King Karaoke 6-0 vs O. Lineman 0-0 {Karaoke wins}

[Hush]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 16th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes

@King Karaoke @O. Lineman

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

In...
16...

Bye...

[O. Lineman]

Ayo.


Look, Outsider is another name for nerd and nerds don't spit fire
N tell ur girl stop tryna recruit me, it feels weird since I'm known to go Insider
N I already beat u once and I'd still beat u at the drop of a dime
after this battle u'll be sour with 2 L's under you, you're basically Lama the Lime
yea I was hot in my prime but don't act like my raps are forgotten
when ur style is basically a time hop to back when I was actually popping
reasons I hate you: thug image, gun gimmick, swears he baller
the only King I condone sitting around and talking about fake shit is Jerry Lawler
yall should just put me in the outsiders. let Metts ride wit the troop
cause who gives a fuck about the Outsiders without Hogan legitimizing the group
this pussy signed out as champ. seen me, his dick got extra hard
I guess he figured this his only chance to get on the return of the legends card


Pz.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

You literally work with retards, I know for a fact that shit doesn't yield chips
You're lame, the only chicks that drool all over u are the ones u take on field trips
I'm on one helluva streak, fat fuck u don't have shot to win
U get mad cuz you're never mentioned, ur an elephant even in the rooms u aren't in
And you're a part time security guard with your shirt buttoned to your second chin
When girls say ur really frisky tonight, ur just making sure they dont sneak a weapon in
You're in front of the club, I'm inside with an entourage like Jeremy Piven
It's ironic that they call us the outsiders when u gotta stand there for a living
Trying to lose weight? just try crack cuz uve been saying feed me more way b4 Ryback
No one reps that dead crew, if u wanna be a Capo so bad Ill leave u like the one Chiraq
Thought I signed back in for some real comp, shit I could've still been the champ today
He's washed up, usually when we see an offensive lineman this bad, it's in Tampa Bay

Bye...

[El Muffin]

COTDAYUM

[El Muffin]

Look, Outsider is another name for nerd and nerds don't spit fire
N tell ur girl stop tryna recruit me, it feels weird since I'm known to go Insider
(I get it but not feeling the concept tbh. the whole insider/outsider flip. I see u with the extra insider entendre tho. itll surely go overlooked. but me personaly? not feelin)
N I already beat u once and I'd still beat u at the drop of a dime
after this battle u'll be sour with 2 L's under you, you're basically Lama the Lime
(mmm k this is the one I skimmed by n straight said cotdamn like tyrone biggums. there will never be a better lama the lime line. this remind me of cred eagle line)
yea I was hot in my prime but don't act like my raps are forgotten
when ur style is basically a time hop to back when I was actually popping
(mmk self glorification. tough. at an impasse with this one shit was smooth in execution but just a bit weak. I still fuck with it tho. Ill give it an avg)
reasons I hate you: thug image, gun gimmick, swears he baller
the only King I condone sitting around and talking about fake shit is Jerry Lawler
(yaaaaaaaaang)
yall should just put me in the outsiders. let Metts ride wit the troop
cause who gives a fuck about the Outsiders without Hogan legitimizing the group
(same as that line I was talm about b4. this is pretty cool to read. more self glorification. but the concept? "let me in ur crew. whats ur crew without me legitimizing the group" blah. but masterfully done for what it is. but blah hit
this pussy signed out as champ. seen me, his dick got extra hard
I guess he figured this his only chance to get on the return of the legends card
(naaaaaaaaaaaah very weak in comparison to ur rest n just lazy )

You literally work with retards, I know for a fact that shit doesn't yield chips
You're lame, the only chicks that drool all over u are the ones u take on field trips
(I like this.)
I'm on one helluva streak, fat fuck u don't have shot to win
U get mad cuz you're never mentioned, ur an elephant even in the rooms u aren't in
(kinda choppy rhyme but this was cool. abv avg)
And you're a part time security guard with your shirt buttoned to your second chin
When girls say ur really frisky tonight, ur just making sure they dont sneak a weapon in
(lol nice)
You're in front of the club, I'm inside with an entourage like Jeremy Piven
It's ironic that they call us the outsiders when u gotta stand there for a living
(simple but worded effectively. good)
Trying to lose weight? just try crack cuz uve been saying feed me more way b4 Ryback
No one reps that dead crew, if u wanna be a Capo so bad Ill leave u like the one Chiraq
("in" chiraq. sok. conceptually I can dig it. but something about it I don't like much. its like ehhhh ok.)
Thought I signed back in for some real comp, shit I could've still been the champ today
He's washed up, usually when we see an offensive lineman this bad, it's in Tampa Bay
(this was ehhh)

fucking close

h/o


mmmk.

heres how I see it. mets strongest were much stronger than kars.

that lama the lime line was nuts and so was king lawler. problem is he had 6 bars I felt were a bit weak coz it was on some self glory shit tbh. specially the closer. tbat was a throwaway

kar came really consistent. with personals. that undoubtedly have been said in some shape or form...but flipped to where the ref was seemingly fresh IN MY EYES

for example the drool one

theres been plently of retard/metts lines but lol that one was worded good and was hilarious

that closer was lazy as fuck tho n str8 doodoo but you were consisteny enouhh to take this

interesting battle. I want to see how the rest see this.

v.kar

[ribbit]

Aye I got kar taking this as well...didn't enjoy linesman as much and his shit just didn't read as easy as kar..aye and kar started to fall off at the end but still had enough to take this battle...

