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Old 04-20-2015, 04:04 PM   #1
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Come get your thoughts forced
huge dick to leave your thighs sore
I'm piss poor shooting out poor piss
one more to feel whole I'm on 4 5ths
shittin' on your shit..
laughing like you know how good I could be
rubbers with traction, my good years your good week
I'm everything that you wish you would need
a good high, a pair of pliers & a keyboard
when they down I'm up it's like a see saw
you prolly on a ranch in a barn tryna get a pig off
me I'm chillin' with chicks like Ariana Grande, I'm big Sean
no..not Big Sean I meant Puffy the dude who put BIG on
suckers
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Old 04-20-2015, 04:04 PM   #2
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Peep me on this metaphorical landscape .fuckers
Reporting live to get 8, dressed like Tom Tucker
your writing must be Aussie how its gone under
The way you pawn suckers for more jaw rubbers
dental dams and lawn covers, I'm all brawn brother
Elbow drop Randy Savage..Legs drop Hulk Hogan
I hate cheesy writers...word
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i'm sniffing the flowers /the sour disel smells like arm pits working out for hours with no deorderant on them/ so many plants where in the house, u could smell it for miles, that's the only reason that they caught him/

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Are you one of those pseudo-religious weirdo's?
Hiding their libido because you see it evil
God's true preacher speaks of God alone, not insignificant theories
Ipse dixit ignorance proposed by sacrilegious heroes;
Akira like entities seeking to be the syndicate's regal
Changing those you loved, I won't name the specific people
But, let it be known they were convinced to be belligerent heathens
The sweet girl who baked you pies does so now for sycophant reasons
The pain of betrayal is like being stabbed with infinite needles
So, I detach and play the fool,
To escape the civilian killer, the mass villain, Jack the Ripper
There's nothing I can do, but laugh at mirrors
Downplay what I see as nothing but a trap of ego.
Feebleness is not weakness, that's a militant figure
Created by pontificate sinners who take the life of innocent creatures
Their love for gorilla warfare inspires the most intricate killings.
This century has inspired more sophisticated Hitler's,
With an innovated meaning for their existence.
The future's uncertainty is the reason for Morpheus resistance
I'm just a vehicle for glorious subsistence,
Spawned out of meritorious persistence.
It seems to me as we grow up, we grow numb
And I 'm not just referring to coke sluts dancing in a cold club
Stripping away not just not their clothes, but their soul's love.
As an idealistic boy, full of bliss and joy, life's given point
I told myself I wouldn't fall victim to this world's indifference
What most of us take as our identity is but a birth certificate
Amalgamation of papers with absurd significance
Emcee, warn the Jesuit missionaries here come the military
And I don't know what they're coming for, the system scary
For no one knows what it carries,
It might be a conduit for biological warfare.
Viruses that will live forever with you, like a conjugal nightmare.
I used to chill in Hawaii until they started dropping tropical bombs there
Combat has lost its humanity, it's become all software
Reduced to aiming a cursor, and then suddenly boom, they curse you.
I know too much, I've surfed through the internet's darkest places
And I found nothing but parts and traces of a heartless matrix.
We're in multiple stages right now, phase 2 and 3 of the unsacred.
Qi stasis... Thankfully, the Buddha' s wisdom is in his earlobes
Always present, never to suffer the sickness caused by dinero. $

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Old 04-22-2015, 03:35 PM   #5
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I thought I told em' to watch it, told 'em to be careful..
it was a wrap like a pharaoh til' the curses circulate your marrow
double down on bullets come and get your share hold
better work on your jumpin & duckin' & keep dodgin' these barrels
theres something thats living inside of that scarecrow
watching them sleep & eat waiting to devour whats left of their soul..
creaks in the basement, knocks on the door, no ones there though..
a howl at the moon and a whistle next to your earlobe
sounding like a whisper by the time you realize the end is here..close
even if William tell he's gonna be catching one of these arrows..
Sagittarian thoughts, armed to the draw, dealing like a tarot
your future is eminent between these sentences
come & meet the Omega before your Genesis
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am aligning the chrome/ for those eyeing the throne. . .so if u claiming hard
beware i put kings under the deck. . .whenever i shuffle playing cards/
and for those haughty cretins/who are actually tourney prepping
they should get their tummy ready/cos one punch. . .land em in birnin kebbi/
i scan your throne/oh! error.. its nat your own/i detach your dome
and if u want revenge . .it shouldnt be . . .like pinging with android phones/
but me dont have that fear/with my cars affairs
cos i have 5 of em. . .plus i have my fare/
ur boo leaving/cos ya due billings/aint up to two shillings
she prefer cruising me. . .cos i stack the paper. . .and u book keeping!/
green on the street. . .every vehicle halt,,
im either a robber in the avenue. . .or im incredible hulk,/
so when am cruising past/i get the cookies bag/that ur boo will grab
then we engage in some loopy act/im static looking at her large bréàsts. . .call it bobby trap!/
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put the dictionary down bruh. you obviously cant pronounce cretin propperly and dont know what your talking about
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Plus it looks like his pussy is popping out..
is that a camel toe? what you talking bout?
walk it out..walk it out..walk it out..
