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Old 06-29-2015, 06:44 AM   #1
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I'm from the.. land that time had forgot to remember
so.. grab a vine, and come watch as we enter
swinging from the placenta of a dead buffalo
like 'whats your agenda?" as i step from the smoke
quintessentially dope with the keys at the tips
got that effortless flow, my whole demeanor is sick
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we seasoned at this, faggot. you can keep your respect
we dont need it unless you forgot who we are cause shiiiiiitttttttttt....
were weaving a web of words like Charlotte did ahahahaha
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Old 06-29-2015, 10:58 AM   #2
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I got bars to spit, better just run from the slaughter
as they're like an armoured Chimera coming toward ya
if theres blood in the water, I'm Jaws with its teeth out
go for the juggular always then i'm hauling you deep down
to the murkiest depths next to davey Jones' locker
no search party rescue could save this show stopper
i break your bones from the limb, muscle and sinew
take it home as a gift the minute blood has been in view
the fun just continues, i'm a beast as big as Meg
w/ eyes looking to bring you as a feast of bitten flesh
the evilness inherent in my cold eyes as i stare
you'll see it in the end, when you've no time to prepare
i'll fly through the air like Megashark with that 747
one bite and you'll barely survive to mek the call brethren...
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In sensing a hint of irony
I gots to flat out sprint for my money
I gotta bargain with the supplier
Tweaking wagers for something thats popular
I invest on my treatment
And I know its corny but I'm casting a beach tent
So i can continue to spread out my towel
Bbecause this oval office is seeking economic growth approval
The list goes on and on
flows come and go so pursue one and two
I'm advancing in technology..the last topic finite
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Old 06-30-2015, 07:15 AM   #4
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Legends talk wreckless but lose to me often
El as authentic as the most ruthless of bosses
choosing to cross this? i dont play nice dummies
you'll get a cross-stitch to the face like Chucky's
aint life funny? my every fucking breath is legit
i'll make like Bundy and keep ya bitch head in the fridge
steady your lip before you run it too close to me
or have it shredded with scissors on dat Cutting Moments steez
i'm known to keep an axe by the door,
thats why nobody even comes to my flat here no more lol
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Old 06-30-2015, 08:12 AM   #5
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I'll blend in with societies criminals at large
I put together charts like college basketball games in march
Call ya tactics clever whatever b
You could be wimbledon ya still ain't gonna serve me like wetherbys
And I'm banking on you follying up
That's why forenzicks down the river bank where ya body got dropped
Yeah I wouldn't startle this guy
And ya rhymes are comic I have to laugh when I marvle his rhymes
Ending it gonna go strong
Wish u all the best like the champ about to say so long
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Old 06-30-2015, 10:00 AM   #6
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Pasteurized the protons. Darling. My doll thing.
the reasons why my aww's gleam
heel click the frost clean out your Oz theme
I draw bridges from a draw string
carve niches in a star scene
were all raw meat worrying about laundry
instead of the heart beats that we're haunting
Gucci suits and spooky boos
This the bird chirp of a Cuckoo flute
the string cheese to your strudel poops
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Old 06-30-2015, 01:59 PM   #7
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get laced for kicks, the usual loop
hits shatter the side, the brutal truth
witness what your a student to
something I use as amusement, true..
but sometimes I abuse it to
choke it until its no longer loose and use
let that shit dig in like a pooper scoop
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ev-Got the Newest news. you've all improved. thismorning when my alarm went off i kept on hitting.
snooze.
i been atta line a little lately. some times i think i ave the mind of a little baby.
so the rhyming i do[,]is kind of a little crazy.
but I hang In there- i'm a Champ like Bailey.
Daily i look to absorb ThC.. in my lung-lining- hastily!
.. don't Waste n.E. !
...and don't get caught and have to Pay Some Fees.
unless you're in the 4 States- that they made it be.

all Out now- perhaps i should CryMy eyes out now.
