08-11-2015, 07:13 PM | #1 |
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4. Junto vs 5. (R) Orc - JUNTO WINS
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08-12-2015, 06:42 AM | #2 |
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08-12-2015, 06:27 PM | #3 |
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nah let's save that for next time...
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08-12-2015, 07:02 PM | #4 |
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08-20-2015, 05:34 AM | #5 |
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yo...
I won't get you first, I'll kill your loved ones - Yea I got 'problems up there' Cut ur head off a few wks later... & put that on ur mothers grave like its a promise or swear If u wanna keep thinkin that ur a stud fine, to me you're a punchline I do see you as a sex symbol... but it's the pink one that's pointin down wit a + sign Buckshot to ya legs then head, Watch the blood spill & laugh at the gore Nigga it'll be a 'pool from both ends' like instructions for retractable cords Used to be some Mystique to beatin you - a praised act, and that's a strange fact Cuz now u look like a whole 'nother person bitch... but YOU aint got the powers to change back Why act hood man are u crazy? You didn't grow up rough ur a fan.. a fugazi Your block could put Amen outta work cuz THAT shit sets the Standards for safety I got REAL goons so forget the stuff u tote & just come wit those fuckin jokes Or I'll have 100 after you ... ON EVERYTHING ..... like Unfuk discussion posts |
08-20-2015, 06:25 AM | #6 |
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Cute, but....
First off.. the shots gone explode wen I pop atcha dome; then put Samoan ya wholeee Crew... that's The Rock when he's home Boyyy you'll get offed if u hang, stop... One BANG! & we'll see ya Temple Explode. I ain't talking Bombings in Bangkok &&& I seen u hit up Joe Metts like a true faggot hoe. It's foullll... you been Doing Magnum wayyy before that Zoolander pose U an olddd dude. Been aliased up n' it's a fucking disgrace Ur getting Graze on ya Head. & cops won't identify u due to Cuts on ur Face I'ma hold ya head on the pavement & ask bout what u barking son You'll Spill the Beans on the Ground like a Starbucks Worker with Parkinsons I'll grab a knife & stab it right between his heart n' his neck ^ Trusttt if it's Injun then it's Over... we call that the Alvin Karpis effect Next |
08-20-2015, 08:53 AM | #7 |
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I won't get you first, I'll kill your loved ones - Yea I got 'problems up there'
Cut ur head off a few wks later... & put that on ur mothers grave like its a promise or swear If u wanna keep thinkin that ur a stud fine, to me you're a punchline I do see you as a sex symbol... but it's the pink one that's pointin down wit a + sign Buckshot to ya legs then head, Watch the blood spill & laugh at the gore Nigga it'll be a 'pool from both ends' like instructions for retractable cords Why act hood man are u crazy? You didn't grow up rough ur a fan.. a fugazi Your block could put Amen outta work cuz THAT shit sets the Standards for safety Vs &&& I seen u hit up Joe Metts like a true faggot hoe. It's foullll... you been Doing Magnum wayyy before that Zoolander pose I'ma hold ya head on the pavement & ask bout what u barking son You'll Spill the Beans on the Ground like a Starbucks Worker with Parkinsons I'll grab a knife & stab it right between his heart n' his neck ^ Trusttt if it's Injun then it's Over... we call that the Alvin Karpis effect Another nice battle here. Both had sum heat. Jun bodied sum shit here tho imo. I fucked wit his bars heavy. Orcs set ups lacked here which lead to bars not being executed to there full potential n i really wasnt feeling the lines i didn't quote. Jun came wit consistent heat, n tbh his fuckin wording is on point. Jun took this one here. Vote - Junto Last edited by Cred; 08-20-2015 at 09:19 AM. |
08-20-2015, 11:29 AM | #8 |
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won't get you first, I'll kill your loved ones - Yea I got 'problems up there'
Cut ur head off a few wks later... & put that on ur mothers grave like its a promise or swear If u wanna keep thinkin that ur a stud fine, to me you're a punchline I do see you as a sex symbol... but it's the pink one that's pointin down wit a + sign Buckshot to ya legs then head, Watch the blood spill & laugh at the gore Nigga it'll be a 'pool from both ends' like instructions for retractable cords I got REAL goons so forget the stuff u tote & just come wit those fuckin jokes Or I'll have 100 after you ... ON EVERYTHING ..... like Unfuk discussion posts Vs. First off.. the shots gone explode wen I pop atcha dome; then put Samoan ya wholeee Crew... that's The Rock when he's home &&& I seen u hit up Joe Metts like a true faggot hoe. It's foullll... you been Doing Magnum wayyy before that Zoolander pose I'ma hold ya head on the pavement & ask bout what u barking son You'll Spill the Beans on the Ground like a Starbucks Worker with Parkinsons I'll grab a knife & stab it right between his heart n' his neck ^ Trusttt if it's Injun then it's Over... we call that the Alvin Karpis effect Overall: this battle close af n I been going back n forth on it. First read thru I thought orc got it but now I think I only said that cuz that closer is dope. I got the quotes even, and the nonquotes are bout even too imo. I think the problem is I wasn't feeling juns last two n orcs were dope. But the verses as a whole I was feeling junto more. He went hard af on some bars and didn't have any true misses, even the lines I didn't quote were nice, really.. Whereas I wasn't feeling one of orcs misses at all. And the other one was mediocre. So yea I guess I lied earlier, the nonquotes werent even. V. Junto |
08-20-2015, 06:19 PM | #9 |
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I won't get you first, I'll kill your loved ones - Yea I got 'problems up there'
