Cred vs Wanderer - CRED WINS

Orc · 02-13-2016, 07:01 AM

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Cred · 02-13-2016, 07:46 PM

Cash.

Wanderer · 02-13-2016, 08:45 PM

How many ?

Wanderer · 02-16-2016, 07:25 AM

12.

Computer geeks get cut up for frontin'. you ain't get a chance to drop well
so many slashes before you start a word.. bitch shoulda just stuck to HTML
& I ain't wanna be near you duke, no lie. It's no secret you're a fruity guy
you're uncreative & you've hit a Wall.. but we can keep that between you and I
Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous
but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous
I never dug your writtens, you should just quit, dude needs his hands tied
been recycling the same shit for years, you're basically EA Sports with the FIFA franchise
Valentine's approaching but you choke with the broads like text when push come to shove
so when you have symptoms of dizziness & shortness of breath it won't be from falling in love
& You favouritin' the mag? admin are at best mistaken
get a bullet when I raise arms to express myself, you're only capable of gesticulation

Cred · 02-17-2016, 10:19 PM

dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy
i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby
chrome 380, stop askin Cred wen will dem gun bars stop
double barrel ring 2 times over ur head like an old school alarm clock
treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps
cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump
u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless
u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid
n ur girl got crabs, jus thinkin bout it shud make ya head explode
dat nasty bitch is more itchy & scratchy then a Simpsons episode
i'm dumpin fours, a couple shells leave dis sucka floored
jus kno wen these 2 rounds lift u off da ground it ain't a hoverboard

drill season.

Saint · 02-18-2016, 12:47 AM

Damn. I had a whole breakdown but phone died, lol.

Basically.. I gave it to cred, he had a couple cool hits and his wording was more fluid.. thought he cooled down abd that simpson line was pkayed lol, but he did enough...Wanderer was way too wordy and long winded - it took away from the punch. But even just looking at the punches behind it all - thought ur closer was the best. Things like falling in love and wall between were super light to me.. even though u coulve worked them into better hits..

I got v- cred

10 Senses · 02-18-2016, 04:03 PM

Not feel'n Wanderer.
I like the 380 chrome.
Cred for the win...

Hush · 02-18-2016, 08:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wanderer

12.

Computer geeks get cut up for frontin'. you ain't get a chance to drop well
so many slashes before you start a word.. bitch shoulda just stuck to HTML
Nice
& I ain't wanna be near you duke, no lie. It's no secret you're a fruity guy
you're uncreative & you've hit a Wall.. but we can keep that between you and I
Ehhh
Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous
but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous
Nice
I never dug your writtens, you should just quit, dude needs his hands tied
been recycling the same shit for years, you're basically EA Sports with the FIFA franchise
Nah
Valentine's approaching but you choke with the broads like text when push come to shove
so when you have symptoms of dizziness & shortness of breath it won't be from falling in love
So so it's aight but not hard hitting good concept
& You favouritin' the mag? admin are at best mistaken
get a bullet when I raise arms to express myself, you're only capable of gesticulation
First half of the punch was fire but what the fuck is grstulation lol

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred

dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy
i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby
Fire
chrome 380, stop askin Cred wen will dem gun bars stop
double barrel ring 2 times over ur head like an old school alarm clock
Eh this light
treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps
cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump
Naw
u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless
u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid
Fire
n ur girl got crabs, jus thinkin bout it shud make ya head explode
dat nasty bitch is more itchy & scratchy then a Simpsons episode
Nice could of been fire with diff wording
i'm dumpin fours, a couple shells leave dis sucka floored
jus kno wen these 2 rounds lift u off da ground it ain't a hover board
Dope
drill season.

Wand had some ok shit but corny stuff and some wording issues
Cried was more consistent and had 2 real heavy bangers

V cred

Fracture · 02-18-2016, 11:55 PM

Cred wins

Better wording....

e11even · 02-19-2016, 05:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wanderer

12.