..but I Don't Know.
i've got some notes, but-it's a "no-go".
i will really have ta get back on. fah sho'.
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Old 07-04-2015, 01:30 AM   #9
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Echoes of silence overcome my temples, my eyelids...
drip like the ink from the pen, eventual blindness...
I think I'm at the end, but that stepping I'll find it.
send it 5 cents & inflate the fuck outta the prices...
I'm the pie hit, the force of a Jackass hi five skit
I'm boredom, I'm boardin', I'm waitin' on a portion...
debating on importance, forming a reinforcement
literary swords smith in the dungeon of the cerebral cortex
i spit in the vortex as it hits you at 4 dimensions
I'm at the door with henchmen, 5 elves, 7 dwarves make entrance
I don't know what else to say...the warm ups ended...
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I'm devestating
Nate Dogg and warren g must b regulating
There ain't no excuses
Everthing I do amuses
I'm not perpetrating
My lines like independance y'all be celebrating
Take a breath
Its time to bake the bread reclaim that depth
Its my personal belief
No vocal tone chief keep collosal relief
My writing is pinnacle
Each binge rattles I'll have dying from west nile
Not practicle
Its a sabbaticle
Keep my relativity
Einstein redeems his activity
I've forgotten how
This devotion found a cotton shroud
I'm beyond his greatest expectations
Like Jane Eyre this a best selling arrangement
Take two and pass
Arrange flows in cash
Blaze dope and hash
In consideration
My liver patient its a rivers flagrance
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Old 07-05-2015, 03:25 PM   #11
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I trained the strain to change
made the base by saving grace
I'm...
Amazing, thanks! Blaze a page
Embrace the flame
it really is a change of pace
Pride bottled while the case is made
More twist than fate embraced
get to the point til the blade will break
put your heart in a vacant place
then make it change its shape
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Razor blades and lines of coke helped shape the way my mind was blown.
I'd shave an eighth.
Shy the load.
Break the base up, fry your nose.
White as snow but not as pure.
They'd buy in loads and wanted more.
The finest coke we'd got in store.
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I let my showcase hog the floor while the thoughts ignored
inhale the toxic spore, lock the door
Let the heat reign like a tropic storm
attack you bitches at the hottest source
take a slice of the pie, the thought will form
The heir will slip & get gnawed ..
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Fire stokin, hot to scorch. My rhymes are molten lava form. Lines are golden, top the board. Your style is low on awesome.. snore. Supply is slow for proper molded rhymes, your flow’s on life support. My style’s a whole a concoction sorta vile and mostly rotten. Hoards of grimy old forgotten corpses winding through my haunted verses. I’m blinding through your optic cortex. Climb into your logic snort a line and do a mind distortion. I’m flying through with flying colors. Your rhymes are too confined, conformist. My style is huge, a wide performance. Your style is cute and tiny, Novice… I Supply the booth with surprise anomalies and spit violent loops of rhyme atrocities. The tiger tooth bite philosophy like lions do with high ferocity. CAUSE RAPPERS GET ATE. Dined and chewed like fine gastronomy, when I handle this plate you guys are food and I’m the jaw that feeds. Word to my momma, I’m outta my lima bean. You don’t wanna see what this honkey mean, get some gonorrhea. And a nauseous feeling, catch the hottest fever. Catch an honest beating when you tangle with the boss of lyrics. Drop repulsive music, I’m a compulsive human. And I’m compelled to send to hell all of you shoddy losers. The fuckin shotty shooter. The fuckin party pooper. You duckin cars, my Ruger bust apart consumers. Put a damper on your mood like if you watchin news clips. And then you watch my uz clips. And then I watch the ooze drip. The fuckin boss of cool shit. Fuck Bronson music. The only one with action is the CopyPoo biissssssshhhh
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this beat isn't a high
but it makes me feel alive- i'm having problems as an artist
but at least i always try
what's the problum?- i can solve it
..and If i cannot solve it?- have the moderator called in
the operation's stalled- n it happens always\often.
and other rappers soft n
n yada yada yada i'm the best&all that nonsense.
maybe if i invested in my projects i'd see progress.
maybe when i wake up someday i'll rap like fucking onyx.
maybe i'll scrub my Prose..
