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LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
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I'm from the.. land that time had forgot to remember
so.. grab a vine, and come watch as we enter swinging from the placenta of a dead buffalo like 'whats your agenda?" as i step from the smoke quintessentially dope with the keys at the tips got that effortless flow, my whole demeanor is sick team of the quickest writers ever seen on the net we seasoned at this, faggot. you can keep your respect we dont need it unless you forgot who we are cause shiiiiiitttttttttt.... were weaving a web of words like Charlotte did ahahahaha
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LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
Join Date: Aug 2014
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Battle Record: 28-3
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I got bars to spit, better just run from the slaughter
as they're like an armoured Chimera coming toward ya if theres blood in the water, I'm Jaws with its teeth out go for the juggular always then i'm hauling you deep down to the murkiest depths next to davey Jones' locker no search party rescue could save this show stopper i break your bones from the limb, muscle and sinew take it home as a gift the minute blood has been in view the fun just continues, i'm a beast as big as Meg w/ eyes looking to bring you as a feast of bitten flesh the evilness inherent in my cold eyes as i stare you'll see it in the end, when you've no time to prepare i'll fly through the air like Megashark with that 747 one bite and you'll barely survive to mek the call brethren...
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The deputy of nc
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In sensing a hint of irony
I gots to flat out sprint for my money I gotta bargain with the supplier Tweaking wagers for something thats popular I invest on my treatment And I know its corny but I'm casting a beach tent So i can continue to spread out my towel Bbecause this oval office is seeking economic growth approval The list goes on and on flows come and go so pursue one and two I'm advancing in technology..the last topic finite Readers always dramatize like someone about to shoplift with knives Last edited by ribbit; 06-30-2015 at 07:28 AM. |
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LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
Join Date: Aug 2014
Location: CRUMPETVILLE
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Battle Record: 28-3
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- Topical Martyrs
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Legends talk wreckless but lose to me often
El as authentic as the most ruthless of bosses choosing to cross this? i dont play nice dummies you'll get a cross-stitch to the face like Chucky's aint life funny? my every fucking breath is legit i'll make like Bundy and keep ya bitch head in the fridge steady your lip before you run it too close to me or have it shredded with scissors on dat Cutting Moments steez i'm known to keep an axe by the door, thats why nobody even comes to my flat here no more lol
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The deputy of nc
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I'll blend in with societies criminals at large
I put together charts like college basketball games in march Call ya tactics clever whatever b You could be wimbledon ya still ain't gonna serve me like wetherbys And I'm banking on you follying up That's why forenzicks down the river bank where ya body got dropped Yeah I wouldn't startle this guy And ya rhymes are comic I have to laugh when I marvle his rhymes Ending it gonna go strong Wish u all the best like the champ about to say so long
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nok Su kow
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Pasteurized the protons. Darling. My doll thing.
the reasons why my aww's gleam heel click the frost clean out your Oz theme I draw bridges from a draw string carve niches in a star scene were all raw meat worrying about laundry instead of the heart beats that we're haunting Gucci suits and spooky boos This the bird chirp of a Cuckoo flute the string cheese to your strudel poops
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The Clown Prince
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get laced for kicks, the usual loop
hits shatter the side, the brutal truth witness what your a student to something I use as amusement, true.. but sometimes I abuse it to choke it until its no longer loose and use let that shit dig in like a pooper scoop
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ev-Got the Newest news. you've all improved. thismorning when my alarm went off i kept on hitting.
snooze. i been atta line a little lately. some times i think i ave the mind of a little baby. so the rhyming i do[,]is kind of a little crazy. but I hang In there- i'm a Champ like Bailey. Daily i look to absorb ThC.. in my lung-lining- hastily! .. don't Waste n.E. ! ...and don't get caught and have to Pay Some Fees. unless you're in the 4 States- that they made it be. all Out now- perhaps i should CryMy eyes out now. ..but I Don't Know. i've got some notes, but-it's a "no-go". i will really have ta get back on. fah sho'. |
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The Clown Prince
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Echoes of silence overcome my temples, my eyelids...
drip like the ink from the pen, eventual blindness... I think I'm at the end, but that stepping I'll find it. send it 5 cents & inflate the fuck outta the prices... I'm the pie hit, the force of a Jackass hi five skit I'm boredom, I'm boardin', I'm waitin' on a portion... debating on importance, forming a reinforcement literary swords smith in the dungeon of the cerebral cortex i spit in the vortex as it hits you at 4 dimensions I'm at the door with henchmen, 5 elves, 7 dwarves make entrance I don't know what else to say...the warm ups ended...
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The deputy of nc
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I'm devestating
Nate Dogg and warren g must b regulating There ain't no excuses Everthing I do amuses I'm not perpetrating My lines like independance y'all be celebrating Take a breath Its time to bake the bread reclaim that depth Its my personal belief No vocal tone chief keep collosal relief My writing is pinnacle Each binge rattles I'll have dying from west nile Not practicle Its a sabbaticle Keep my relativity Einstein redeems his activity I've forgotten how This devotion found a cotton shroud I'm beyond his greatest expectations Like Jane Eyre this a best selling arrangement Take two and pass Arrange flows in cash Blaze dope and hash In consideration My liver patient its a rivers flagrance
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The Clown Prince
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I trained the strain to change
made the base by saving grace I'm... Amazing, thanks! Blaze a page Embrace the flame it really is a change of pace Pride bottled while the case is made More twist than fate embraced get to the point til the blade will break put your heart in a vacant place then make it change its shape
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LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
Join Date: Aug 2014
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Razor blades and lines of coke helped shape the way my mind was blown.