I bet your catching menstrual cramps by now
watch me ride out, crotch shot as she climbs out
we run around with our hands up giving high 5's now
I got my side out like my entree needed a time out
I like to sip on Brandy ever since she said "I'm Down"
took a picture of her after I shaved off her eyebrows
I lol'd and figured I'd rhyme about something different
but I didn't know how to switch it, I'm steadily counting digits
practicing kung fu on a midget, finishing rice in a minute
getting twisted while staring at the stars and their limit
I did it, I did it, shout out to legitimate intimate sentences
I'm with it, I get it, but it ain't making me laugh when they did it
word I'm with it, I get it, but it ain't making me laugh when they did it
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as humans, we've learned to outsource & trade
and fostered codependence til it powered our brains.
I need these gears to turn. need these years to think
and feel the weirdest urge for you to feel the same
& given human nature you'll nod along regardless
like every page you turn belonged to starving artists,
but in the guard of margins we're always writing notes
that we keep to ourselves like it's the only privacy left.
but have you ever read the same novel twice?
what phrases you wrote in a state of unknown
could have made all it right?
instead, my mind collects the most useless scraps
that have no bearing on anyone, in any sense.
on my deathbed, I'll probably sarch for meaning, reflect-
on when we searched for Ted's dog in the Eastside of Cleveland
til the treeline was gone, remodeled by streetlights repeating-
I could read the streetsigns right off with a dreamlike cohesion.
and i'm sure there's significance. i'm sure of it. sure.
when I've burned off the words there'll only be memory left.
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@Pharaohs Army
Glutton, here's a slice of the pumpkin
I'm not judging,
I myself was covered in pride to my stomach, nauseous
Putting a finger in my mouth trying to vomit substance
No resolution made me yelp "why was it I that was punished?"
Then one night I was cunning, by suggesting to the divine a promise
An exchange, the light in my eyes for the peace of mind that I wanted.
The shadows left me, but I became as blind as a bat is
Even though their blindness is a myth,
Yet, unlike the fib that questions if leviathan exists
This is more of a metaphor for the things inside of my mist;
The cloud of consciousness resides in abyss.
We define ourselves through the grime that we're in
I prize not my body, Jungian-like, my shrine for my wit
Mostly because I find the earthly plane a surface pain
Containing only amoebas and viruses of the dormant strain
And let's not forget the protozoa that absorb your brain
Until, we grow so feeble, we can't control our waste
It makes sense because terrestrially we're in the zone of Cain
A cannibalistic paradise, where's Abel's bones, is craved.
That's why I take the holiest blade,
And march into the biggest black hole of space
Where souls collect, FYI my soul is a floral shade.
Brother, I thrived on assumptions
Till' I realized they were contrived without function.
Life is a dungeon with no vine as your plunging
This day has been pungent, it made me cry like an onion
I've sunken low before, but not without a sign of abundance
But this time, I was left to die in the rummage
Destruction is rubbish, I just want to wallow in the sunset
Its fading rays hitting me,
Until what was deemed a hopeless tomorrow is unbecoming
Consider every poet that lived throughout the ages,
And you'll see the poet's love for sorrow is stunning
One has to wonder why our sonnets are even published
We as a people must not be sound creators.
We drown in phrases that expound salvation
But have not found its basic elemental traces
The periodic table of life sometimes professes chemical fables.
Philosopher stone, mother resurrected into a phosphorus clone
Anthropomorphic chimeric form that walks with a monstrous moan
Calling your name in a constant groan
Telling you koans, whose answers are within the Homunculi scroll
Ever since then, we became the best of strangers
Our consciousness clouded in a dance of hellish angels
Perhaps, because we thought we could go after what changes
Yet, we couldn't even capture sensation of one atom creation
The closest we came was a quickly passing indication of a passive animation
I miss the ancient Pangea, where we had one pantheon
Mimicking the one continent, too bad that planet gone.

