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If I didn't absolutely adore vulgar I'd sign in n have opening lines like
Ohhhhh my balls. My bad
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this is a topical league, right?
or are we legit writing poetry? I'm cool either way |
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Its both des. Its both
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Is it?
Isn't that the point of the other league? Anddd, wouldn't it be kind of hard to judge two verses when one was more "poetic" than another that rhymed a lot? :/ |
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Yeah, I'm still gonna rhyme tbh.
I'll tone it down tho.
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bitch u ain't shit
put me up against this faggot for poem vs poem week 1 |
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and maybe yeah I just now read the rules and shit and noticed that there's already a topical league
that doesn't mean my poem game isn't fierce |
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rhyme capsule.
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a fifty year old balding white suburbanite talmbout weed that's 'fire' and ham-handedly suggesting poetry's a genre distinct from 'topicals' or battle verse wants to see me in a 'competitive poetry' battle?
i don't like writing competitively (because i suck lol!) and have a life. i bet you'll write something amazingly bland/generic though. i only said you were stupid, which you are. stay frosty. |
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I can't tell if that was negative or positive!
so, stay frosty also! or hot! and ok! |
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satirical poetic prose tbh.
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when you say stupid, you mean stupid fresh?
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hahaha
peeped that last week. dude played creepy excellently |
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Good start. Even in poems theres beef
Let these feels push your pens fellAs |
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poetry to me is whatever you want it to be. whatever you make it. i think you can judge any two pieces side by side as long as there is some sort of rubric for comparison.
just need to decide what this league values in a piece. as long as everybody knows what to judge on, people can just write to their strengths and see what happens. |
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