Vote...

Kar

[Amen.]

Look, Outsider is another name for nerd and nerds don't spit fire
N tell ur girl stop tryna recruit me, it feels weird since I'm known to go Insider
N I already beat u once and I'd still beat u at the drop of a dime
after this battle u'll be sour with 2 L's under you, you're basically Lama the Lime
yea I was hot in my prime but don't act like my raps are forgotten
when ur style is basically a time hop to back when I was actually popping
this pussy signed out as champ. seen me, his dick got extra hard
I guess he figured this his only chance to get on the return of the legends card

these hit effectively.

wasn't feelin your WWF or WWE w/e the fuck it's called now and days wrestling references tho. they seemed off and corny to me but quoted bars were nice.

vs


You literally work with retards, I know for a fact that shit doesn't yield chips
You're lame, the only chicks that drool all over u are the ones u take on field trips
And you're a part time security guard with your shirt buttoned to your second chin
When girls say ur really frisky tonight, ur just making sure they dont sneak a weapon in
Trying to lose weight? just try crack cuz uve been saying feed me more way b4 Ryback
No one reps that dead crew, if u wanna be a Capo so bad Ill leave u like the one Chiraq


opener was wicked and a dope personal. think you could have done better on the never mentioned personal, that kind of fell flat for me. outsider play was mild, think I just read a similar concept in the discussions thread orc posted in the crew diss. plus it was kind of basic and simple, feel as if you could have done much better w/ that or should have had a harsher execution. offensive lineman almost got quoted but felt the same about it as the outsiders play but your setup helped it, not by much.

this battle definitely close and for being rusty and not writing in a while (at least on here) I thought metts showed up pretty strong. kind of died out and lost steam at the end but pretty consistent. his wrestling references IMO hurt his verse tho. Kar dropped nice as well, but wasn't feeling his mentioned play, outsider and tampa bay plays because felt his executions were to simple and basic and not harsh enough in which they could have potentially been wicked.

I got Lineman barely edging this

[Netcees Battle League]

Bump.

[Tic]

Originally Posted by O. Lineman

Ayo.


Look, Outsider is another name for nerd and nerds don't spit fire
N tell ur girl stop tryna recruit me, it feels weird since I'm known to go Insider
This was cool.
N I already beat u once and I'd still beat u at the drop of a dime
after this battle u'll be sour with 2 L's under you, you're basically Lama the Lime
This was nice but I think you could've been harsher rather than "you're basically....."
yea I was hot in my prime but don't act like my raps are forgotten
when ur style is basically a time hop to back when I was actually popping
Meh.
reasons I hate you: thug image, gun gimmick, swears he baller
the only King I condone sitting around and talking about fake shit is Jerry Lawler
Dope.
yall should just put me in the outsiders. let Metts ride wit the troop
cause who gives a fuck about the Outsiders without Hogan legitimizing the group
Eh.
this pussy signed out as champ. seen me, his dick got extra hard
I guess he figured this his only chance to get on the return of the legends card
I mean....nah because Kar has been killing it lately.

Pz.

Originally Posted by King Karaoke

Hi...

You literally work with retards, I know for a fact that shit doesn't yield chips
You're lame, the only chicks that drool all over u are the ones u take on field trips
LOTB.
I'm on one helluva streak, fat fuck u don't have shot to win
U get mad cuz you're never mentioned, ur an elephant even in the rooms u aren't in
Lol I liked this flip.
And you're a part time security guard with your shirt buttoned to your second chin
When girls say ur really frisky tonight, ur just making sure they dont sneak a weapon in
This was decent.
You're in front of the club, I'm inside with an entourage like Jeremy Piven
It's ironic that they call us the outsiders when u gotta stand there for a living
Ok, not bad.
Trying to lose weight? just try crack cuz uve been saying feed me more way b4 Ryback
No one reps that dead crew, if u wanna be a Capo so bad Ill leave u like the one Chiraq
Nah.
Thought I signed back in for some real comp, shit I could've still been the champ today
He's washed up, usually when we see an offensive lineman this bad, it's in Tampa Bay
Execution was poor.
Bye...

This was a cool battle. Both had some nice lines and some misses. This was close, but LOTB edged it to Kar for me. Had Joe executed that Lime punch better that could've swayed it the other way, but I got Kar bareeeeeeely.