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Mind's only on the future. That infinity step
This limiting web. See my crypt in each breath
thine grave in every mirror glance
infatuation in how these years dance
have the best time of your life. In that beer can
that never ending wine glass
The most precious flowers? petals tend to die fast
even though it's detrimental, I laugh
time passes. Everything does
its kind of like very grim stuff
heavy wind lung, keeps sails cruising
all this veil spooling, scales grew numb
Rainbows and nude bums
Just drank mold & threw Up
angels are used fucks
so Fuck it. Do it big. Go to town
heaven a place where babies go to float around
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I can tell that you are holding out..
the way your tongue is rolling out, bowling down..
taste buds, taste suds, & then I wake up
draw a smiley face on my forehead, my minds made up
wait up..I swear I left a corpse here
I been digging up so many holes I could start a morgue here
twisted in your words, there must be a mic cord near..
something to strangle & dangle the body
because at this angle it's fatal to stop me
all bets on the table, this is labeled a hobby
the situation is a burden & the wording is gone
the outcome is perfect, & it's curtains for y'all
why is there always a person perching near God
tryna ride a giants shoulder
tryna play the quiet soldier
but nah...nah son that ain't even working..
I'll fuck with your heart & leave your cleavage hurting
prepare for the money shot
straight out the money pot..
they say I'm good, good, good gummy drops
this isn't what anybody wants
but they got it
close down shop cause I cornered the market
grab the blunt and then spark it

you holdin' this shit...but I just sharted
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words keep the stars lit
radiating through nature's carpet
I'll teabag your favorite artist
in rehab with yay & molly, blazing chronic
turning your mom's into Waysaholics
Today's obselete, tomorrow's nothing
sorrow lovely, at the bar, had one drink
think it was filled with urination
wanna kill this pure frustration
drill a weird slut's face in with a Phillips screw driver
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I used to get high off the fumes of new tires..
Eating popcorn, while Creed took you higher..
I was fueled by Sodas the size of KFC buckets
cause when I was at that age I was like fuck it..
I look better and know more than these wack puppets
I could roll pebbles of stone into gold nuggets.
You'd need a Libra scale to do the whole thing justice..
@Wise I ain't seen the moon in a minute..
but this acid reflux makes me look down as I spit it
I think its all just a gimmick to look back in glimpses
Bending into two dimesions, right trigger menace
Tuned in Simpsons, Super NES my 16 bit beckons
my temple seeks malnutrition in the form of sweets
Sitting in a class for the anonymous I'm a former beast..I
I keep the game under lock & key where my quarters be..
keep a noose handy and leave it in my supporters reach
I was on the loose thinking I could give you more of me..
its improbable, Id rather be in mental hospital experiencing lobotomy
if the world showed me hope, I would paint it mahogany
practice monogamy anf recite philosophy perched in Starbucks
Poker face, going gaga with two pair..your cards up..
your skirt too, we should prolly take it to commercial
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my shit converge dull. But peep this purse skull. What's personal?
You ever been cursed bro? Its that worst dope. Its so real
All a dream? Better go feel
Id rather just avoid the whole spiel but go & judge for yourself
Remember, the fall hurts the more upper the shelf
Life can change ever so subtle and stealth
Seems only a couple are left trying like fuck to accept
Trying to get in real close & huddle to death
We're all bound to collect, I'd say atleast a couple of webs
They say every person makes a cute couple with death
Just goes together. Its just so forever. It lasts
Lol. you trying to make a quick splash ? You fucking kiss ass
Everybody's got their shovels ready to dig fast
Cig ash sprinkle. Fuck your big bad single
I could shit in your mouth and make it a sick ass jingle
Fuck it, live in the clouds like chem trails
Outsider trying to get in the town. I don't fret labels
Its all hidden, yet found. We stretch fables
Okay sayt', lets tango
Oh wait. Lol. No thanks. Desert snowflakes
Balance is your passing with separate stones placed
So pumped for What The Fest, about to step in strobe rays
Dubstep & sticks! I've been a pest this whole day
You always wanna get yakked. This That better cocaine
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(as a pharaoh)I'm deader than curt kobain
i am like evil and deadly.and like all those things rappers say
and evil like Bain; and if you pick up the habit an evil like yay.
for me it's hard to find like a needle in hay
J.k.
I create hit singles all the time that score more than Pele'
Hey. Hey.
I don't brandish them but I store A.Ks.
That rhyme is played out and A.Zay so I can Change It
I've got a South park town,it's deranged and amazing. why r you being lazy?
i don't know.
maybe.
there is no catering.
I recently booked a room, at Marriott(,in some other area).
fuck a catering or room service,
we had carryout.
no matter what kind it was it something traditional and great
and we liked it Verymuch.


I'm (still)High. Are my rhymes any better?
My, Are They Ever.
I'm a card-playing master.