I'd shave an eighth. Shy the load. Break the base up, fry your nose. White as snow but not as pure. They'd buy in loads and wanted more. The finest coke we'd got in store.
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The Clown Prince
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I let my showcase hog the floor while the thoughts ignored
inhale the toxic spore, lock the door Let the heat reign like a tropic storm attack you bitches at the hottest source take a slice of the pie, the thought will form The heir will slip & get gnawed .. Iron sword
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Fire stokin, hot to scorch. My rhymes are molten lava form. Lines are golden, top the board. Your style is low on awesome.. snore. Supply is slow for proper molded rhymes, your flow’s on life support. My style’s a whole a concoction sorta vile and mostly rotten. Hoards of grimy old forgotten corpses winding through my haunted verses. I’m blinding through your optic cortex. Climb into your logic snort a line and do a mind distortion. I’m flying through with flying colors. Your rhymes are too confined, conformist. My style is huge, a wide performance. Your style is cute and tiny, Novice… I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean. You don’t wanna see what this honkey mean, get some gonorrhea. And a nauseous feeling, catch the hottest fever. Catch an honest beating when you tangle with the boss of lyrics. Drop repulsive music, I’m a compulsive human. And I’m compelled to send to hell all of you shoddy losers. The fuckin shotty shooter. The fuckin party pooper. You duckin cars, my Ruger bust apart consumers. Put a damper on your mood like if you watchin news clips. And then you watch my uz clips. And then I watch the ooze drip. The fuckin boss of cool shit. Fuck Bronson music. The only one with action is the CopyPoo biissssssshhhh
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this beat isn't a high
but it makes me feel alive- i'm having problems as an artist but at least i always try what's the problum?- i can solve it ..and If i cannot solve it?- have the moderator called in the operation's stalled- n it happens always\often. and other rappers soft n n yada yada yada i'm the best&all that nonsense. maybe if i invested in my projects i'd see progress. maybe when i wake up someday i'll rap like fucking onyx. maybe i'll scrub my Prose.. Clean it Up with Comet- i don't even wanna profit cuz maybe something's there. even though i fucking lost it. i jus need some rope- ta tie tagether- all my tropes and one can only hope. to escape VictimHood. ..i look towards robin hood but 'e told me i was not very good.. victim of my One liners- they never run outof mileage they always keep me smiling- but a song is not inside them a bong is quite inspiring- but it burns me- and it's fiery. i've learnedthings in the "Limegreen" it hurts me that i'm grimy. ...maybe i can change. but still, here?, my main concern, is my game.. so i wait. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 07-06-2015 at 03:50 AM. |
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The Clown Prince
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Got my pen in hand, I'm kidding I'm in the chemists lab, making a feminist laugh over your feminine ass, if they send a jab I put a end to that, push em' over the edge where the ledge ends at, you'll hear a big bang, your spectrum collapsed, so until I jest the fact, how you add em' family? where's Uncle Fester at? I'm bendin' back til' my tendons snaps & my legs elapse to extend your grasp...while you scramble over cliff notes looking for bridge quotes, that's it though, I'm at your chest, Kali Maaaa, treatin' your heart like a game of volleyball & that's the folly y'all, I'll end the route & put the gun to my head...temple of doom, I resemble a noose while I weave the end into loops, extend the use, project a muse to affectionate use, then reduce sentimental value, as it cycles in I just peddle through, the joy resembles youth, a mind without proper mental use, & I was just being gentle to...
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The Clown Prince
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the confidence of consequence & common sense
an alarmin' threat, bombin' heads, see the smoke? watch it spread, stalk the breath to the coffin bed jargon stressed, a walker's end, keep the roll... the fondness left, model depth from bobble-heads cautioned steps are not impressed, defeats the goal augment death with a awkward set of improper bets rot the flesh with a shot instead & seize control offered best before the thought connects, call it fresh peep the hole as it deepens though, polished head
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The Clown Prince
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matrimony, pass the chrome heat, clap your homey
blastin' low heat, caption those knees, what's happenin' pony riiiiide out, the barrels sliiiiide out, is this what they rhyme bout? you can find out my clout will ice down when your sides out but right now...this just a warm up, no J Cole this isn't work, especially with no payload in your X box, no angels & no haaaaaloooooo's a crazed soul who don't take no as an answer.. if you say so, I'm giddy & I'm playful... I haven't taken a moment to correct the game.. YO! this session is over, obsession & closure depression & Oprah, with a collection of rollers another burned thought thanks for the perm job hanging out the window as we start to swerve off
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The deputy of nc
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So u a killah?
Keep reminding me of a farce either way it ain't no guerilla I'm something tight ur not u a fresh dyke U picking up girls pff they all like maybe next time And this a text site ur repulsive I'm loading programs ur uncle spit a full clip but it didn't have bullets Ya a hick n please get this whore help U joined a crew just to insure you'd receive more reps Guessing game? Not when your terrible and ya text is lame Want more? I rattle dicks like u He like I felt this attraction just didn't want to picture u I'm laughing so hard this retard You really outrageous now..cuz everyone knows ur chances fat before ya even start
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The Clown Prince
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Boredom is the source of torture
Hi, I'm QwarterZ this is the quota you'll end up iced on a coaster I'm itchy, you scratchy, you over I'm Atlas if you act any bolder.. still itchy, hand sittin' by the holster jumpy dog? over here you'll be red rover james bond with a decoder broke down the system. start over. you write tight? no bruh.. road kill, your sentences run over so obvious, the bars are a closer compete with ether & PETA your pen hot, I've got the fever Excalibur, machete, meat cleaver King......Killer.....Beef eater...
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