasn't into. Therefore I'm going wit lotto

Vote Lotto

Saitama · 03-27-2016, 03:48 PM

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
^ 50 shades reference seen alit over the months, so push..

play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
Not bad, nothing crazy

trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
Feels used..

hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
Simple wording but effective

u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels
Ok.

Originally Posted by Cable

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
Aight not bad, cool self flip

kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
^ played and flip was eh

the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
Not a fan of single O nameflips, the concept I would've scrapped tbh
Bcuz its indirect ' O feel ya'

spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
wording issue but ok

ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie
lotb. this was cool.

Hard call. Cable had my fave line but more misses, while lotto had more ok lines..
I went lotto, then re read and cables wording overall helped his wp, imo..

Slight edge to Cable, vote - Cable

Wanderer · 03-27-2016, 04:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
Ok
play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
Dunno who/what neat sparkys is.
trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
Feels likes it's gotta been done but I liked it
hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
Not feeling
u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels
One of the better Brussels lines. Nothing amazing

Over

Vs

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cable

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
Self hype kinda bar, using your own name for wordplay, not a fan
kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
Not really feeling
the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
Nah
spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
[B]Nah.. Overdosing on the word plays now too/B]
ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie
Not terrible

Vote - Lotto, dude takes this for me.

jilti · 03-27-2016, 08:02 PM

no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades
no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades
^no
play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job
^lol
trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag
so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag
^fire
hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later
Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker
^liked this
u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels
blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels
^cool

Vs.

i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions
once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection
^more swag & flowish
kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked
stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death
^above average
the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid
if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch
^stretch
spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak
have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets
^cool
ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi
that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie
^nah

Vote- lotto

Toil · 03-28-2016, 07:47 AM

Lotto: 50 shades, colostomy bag, RCD breaker
Cable: famine and tunic were both decent wordplays but would've been better if they worked with ways.

Vote= Lotto

03-20-2016, 02:30 PM	#1
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	Lotto Smirk vs Cable - LOTTO WINS NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Cable @Lotto Smirk

03-24-2016, 07:54 PM	#4
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665830	no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels Over Last edited by Lotto Smirk; 03-24-2016 at 08:11 PM.

03-21-2016, 07:21 AM	#2
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665830	I'm good for 10

03-22-2016, 01:42 PM	#3
Cable armed and dangerous Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 15 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	here and 10 is good

03-25-2016, 04:35 AM	#5
Cable armed and dangerous Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 15 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie

03-25-2016, 10:06 AM	#6
JShazo Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 5-8 Rep Power: 11889025	Giving it to lotto,, better bars, punches hit harder imo

03-25-2016, 05:54 PM	#9
SHECK WES Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 690 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 4173629	no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades decent play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job decent, could have been a lot better trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag i liked this hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker alright u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels could have been fire if u twerked ur setup a little, but not bad vs i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection alright kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death famine wp had to tie-in, hurt the punch. Just random wp smh the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch nah lol spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets this one was better, cool ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie alright Ok ok ok, lotto was consistent in his verse with some mediocre lines and some cool ones. Cable had the harder hitting ones but more misses because of the random wp being used to make a punch. I ranked all of lottos lines at least decent or better where cable had the couple of bad ones I wasn't into. Therefore I'm going wit lotto Vote Lotto

03-27-2016, 03:48 PM	#10
Saitama One-Punch Man Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 118 Rep Power: 5936473	Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades ^ 50 shades reference seen alit over the months, so push.. play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job Not bad, nothing crazy trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag Feels used.. hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker Simple wording but effective u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels Ok. Originally Posted by Cable i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection Aight not bad, cool self flip kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death ^ played and flip was eh the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch Not a fan of single O nameflips, the concept I would've scrapped tbh Bcuz its indirect ' O feel ya' spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets wording issue but ok ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie lotb. this was cool. Hard call. Cable had my fave line but more misses, while lotto had more ok lines.. I went lotto, then re read and cables wording overall helped his wp, imo.. Slight edge to Cable, vote - Cable

03-27-2016, 08:02 PM	#12
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	no1 wanna read ya shit even ya slut know we on different grades no1 interested in a cable tie Cept the bitch when we acting out 50 shades ^no play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job ^lol trust i ain't miss when this shotty blast shots at this fag so when I dump from the hip he'll be left needing more than a colostomy bag ^fire hit u up fast ..... then I'm comin for ya fam later Any connections to cable'll get cut like a blowout on an rcd breaker ^liked this u go on a run, nah I'll end it quick ya fam gon need they shovels blast u away before u taking flight like the latest attack in Brussels ^cool Vs. i stay destroyin ur girls pussy, doin long sessions once cable splitter open she marvels at my dick's strong connection ^more swag & flowish kidnap n torcher ur bloodline, there scar'd an wrecked stomp everyone of ur famine the jaw then let'em starve to death ^above average the mags hypin u up...burd just likes hoes, i aint frontin kid if ophelia its cause everything about u reminds him of a fuckin bitch ^stretch spayin 3 shots from the beretta, this faggots weak have tunic ur face & one in the skull then u'll be left wrapped in sheets ^cool ya cribs filled wit guys 24/7, he aint smashin a coochi that 'sausage party' got more fruits then the whole cast of the movie ^nah Vote- lotto

03-28-2016, 07:47 AM	#13
Toil Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 137 Battle Record: 5-1 Rep Power: 2785771	Lotto: 50 shades, colostomy bag, RCD breaker Cable: famine and tunic were both decent wordplays but would've been better if they worked with ways. Vote= Lotto