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06-14-2015, 03:47 PM | #21 |
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Dude had 2 weeks and had a chance to read all of the other verses dropped
the point is to write 'abstract' not 'write' abstract with lines suited better for audio then you want to mouth of to your opponent and the voters? Says that 'good' is better than 'real' yea it is cause them emotions making you look real stupid
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06-14-2015, 03:48 PM | #22 |
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Mayniuh a real one
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06-14-2015, 04:17 PM | #23 |
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LMAO UNDERRATED POST OF THE THREAD
I SEE YOU THO BRUH REPPED
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06-14-2015, 10:45 PM | #24 |
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to be clear, I have never recycled before (hardly sure how you even do that with odd picture topics but i guess wack ppl do wack shit, like pull they verse and bitch LOL)
To be clear, I found an accusation of being a noob offensive (bitchmade). to be clear, there are people I like here. to be clear, I did apologize to vulgar, I think. I just think, as in this thread, way too many way too quick assumptions get made. And "arbitrary" is a pet peeve of mine. to be clear, I wasn't trying to bother geno in ANY way. But if by "fuck with you" you mean "outrap"... bruh. |
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Reality Era stuff. |
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06-14-2015, 10:50 PM | #26 |
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I don't get what's going on at all lol
This is like edgar Allen poe slapping the shit out of Robert frost w/ a Fathead of Maya Angelou In essence I duno but if vulgar hosts it u guys better do ur best mmk
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06-14-2015, 10:53 PM | #27 | |
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I also hate that I don't drink. I wouldn't be apologizing for SHIT! |
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06-14-2015, 10:55 PM | #28 |
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06-14-2015, 10:59 PM | #29 |
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Well reality is you let your emotions get the best of you and then have the audacity to come at other people sideways on some 'you can't understand me' type shit.
do you understand what you are writing?
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06-14-2015, 11:09 PM | #30 |
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06-14-2015, 11:10 PM | #31 |
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Do you understand that that thread was about the reality era of wrestling and reality tv and drake and all that right?
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06-14-2015, 11:15 PM | #32 | |
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Yea. I'm just playing with you man...just bored & going through man 'shit' got fired. My dog died. the girl I'm stalking don't love me. its been a rough hour
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06-14-2015, 11:24 PM | #33 |
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Lol. You guys are endearing
Is tgat the right adjective I don't know
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Dew hasn't risen, listen the mist wishes to steal a gem behind the skin of my neck. Chiefspeak; nothing to pimples your bust it is simple: ^Some Cool Rhymes&Tempo Here Man. Followed by some BS below. And keep in mind I like your verse for the most part. Yo call it's mom a leprous hooker y'know, launch an offensive. It's a little lightning in this bottle, enough to freeze about an hour while the might of 90 bolts'll mop the ocean up. Please Tell Me What I'm Missing. Where exactly are the "unexpected rhymes"? bottle/ bout an ? lightning in this bottle / freeze about an hour ? lightning / 90? even if those guesses are right, they're not good rhymes. even if you weren't facing an opponent ffs. Like I said, I know what it's like to "personally read it" maybe different than it might show to your audience. I don't even think that applies here though. You claim it does, so? .... I'm not trying to harp. The reason I've made this post is 1) It's interesting and I'm curious, from a technical perspective and 2) Judging by your reply to Pat, you're still mouthing off, as though you had genius unexpected rhymes that we mindless slim shady drones can't see. So, if you care to, can you please point out the hidden rhymes in the specific part I've quoted. (Your last large stanza. The one that might wanna leave an impresson). |
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06-15-2015, 02:13 AM | #35 |
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I'm using rhyme as A tool
You're using rhyme as THE method Will explain tmrw |
06-15-2015, 02:17 AM | #36 |
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Ok np.
No ill will here man, I literally just don't know. I mean if it's spoken word that stanza's cool I guess. |
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06-15-2015, 08:30 AM | #38 |
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I agree it was a dickish and childish thing to do, but i like this guy and think he can write.
We all make mistakes bros.
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06-15-2015, 08:31 AM | #39 |
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Oh btw I'm the greatest with rhymes.
Prove me wrong.
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06-15-2015, 08:37 AM | #40 |
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Just stopping by to say that the verse in question was not good, and writer of said verse would be better off putting this whole situation behind him instead of trying to defend bitch behavior for a sub-par verse.
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