Clean it Up with Comet- i don't even wanna profit
cuz maybe something's there. even though i fucking lost it.

i jus need some rope- ta tie tagether- all my tropes
and one can only hope.
to escape VictimHood.
..i look towards robin hood but 'e told me i was not very good..

victim of my One liners- they never run outof mileage
they always keep me smiling- but a song is not inside them
a bong is quite inspiring- but it burns me- and it's fiery.
i've learnedthings in the "Limegreen"
it hurts me that i'm grimy.
...maybe i can change. but still, here?, my main concern, is my game.. so i wait.

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Got my pen in hand, I'm kidding I'm in the chemists lab, making a feminist laugh over your feminine ass, if they send a jab I put a end to that, push em' over the edge where the ledge ends at, you'll hear a big bang, your spectrum collapsed, so until I jest the fact, how you add em' family? where's Uncle Fester at? I'm bendin' back til' my tendons snaps & my legs elapse to extend your grasp...while you scramble over cliff notes looking for bridge quotes, that's it though, I'm at your chest, Kali Maaaa, treatin' your heart like a game of volleyball & that's the folly y'all, I'll end the route & put the gun to my head...temple of doom, I resemble a noose while I weave the end into loops, extend the use, project a muse to affectionate use, then reduce sentimental value, as it cycles in I just peddle through, the joy resembles youth, a mind without proper mental use, & I was just being gentle to...
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the confidence of consequence & common sense
an alarmin' threat, bombin' heads, see the smoke?
watch it spread, stalk the breath to the coffin bed
jargon stressed, a walker's end, keep the roll...
the fondness left, model depth from bobble-heads
cautioned steps are not impressed, defeats the goal
augment death with a awkward set of improper bets
rot the flesh with a shot instead & seize control
offered best before the thought connects, call it fresh
peep the hole as it deepens though, polished head
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matrimony, pass the chrome heat, clap your homey
blastin' low heat, caption those knees, what's happenin' pony
riiiiide out, the barrels sliiiiide out, is this what they rhyme bout?
you can find out my clout will ice down when your sides out
but right now...this just a warm up, no J Cole
this isn't work, especially with no payload
in your X box, no angels & no haaaaaloooooo's
a crazed soul who don't take no as an answer..
if you say so, I'm giddy & I'm playful...
I haven't taken a moment to correct the game..
YO! this session is over, obsession & closure
depression & Oprah, with a collection of rollers
another burned thought thanks for the perm job
hanging out the window as we start to swerve off
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So u a killah?
Keep reminding me of a farce either way it ain't no guerilla
I'm something tight ur not u a fresh dyke
U picking up girls pff they all like maybe next time
And this a text site ur repulsive
I'm loading programs ur uncle spit a full clip but it didn't have bullets
Ya a hick n please get this whore help
U joined a crew just to insure you'd receive more reps
Guessing game?
Not when your terrible and ya text is lame
Want more? I rattle dicks like u
He like I felt this attraction just didn't want to picture u
I'm laughing so hard this retard
You really outrageous now..cuz everyone knows ur chances fat before ya even start
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Boredom is the source of torture
Hi, I'm QwarterZ this is the quota
you'll end up iced on a coaster
I'm itchy, you scratchy, you over
I'm Atlas if you act any bolder..
still itchy, hand sittin' by the holster
jumpy dog? over here you'll be red rover
james bond with a decoder
broke down the system. start over.
you write tight? no bruh..
road kill, your sentences run over
so obvious, the bars are a closer
compete with ether & PETA
your pen hot, I've got the fever
Excalibur, machete, meat cleaver
King......Killer.....Beef eater...
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