I like to play cards faster and make art faster.
cuz like i said,i Make so many singles. and this one just started. actually,
it's a disaster.
Some people use that word too loosely 'n it's a disaster.
i got so many diamond championship rings on my finger.. and Yes that's the last line
until i freshened with pine
this took me too longed and it booked me. I'm booked, "g".
.now lemme have a look see.
whoopsie. compared to your favorite rappers we are all rookies.
you wouldn't believe how long this took me.
actually you would. because it wasn't very short or too long either,so it'd be right.that someone Might be exPecting it took me.
i'm rambling, but don't worry.
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I'm the king of the hill so I sell propane
hang out & drink beer with some no names
post great..my stature needs its own name
here..get my coat hanged and my hat shot
I'M MEANER THAN WHEN YOU WRITE IN CAPSLOCK
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Dont hurry..I got it back on track, the temple of doom
Another hit like this will leave your mental in ruins...
I sent Jesus as a message to humans
To get your burritos, breakfast to noon..
Me...I'll take seconds of two...
both these and one of these to go..
you faggots wore tight jeans long enough...
OF COURSE THERE'S NO ROOM TO GROW
When you sat outside with slinkies & played
I was in your moms house getting pinky & brain
I think he's a slave..to the way the pen rolls..
the page turns. And I'm choking that neck, ho.
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What has made civilization retrograde?
Maybe it's the masochist's quest for pain
Or our obsession with sex with babes
Who maintain their figure through anorexic ways
Because magazines don't glamorize extra belly weight.
Our bodies poisoned through biogenetic grain
Monsanto's trials are a disgrace to the scientific name
Snake oil peddlers making prolific claims.
Evangelists say our destiny is a hellish fate
Could be, because even little kids write texts with hate
"Equality on all levels" is a Proletariat phrase
Not everybody could command a chariot's rein
We're all soaked in various rains
Some more acidic than others, the 1000 myriad things
Everything is a result of change, the mysterious gem
Proposed by Yi Jing, where the variant stems;
Earthly branches and celestial stems are the earliest steps
Toward the calculation of everything in the heavenly realm
Contaminated by our own bodily produced enemy cells.
The quaternary period summarized in our chemical trails
The genesis of the cybernetic means our memory fails
Microchip weaponry signifies our legacy well.
No more vision quests, insight through Ecstacy pills,
Sensual exploration, mental aberation, off centered constellation.
Gut fermentation, malignant cough expectoration,
Such demonstrations obviously interrupt concentration.
What the shamanistic valued is traded for endless valium
Where you see
That we're all individualistic cartoons, sketches of you
Stretching as far and wide as the vacuum of space;
Darkness innate makes even our shadows go faint
Our original personality slain, only our statues remain
Stone marble faces, whose immortality is valued at change
Mere cents, because we've vilified valor mundane.
We've become solutes, and only our particles remain
Dreams of being poet laureates are an arbitral phase
Akin to the flower children radical craze
Yet, in this case, there is no magical cave that the natural gave
Except the intoxicated malaise brought by tabernacle games
Where we lose our aim, in nonrational raves
Become sane, press play on Bach, and others from the classical age.
The name of who we were once--- is trapped in shackled chains
Scattered throughout the six directions of the cardinal plane
Yet, remnants are readily seen in our organelle's shape
Every atom in our body is a worshipful slave,
To the intrinsic order that the oracle made
The spiritual pray, but life itself is already a miracle taste
Unseen, because of the anger boiling in a criminal's veins
Who went the route because no one can live on minimal wage
An unlivable pay, with more dubious uncertainties than Monsanto's clinical case
It's almost a satirical way to send us early on to our mythical grave
Why is it mythical? because the lyrical don't die.
They cause more miracles than the biblical can cite.

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"with increasing amounts of acid rain in parts of the world, granite has begun to supplant marble as a monument material. since it is much more durable"
Marbles are the trippiest toys we Are exposed to as childeren.
let's see how far Away the Galaxy Goes, with an interstellar plane,that warps through Black holes, Safely.
.and then has near-light speed to explore after it made it.
and temperature control.
shields-- and maneuverable. capable.
but no evil artificial intelligence. so it is better than "event horizon"
the film industry teamed with an alien Project. we've now discovered they have better water IONS.
i'll give you over Three hundred reasons,I can flow for Eons..
.it's my only Recourse. my only resource was just doing the legwork, in sneakers.
do you know what the autism and "obeesers" population on Mars would BeAnd?-
-people born with having seizures.
bout the same as Here on earth. can you believe it?
Colonization. ..Musk Said to face it.
meanwhile, the prototype spaceship has all the measurables. but still has trouble with the obstacles that space gives.
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