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Old 04-23-2013, 07:30 PM   #1
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That's getting taken down right....now


Also I'm gone next week to.
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Old 04-23-2013, 07:32 PM   #3
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Haha, one person saw it. You like them candy cane underRoos though huh?
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Well I missed whatever was there....I'm kinda glad
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lol..nigga got sasquash legs..fuurrrrrrrrr hahaha

my dope man needs to get here already..i got a verse to write
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That's going to be featured in the magazine in the new, "Shit Happens" section.
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Old 04-23-2013, 07:46 PM   #7
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That's going to be featured in the magazine in the new, "Shit Happens" section.


I have zero problems with it

Here's one of my daughters...

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I'm on my grown man shit, what you expect?


I'm out for another week though. Writting a verse and should be done tonight @ ???

But as I requested the extension for editing sake so....Peace bitches. see you next month literally
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Peace man. Send money tho'.
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Old 04-23-2013, 07:50 PM   #10
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Happy Birthday William Shakespear, the man who coined these terms in plays...


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Muhfuckin "Swagger" what!

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LMFAO. Did she know about the word on the hat? If not, you messed up man. Lol.
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Old 04-23-2013, 07:58 PM   #12
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LMFAO. Did she know about the word on the hat? If not, you messed up man. Lol.
WTF, she was like 3 at the time. She had no clue...but I vowed that would be last cock she saw for the next 58 year.

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Old 04-23-2013, 07:51 PM   #13
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you are strange Adonis.

first the verse about your dad raping you and now a pic of your daughter with cocks near her face

lmao
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LMFAOOOO.
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yo where in the world is Francis San Diego?
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Francis Parker School, also known simply as Parker, is an elite college preparatory independent day school in San Diego, California, serving students from junior kindergarten through twelfth grade.

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Old 04-23-2013, 08:02 PM   #17
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@Adonis man, send me a bunch of topics before you go on hiatus.
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I'm only leaving for a week bro. But I can actually finish up my "book/cover" Idea.
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@Adonis, I get it as a writer. just like someone that writes a movie or a story , your writing about a character you have created that has nothing to do with yourself in any way.

but I showed that verse to my wife that's a counselor and she said if that's a girl she has serious mental issues and a history of abuse and is venting on this board through rhyme. and if its a guy, he is playing out his homosexual rape fantasies through a character he has created. lmao.

I told her she was most likely wrong on both fronts. and tbh you should prolly take it as a compliment that you could delve so deep into a character

and ya I meant Frank and was making a really lame Carmen San Diego reference.
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No fantasies

I wish my dude ARMZ was still writing, his every verse is sadistic with gruesome imagery. I enjoy that shit, same with "Art". I seem to love the twisted sides of drawing,


Who the fuck would want to watch the Brady Bunch over the Simpsons Nadimean?
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