WEEK 13 SIGN-UPS / SIGN-OUTS!!! - Page 3

2tripple0 · 10-17-2015, 07:51 AM

lol im just finished with this whole winning/losing thing...... I think i'd rather just drop in cyphers or places where it doesn't matter who is better than the other........or just voting in general I mean I haven't picked up one vote whatsoever in this league besides like one week where frank voted for me but probably because he felt bad for me.......so yeah im finished with competitive writing for a while at least

sral · 10-17-2015, 09:50 AM

2trip is staying in a week
Flo Real is out

NYCSPITZ vs Dancake GRUDGE MATCH!

sral · 10-17-2015, 09:52 AM

Nameflip
Innovator
Soulstice
Half Wit It - all new sign ins

CopyPat is being kept in despite his NS last week

sral · 10-17-2015, 09:53 AM

Exits, The Law and Asylum are all in too!

JUST TRYNA MAKE IT EASIER FOR ADONIS WHEN THREADS GO UP!

Frank · 10-17-2015, 10:45 AM

Direct new sign ups to the Championship match.

And do not close it til at least 5 of the new sign ups have voted

Frank · 10-17-2015, 10:50 AM

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Originally Posted by 2tripple0

lol im just finished with this whole winning/losing thing...... I think i'd rather just drop in cyphers or places where it doesn't matter who is better than the other........or just voting in general I mean I haven't picked up one vote whatsoever in this league besides like one week where frank voted for me but probably because he felt bad for me.......so yeah im finished with competitive writing for a while at least

I'm going to mentor you on your next verse. Expect a PM from me when the new threads go up.

Keep 2triple0 signed in

Adonis · 10-17-2015, 12:43 PM

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Originally Posted by sraL

Exits, The Law and Asylum are all in too!

JUST TRYNA MAKE IT EASIER FOR ADONIS WHEN THREADS GO UP!

Why is Flo real out? He showed and never signed out?

Adonis · 10-17-2015, 12:45 PM

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Originally Posted by 2tripple0

lol im just finished with this whole winning/losing thing...... I think i'd rather just drop in cyphers or places where it doesn't matter who is better than the other........or just voting in general I mean I haven't picked up one vote whatsoever in this league besides like one week where frank voted for me but probably because he felt bad for me.......so yeah im finished with competitive writing for a while at least

your choice if you want to sign out

Let me know as soon as possible if so. But we love having you here man. Just gotta remove yourself from the votes and keep plugging away. Don't be discouraged my man. I started something like 3-15 with three wins being no-show victories before I started picking up random wins here and there.

Razah · 10-17-2015, 01:20 PM

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Originally Posted by 2tripple0

lol im just finished with this whole winning/losing thing...... I think i'd rather just drop in cyphers or places where it doesn't matter who is better than the other........or just voting in general I mean I haven't picked up one vote whatsoever in this league besides like one week where frank voted for me but probably because he felt bad for me.......so yeah im finished with competitive writing for a while at least

I noticed a lot of your verses are kind of long.

My thing with that is, it feels like you having a hard time putting together a whole concept & staying within that concept. So, how about you try writing a short verse, and mastering being on topic?

One step at a time. That's what I did years ago. One verse I would try to write to that idea. Another verse I'd work on the flow of it.
Another would be the rhyme schemes, being descriptive/imagery, etc...

10-17-2015, 07:51 AM	#41
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	lol im just finished with this whole winning/losing thing...... I think i'd rather just drop in cyphers or places where it doesn't matter who is better than the other........or just voting in general I mean I haven't picked up one vote whatsoever in this league besides like one week where frank voted for me but probably because he felt bad for me.......so yeah im finished with competitive writing for a while at least __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

10-17-2015, 09:50 AM	#42
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,263 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	2trip is staying in a week Flo Real is out NYCSPITZ vs Dancake GRUDGE MATCH! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

10-17-2015, 09:52 AM	#43
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,263 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	Nameflip Innovator Soulstice Half Wit It - all new sign ins CopyPat is being kept in despite his NS last week __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

10-17-2015, 09:53 AM	#44
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,263 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	Exits, The Law and Asylum are all in too! JUST TRYNA MAKE IT EASIER FOR ADONIS WHEN THREADS GO UP! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

10-17-2015, 10:45 AM	#45
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	Direct new sign ups to the Championship match. And do not close it til at least 5 of the new sign ups have voted __________________ *VETWORK*