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Old 07-24-2015, 06:55 PM   #21
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Fick you for this tho
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Old 07-24-2015, 07:06 PM   #22
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Bro u put me in a threeway them give me that topic?


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Old 07-24-2015, 07:11 PM   #23
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I thought that was a great topic.
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Old 07-24-2015, 07:12 PM   #24
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@Dr Dog

we need help deciding this battle between ullr and split 8

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=118666


maybe u want to move it over here til its decided.


I don't think battle heads can give it the feed it deserves.
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Old 07-24-2015, 07:14 PM   #25
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@Innovator @Witty

Can we keep these verses short??

I'm thinking 16-24 bars
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Old 07-24-2015, 07:19 PM   #26
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This is my third 3 way battle in 2 weeks.

Wtf.
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@Razah @Witty

Im going 16
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@Dr Dog any word on what's goin on with Write Week, homey?
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Old 07-24-2015, 08:07 PM   #29
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Yes, feelers on panel votes for Write Week and OM HOF have been 60% sent out, I want to post the mag before I do the last half-ish

Just making sure I'm not asking dead ppl to vote
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Old 07-24-2015, 10:27 PM   #30
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Ribbit (0-1) vs. Mr. J (1-0)

I started reading Ribbit's verse last week. Maybe it's the alcohol, but it seemed a bit eccentric. I'm sure that's accidental. Some of his phrasing is sharp as fuck, actually. If he gave up the schtick and gave a fuck he'd be formidable. Mr. J is a very solid writer who rarely touches rarified air. By volume, he's the greatest topicalist on this version of the site. He sees a mote of dust and finds ten lines for it. I always think his verses are same-ish. It's always the same voice, no matter the subject or approach. I guess that's a lot of writers' problem, on this site. Same for me. But for him it seems pronounced. Still, he's a good, coherent, writer. Ribbit will have an idea or two, punctuated with rhythm, that'll make me smile. Mr. J will write a consist nod.

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UnbornBuddha (0-1) vs. Tyson (1-0)

Tyson isn't great. I never read a Tyson verse and looked for my socks afterwards. They were still there, properly not blown away. Unbornbuddha writes more words per single open mic than I've written since the first day I've been on netcees(.com), including discussion posts. With such volume, he occasionally stumbles on something brilliant. For the most part it's the most verbose point to end point out there. I'd rate him as above average, one 'above' Tyson's perpetual station.

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Innovator (0-1) vs. Razah (1-0) vs. Witty (1-0)

Innovator can write a nice verse. I'd say one out of every six of his verses are very dope. Witty can be a conceptual genius every now and then, and when he isn't he has the writing chops to float an average concept to the good territory. Apparently Razah is good. Between Inno and Witty I'd take

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Old 07-24-2015, 11:41 PM   #31
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Lmfao, goddamn you're shit outta luck @Witty. Innovator can't say shit considering that stuff.
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There's a triple threat and I don't have a battle? What the fuck is going on here?
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I started reading Ribbit's verse last week. Maybe it's the alcohol, but it seemed a bit eccentric. I'm sure that's accidental. Some of his phrasing is sharp as fuck, actually. If he gave up the schtick and gave a fuck he'd be formidable. Mr. J is a very solid writer who rarely touches rarified air. By volume, he's the greatest topicalist on this version of the site. He sees a mote of dust and finds ten lines for it. I always think his verses are same-ish. It's always the same voice, no matter the subject or approach. I guess that's a lot of writers' problem, on this site. Same for me. But for him it seems pronounced. Still, he's a good, coherent, writer. Ribbit will have an idea or two, punctuated with rhythm, that'll make me smile. Mr. J will write a consist nod.

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UnbornBuddha (0-1) vs. Tyson (1-0)

Tyson isn't great. I never read a Tyson verse and looked for my socks afterwards. They were still there, properly not blown away. Unbornbuddha writes more words per single open mic than I've written since the first day I've been on netcees(.com), including discussion posts. With such volume, he occasionally stumbles on something brilliant. For the most part it's the most verbose point to end point out there. I'd rate him as above average, one 'above' Tyson's perpetual station.

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Innovator (0-1) vs. Razah (1-0) vs. Witty (1-0)

Innovator can write a nice verse. I'd say one out of every six of his verses are very dope. Witty can be a conceptual genius every now and then, and when he isn't he has the writing chops to float an average concept to the good territory. Apparently Razah is good. Between Inno and Witty I'd take

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Old 07-25-2015, 01:17 AM   #34
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productive way to get active writers. smh. deuces.
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Old 07-26-2015, 02:01 AM   #37
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so.....we gonna get some votes started or what?
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Lol u a funny brother Mr. J fuck in asks to get verse in early and then requests a longer verse then doesn't drop early and with only eighteen lines lol fucking spine bender homie
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productive way to get active writers. smh. deuces.
shut up idiot. you're stealing people's work and you expect open arms when you slither back a year later.

i think everyone can agree you are not the kind of active writer we want in this league.

stay gone this time.
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Lol u a funny brother Mr. J fuck in asks to get verse in early and then requests a longer verse then doesn't drop early and with only eighteen lines lol fucking spine bender homie
I should be more upset you made me waste a 36 line verse to write you half of that.
I wrote 18 lines in the time it took you to drop in the OM cypher...and you couldnt add 8 lines in that time? Yea thanks
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