Cut ur head off a few wks later... & put that on ur mothers grave like its a promise or swear Nice If u wanna keep thinkin that ur a stud fine, to me you're a punchline I do see you as a sex symbol... but it's the pink one that's pointin down wit a + sign Yep Buckshot to ya legs then head, Watch the blood spill & laugh at the gore Nigga it'll be a 'pool from both ends' like instructions for retractable cords You snappin Used to be some Mystique to beatin you - a praised act, and that's a strange fact Cuz now u look like a whole 'nother person bitch... but YOU aint got the powers to change back Ha Why act hood man are u crazy? You didn't grow up rough ur a fan.. a fugazi Your block could put Amen outta work cuz THAT shit sets the Standards for safety Lol I got REAL goons so forget the stuff u tote & just come wit those fuckin jokes Or I'll have 100 after you ... ON EVERYTHING ..... like Unfuk discussion posts Solid First off.. the shots gone explode wen I pop atcha dome; then put Samoan ya wholeee Crew... that's The Rock when he's home Could have used a better tie in Boyyy you'll get offed if u hang, stop... One BANG! & we'll see ya Temple Explode. I ain't talking Bombings in Bangkok Okay &&& I seen u hit up Joe Metts like a true faggot hoe. It's foullll... you been Doing Magnum wayyy before that Zoolander pose Eh U an olddd dude. Been aliased up n' it's a fucking disgrace Ur getting Graze on ya Head. & cops won't identify u due to Cuts on ur Face This is cool I'ma hold ya head on the pavement & ask bout what u barking son You'll Spill the Beans on the Ground like a Starbucks Worker with Parkinsons Nooo i thought we all agreed to not do 2002 punchlines anymore I'll grab a knife & stab it right between his heart n' his neck ^ Trusttt if it's Injun then it's Over... we call that the Alvin Karpis effect Sickkkk That injun line was flames. Junti got this though. This was dope. V junto |
08-20-2015, 10:39 PM | #10 |
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Did not like Junto's opener but after that it got good. Some quality disses/shit-talking.. effective rhyming. it fits&flows. with amusing battle content
thought the +sign line rhymed nicely Used to be some Mystique to beatin you - a praised act, and that's a strange fact Cuz now u look like a whole 'nother person bitch... but YOU aint got the powers to change back Why act hood man are u crazy? You didn't grow up rough ur a fan.. a fugazi Your block could put Amen outta work cuz THAT shit sets the Standards for safety junto's straightforward and "said more", i thought V/ Junto Orc's- i like the zoolander line, but it felt like work in order to get there.. i did not like the opener in this verse either; thought the first few lines could have been stronger... props tho on the complex multiies and rhymes 'specially toward the end. I'll grab a knife & stab it right between his heart n' his neck This has good internal rhyme to start, and then also a good rhyme-setup for the punchline to follow but i think junto's was more effective overall |
08-21-2015, 12:03 AM | #11 |
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I won't get you first, I'll kill your loved ones - Yea I got 'problems up there'
Cut ur head off a few wks later... & put that on ur mothers grave like its a promise or swear If u wanna keep thinkin that ur a stud fine, to me you're a punchline I do see you as a sex symbol... but it's the pink one that's pointin down wit a + sign Buckshot to ya legs then head, Watch the blood spill & laugh at the gore Nigga it'll be a 'pool from both ends' like instructions for retractable cords I got REAL goons so forget the stuff u tote & just come wit those fuckin jokes Or I'll have 100 after you ... ON EVERYTHING ..... like Unfuk discussion posts vs. First off.. the shots gone explode wen I pop atcha dome; then put Samoan ya wholeee Crew... that's The Rock when he's home &&& I seen u hit up Joe Metts like a true faggot hoe. It's foullll... you been Doing Magnum wayyy before that Zoolander pose I'll grab a knife & stab it right between his heart n' his neck ^ Trusttt if it's Injun then it's Over... we call that the Alvin Karpis effect One just came with it here the other had proper shit but it wasn't as strong and wasnt as creative, good read here but I gotta v/ Junto
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08-21-2015, 07:39 AM | #12 |
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Junto:
I won't get you first, I'll kill your loved ones - Yea I got 'problems up there' Cut ur head off a few wks later... & put that on ur mothers grave like its a promise or swear Why act hood man are u crazy? You didn't grow up rough ur a fan.. a fugazi Your block could put Amen outta work cuz THAT shit sets the Standards for safety I got REAL goons so forget the stuff u tote & just come wit those fuckin jokes Or I'll have 100 after you ... ON EVERYTHING ..... like Unfuk discussion posts That 'pool from both ends' shit was HIDEOUS, down there with field of ponds as some of the utmost worst forced shit i've come across recently. Really bad. The rest was cool, though, even if the sex symbol shit was worded superbad. It wasn't a bad verse, just felt you could do more with it vs someone like Orc. Orc: First off.. the shots gone explode wen I pop atcha dome; then put Samoan ya wholeee Crew... that's The Rock when he's home I'll grab a knife & stab it right between his heart n' his neck ^ Trusttt if it's Injun then it's Over... we call that the Alvin Karpis effect The opener was pretty nice, closer too though maybe a little dated now considering that shit was relevant in NC.1. Parkinsons is old as hell. Graze was worded terrible, so easy to telegraph what was coming and when it did it wasn't even all that great of a line anyway. Lol. Bangkok ish did nothing for me either. I've got Junto winning by a quote. Both had some wild misses for sure, though... |
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