Computer geeks get cut up for frontin'. you ain't get a chance to drop well
so many slashes before you start a word.. bitch shoulda just stuck to HTML
nice
& I ain't wanna be near you duke, no lie. It's no secret you're a fruity guy
you're uncreative & you've hit a Wall.. but we can keep that between you and I
so-so
Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous
but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous
lol
I never dug your writtens, you should just quit, dude needs his hands tied
been recycling the same shit for years, you're basically EA Sports with the FIFA franchise
eh
Valentine's approaching but you choke with the broads like text when push come to shove
so when you have symptoms of dizziness & shortness of breath it won't be from falling in love
coulda been better
& You favouritin' the mag? admin are at best mistaken
get a bullet when I raise arms to express myself, you're only capable of gesticulation
decent, not a great finisher

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred

dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy
i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby
lol
chrome 380, stop askin Cred wen will dem gun bars stop
double barrel ring 2 times over ur head like an old school alarm clock
so-so
treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps
cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump
lol
u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless
u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid
dope
n ur girl got crabs, jus thinkin bout it shud make ya head explode
dat nasty bitch is more itchy & scratchy then a Simpsons episode
lol
i'm dumpin fours, a couple shells leave dis sucka floored
jus kno wen these 2 rounds lift u off da ground it ain't a hoverboard
nice, used 2 twice though.
drill season.

kinda close battle here, but more punches fell in cred's favor. MVGT cred

King · 02-19-2016, 10:58 AM

Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous
but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous

vs

dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy
i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby
treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps
cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump
u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless
u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid

Not really as lopsided as the quotes would make it seem. Wan, u had some real good ideas but ur wording is just too choppy. Like ur trying to cram too much into one bar. Cred had a pretty consistent verse. Donald Trump = LOTB. Shit killed me haha

vote-Cred

Allen Knight · 02-19-2016, 04:55 PM

Computer geeks get cut up for frontin'. you ain't get a chance to drop well
so many slashes before you start a word.. bitch shoulda just stuck to HTML
^^^nah seen to many html lines & this wasnt flipped in a fresh way
& I ain't wanna be near you duke, no lie. It's no secret you're a fruity guy
you're uncreative & you've hit a Wall.. but we can keep that between you and I
^^^nah corny
Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous
but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous
^^^Nice
I never dug your writtens, you should just quit, dude needs his hands tied
been recycling the same shit for years, you're basically EA Sports with the FIFA franchise
^^^nah worded weak no impact
Valentine's approaching but you choke with the broads like text when push come to shove
so when you have symptoms of dizziness & shortness of breath it won't be from falling in love
^^^concept is good coulda been worded better but overall a cool bar
& You favouritin' the mag? admin are at best mistaken
get a bullet when I raise arms to express myself, you're only capable of gesticulation
^^^no way lol

Vs

dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy
i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby
^^^Cool opener
chrome 380, stop askin Cred wen will dem gun bars stop
double barrel ring 2 times over ur head like an old school alarm clock
^^^nah
treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps
cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump
^^^dopee
u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless
u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid
^^^fire
n ur girl got crabs, jus thinkin bout it shud make ya head explode
dat nasty bitch is more itchy & scratchy then a Simpsons episode
^^^nah played seen this alot & it wasnt flipped fresh
i'm dumpin fours, a couple shells leave dis sucka floored
jus kno wen these 2 rounds lift u off da ground it ain't a hoverboard
^^^good closer

V/cred, not a bad battle here ,wan has concepts but his
wording is not there yet its to choppy, work on that read ol battles but that bad patch bar was nice.
Creds elevator bar was lotb an fire. props to both.

02-13-2016, 07:01 AM	#1
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	Cred vs Wanderer - CRED WINS NBL Season 9 Due TUESDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls

02-18-2016, 12:47 AM	#6
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,227 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	Damn. I had a whole breakdown but phone died, lol. Basically.. I gave it to cred, he had a couple cool hits and his wording was more fluid.. thought he cooled down abd that simpson line was pkayed lol, but he did enough...Wanderer was way too wordy and long winded - it took away from the punch. But even just looking at the punches behind it all - thought ur closer was the best. Things like falling in love and wall between were super light to me.. even though u coulve worked them into better hits.. I got v- cred Last edited by Saint; 02-18-2016 at 02:53 AM.