[Unfukwitable]

N I already beat u once and I'd still beat u at the drop of a dime
after this battle u'll be sour with 2 L's under you, you're basically Lama the Lime
reasons I hate you: thug image, gun gimmick, swears he baller
the only King I condone sitting around and talking about fake shit is Jerry Lawler

vs

You literally work with retards, I know for a fact that shit doesn't yield chips
You're lame, the only chicks that drool all over u are the ones u take on field trips
I'm on one helluva streak, fat fuck u don't have shot to win
U get mad cuz you're never mentioned, ur an elephant even in the rooms u aren't in
Trying to lose weight? just try crack cuz uve been saying feed me more way b4 Ryback
No one reps that dead crew, if u wanna be a Capo so bad Ill leave u like the one Chiraq


This was good but I expected it to be much more flamessss, it came down to the quotes, ones was slightly better and he had an one extra quote... I wish O had more lines that was equal to the Jerry Lawler bar v/Kare

[Cred]

2 L's, Jerry Lawler

Vs

Opener, frisky, outsiders

Cool battle. Honestly expected a wayyy better battle here. OL came short wit execution on his punches. Jus didnt really have that impact. However that jerry lawler shit was nasty. King had his opener & dat shit was fuego. King did come a bit more consistent here, not his best but enough.

Vote/ King Karaoke

[Chyeahhh!!!]

this was a good match, Metts had the cadence of a vet but wasn't striking too hard, some good personals, the outsiders/ insiders line most quoted was agreeably his best bar

Kar had some quotables, hated the Capo bar, field trips was funny. The club sequence was cool

I'm edging to Kar good battle fellas

[Aero]

O


Look, Outsider is another name for nerd and nerds don't spit fire
N tell ur girl stop tryna recruit me, it feels weird since I'm known to go Insider
I chuckled
N I already beat u once and I'd still beat u at the drop of a dime
after this battle u'll be sour with 2 L's under you, you're basically Lama the Lime
lol
yea I was hot in my prime but don't act like my raps are forgotten
when ur style is basically a time hop to back when I was actually popping
aiiiight
reasons I hate you: thug image, gun gimmick, swears he baller
the only King I condone sitting around and talking about fake shit is Jerry Lawler
lol, liked the inner multis too
yall should just put me in the outsiders. let Metts ride wit the troop
cause who gives a fuck about the Outsiders without Hogan legitimizing the group
ok
this pussy signed out as champ. seen me, his dick got extra hard
I guess he figured this his only chance to get on the return of the legends card
cool

Cool verse, not much sting but its a cute verse feel good verse



K


You literally work with retards, I know for a fact that shit doesn't yield chips
You're lame, the only chicks that drool all over u are the ones u take on field trips
lol
I'm on one helluva streak, fat fuck u don't have shot to win
U get mad cuz you're never mentioned, ur an elephant even in the rooms u aren't in
LOL
And you're a part time security guard with your shirt buttoned to your second chin
When girls say ur really frisky tonight, ur just making sure they dont sneak a weapon in
aight
You're in front of the club, I'm inside with an entourage like Jeremy Piven
It's ironic that they call us the outsiders when u gotta stand there for a living
aight
Trying to lose weight? just try crack cuz uve been saying feed me more way b4 Ryback
No one reps that dead crew, if u wanna be a Capo so bad Ill leave u like the one Chiraq
Cop - O, nice concept but I'm sure you could've flipped this way better, added something about being in pool of blood
Thought I signed back in for some real comp, shit I could've still been the champ today
He's washed up, usually when we see an offensive lineman this bad, it's in Tampa Bay
ehhh

Started strong and then lost steam


There's not much animosity here I take it because you both went with lighthearted jokes. This is Mets type of battle. Personals and sting is Karaoke's thing but he didn't really attempt that here.


Vote Olineman

[murda sho]

KK

You literally work with retards, I know for a fact that shit doesn't yield chips
You're lame, the only chicks that drool all over u are the ones u take on field trips

And you're a part time SECURITY guard with your shirt buttoned to your second chin
When girls say ur really frisky tonight, ur just making sure they dont sneak a weapon in
You're in front of the club, I'm inside with an entourage like Jeremy Piven
It's ironic that they call us the outsiders when u gotta stand there for a living


O.L

yea I was hot in my prime but don't act like my raps are forgotten
when ur style is basically a time hop to back when I was actually popping
reasons I hate you: thug image, gun gimmick, swears he baller
the only King I condone sitting around and talking about fake shit is Jerry Lawler
yall should just put me in the outsiders. let Metts ride wit the troop
cause who gives a fuck about the Outsiders without Hogan legitimizing the group



This was a very good battle here, Both had dope verses, looked like O was tryna bully Karaoke here and he almost did to me.. but KK had some stingers in there that drool and let the metal in lines were hard as fuck to me. Though they both had the same amount of quotes I was fuckin with KK verse a lil more O had some heavy ass jabs and with one haymaker he would have taken this easily but he didn't have it, so I got KK with the edge