02-18-2016, 04:03 PM	#7
10 Senses Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2016 Location: 5th Dimension Posts: 101 Rep Power: 292594	Not feel'n Wanderer. I like the 380 chrome. Cred for the win... __________________

02-19-2016, 04:55 PM	#12
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,168 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Computer geeks get cut up for frontin'. you ain't get a chance to drop well so many slashes before you start a word.. bitch shoulda just stuck to HTML ^^^nah seen to many html lines & this wasnt flipped in a fresh way & I ain't wanna be near you duke, no lie. It's no secret you're a fruity guy you're uncreative & you've hit a Wall.. but we can keep that between you and I ^^^nah corny Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous ^^^Nice I never dug your writtens, you should just quit, dude needs his hands tied been recycling the same shit for years, you're basically EA Sports with the FIFA franchise ^^^nah worded weak no impact Valentine's approaching but you choke with the broads like text when push come to shove so when you have symptoms of dizziness & shortness of breath it won't be from falling in love ^^^concept is good coulda been worded better but overall a cool bar & You favouritin' the mag? admin are at best mistaken get a bullet when I raise arms to express myself, you're only capable of gesticulation ^^^no way lol Vs dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby ^^^Cool opener chrome 380, stop askin Cred wen will dem gun bars stop double barrel ring 2 times over ur head like an old school alarm clock ^^^nah treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump ^^^dopee u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid ^^^fire n ur girl got crabs, jus thinkin bout it shud make ya head explode dat nasty bitch is more itchy & scratchy then a Simpsons episode ^^^nah played seen this alot & it wasnt flipped fresh i'm dumpin fours, a couple shells leave dis sucka floored jus kno wen these 2 rounds lift u off da ground it ain't a hoverboard ^^^good closer V/cred, not a bad battle here ,wan has concepts but his wording is not there yet its to choppy, work on that read ol battles but that bad patch bar was nice. Creds elevator bar was lotb an fire. props to both. __________________ C.O.B

02-13-2016, 07:46 PM	#2
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Cash.

02-13-2016, 08:45 PM	#3
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 587 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457538	How many ?

02-16-2016, 07:25 AM	#4
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 587 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457538	12. Computer geeks get cut up for frontin'. you ain't get a chance to drop well so many slashes before you start a word.. bitch shoulda just stuck to HTML & I ain't wanna be near you duke, no lie. It's no secret you're a fruity guy you're uncreative & you've hit a Wall.. but we can keep that between you and I Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous I never dug your writtens, you should just quit, dude needs his hands tied been recycling the same shit for years, you're basically EA Sports with the FIFA franchise Valentine's approaching but you choke with the broads like text when push come to shove so when you have symptoms of dizziness & shortness of breath it won't be from falling in love & You favouritin' the mag? admin are at best mistaken get a bullet when I raise arms to express myself, you're only capable of gesticulation

02-17-2016, 10:19 PM	#5
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby chrome 380, stop askin Cred wen will dem gun bars stop double barrel ring 2 times over ur head like an old school alarm clock treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid n ur girl got crabs, jus thinkin bout it shud make ya head explode dat nasty bitch is more itchy & scratchy then a Simpsons episode i'm dumpin fours, a couple shells leave dis sucka floored jus kno wen these 2 rounds lift u off da ground it ain't a hoverboard drill season.

02-18-2016, 11:55 PM	#9
Fracture Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 1,120 Battle Record: 9-2 Rep Power: 10222950	Cred wins Better wording....

02-19-2016, 10:58 AM	#11
King Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 253 Battle Record: 6-10 Rep Power: 1112902	Srs your recent verses been stale & I don't wanna seem over-zealous but you're going through such a bad patch even the one on your chin's gettin jealous vs dnt get shady, put the chopper to ur infant cus u know i'm crazy i'll have his head hanging from this arm like idk how to hold a baby treat'em like a Mexican, dis cartel murder leave mre den alotta bumps cus i'm bout to fuck Wan's life up as if our nxt president was Donald Trump u outta luck, i'll send u up to heavens gates i'm ruthless u'll get the box with the soft tunes but it ain't a elevator stupid Not really as lopsided as the quotes would make it seem. Wan, u had some real good ideas but ur wording is just too choppy. Like ur trying to cram too much into one bar. Cred had a pretty consistent verse. Donald Trump = LOTB. Shit killed me haha vote-Cred