05-04-2015, 10:49 PM | #1 |
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Contender Match: Allen Knight 2-0 vs Mutilate 2-1 - ALLEN WINS
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05-04-2015, 11:29 PM | #2 |
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check, droppin 12.
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05-05-2015, 04:06 AM | #3 |
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Checkmate. Dropping you.
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05-08-2015, 11:59 PM | #4 |
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Almost forgot, quick key like all my sex acts
Allen Allen Allen.. If you & @Amen had a gay off, you'd win cause you way better Huggin men tighter then ever...you remind me of maywether You textcee alumni? Is you dumb high? This can't be life They saying you the GOAT - well. this here is my sacrifice I'm after Christ to put you in the afterlife, I'll get you dropped guy List of "greats of all time" T-Mobile wouldn't put you in their Top 5 So you better Book, or the Gatsby in your face once my goons see the light is green Filled with envy till you get 2 black eyes boy my punches Sting At the gym tryna flex, I'll bench press & make it not seem hard You can't even hold your own.. Everyone seziure a little shaky with the Bars Don't place em with the stars, he wouldn't even fake pop like diet rite I'm not buying rounds when Im giving out shots tonight |
05-09-2015, 12:41 AM | #5 |
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Need an ext just got home
Im passing out
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05-09-2015, 04:19 PM | #6 |
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AKA Clayton AKA Villain.
gotta Hanzo blade ready for the attack route cuz Visa faggot & i'll swipe his face w/ the side till his life max out ur the type to run from fights, ima boss w/ horror cuz Claiborne a bitch & u can smell the sent of pussy off his aura & ur moms a huge slut, that my crews hittin sloppy we Ultron get in that pussy cuz she stays jumpin to different bodies everything u drops played as fuck, its a bore & tragic bars Clay Figures dope been molded into verses yrs before this faggot ur hoes enormous & ugly, every day she gotta feast cuz u Feta till she was sloppy & her pussy smelt like rotten cheese i'll crush ur skull w/ fists, thats why ur fuckin hiding fool hooks smash Clayface till it shape shifts into somthin unrecognizable
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05-10-2015, 11:13 AM | #7 |
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T mobile, seizure...
Weak verse here. Some of ur set up lines were better than ur punches and ur wording was a bit choppy AK had Visa,clay borne was dope. Barclays. Fete was a stretch but I'll count it. Nice verse a few light bars but better than mutes Overall - one sided battle here. Mute had allot of Misses and choppy worded bars and Allen came was some decent plays that hit harder V/Allen |
05-10-2015, 08:26 PM | #8 |
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If you & @Amen had a gay off, you'd win cause you way better
Huggin men tighter then ever...you remind me of maywether good idea and flow but I feel like it could be harder You textcee alumni? Is you dumb high? This can't be life They saying you the GOAT - well. this here is my sacrifice GOAT/goat is pretty done I'm after Christ to put you in the afterlife, I'll get you dropped guy List of "greats of all time" T-Mobile wouldn't put you in their Top 5 coulda hit harder. I dig the idea but unless I'm missing something with t-mobile it's just ok So you better Book, or the Gatsby in your face once my goons see the light is green Filled with envy till you get 2 black eyes boy my punches Sting gatsby has been done. Not sure if/how the setup and punch go together and tbh I don't really get a punch at the end of the bar. Kinda works if you're tryna flex but if that's the case green/sting doesn't really rhyme At the gym tryna flex, I'll bench press & make it not seem hard You can't even hold your own.. Everyone seziure a little shaky with the Bars cool Don't place em with the stars, he wouldn't even fake pop like diet rite I'm not buying rounds when Im giving out shots tonight played bro gotta Hanzo blade ready for the attack route cuz Visa faggot & i'll swipe his face w/ the side till his life max out nice ur the type to run from fights, ima boss w/ horror cuz Claiborne a bitch & u can smell the sent of pussy off his aura solid & ur moms a huge slut, that my crews hittin sloppy we Ultron get in that pussy cuz she stays jumpin to different bodies alright everything u drops played as fuck, its a bore & tragic bars Clay Figures dope been molded into verses yrs before this faggot dope ur hoes enormous & ugly, every day she gotta feast cuz u Feta till she was sloppy & her pussy smelt like rotten cheese Lol ok i'll crush ur skull w/ fists, thats why ur fuckin hiding fool hooks smash Clayface till it shape shifts into somthin unrecognizable ok No real misses from Allen but all the name flips got kinda long winded by the end. Allen won on consistency imo |
05-10-2015, 09:02 PM | #9 |
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vs. gotta Hanzo blade ready for the attack route cuz Visa faggot & i'll swipe his face w/ the side till his life max out ur the type to run from fights, ima boss w/ horror cuz Claiborne a bitch & u can smell the sent of pussy off his aura Al came wit a solid verse here... Visa faggot was tough. Clairborne was nice. Clay Figures was decent, not real hardhitting but I liked the play. Mutilate... I've seen variations of every single punch in your verse. Mayweather ... GOAT/Sacrifice ... seizure/sees your ... rounds/shots ... Sting was a somewhat original twist on black eyes, but I seen KISS used there... Not much good to say here so I'ma just leave it at that. Bring fresh concepts next time. V/ Allen Knight
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05-11-2015, 02:18 PM | #10 |
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Mutilate
If you & @Amen had a gay off, you'd win cause you way better Huggin men tighter then ever...you remind me of maywether Lots of mayweather punches. This was cool, but not that harsh You textcee alumni? Is you dumb high? This can't be life They saying you the GOAT - well. this here is my sacrifice like the concept but not the wording I'm after Christ to put you in the afterlife, I'll get you dropped guy List of "greats of all time" T-Mobile wouldn't put you in their Top 5 this is weak to me So you better Book, or the Gatsby in your face once my goons see the light is green Filled with envy till you get 2 black eyes boy my punches Sting this seems a little forced to me. and a gatsby reference? you gotta come harder than that to make it not seem corny At the gym tryna flex, I'll bench press & make it not seem hard You can't even hold your own.. Everyone seziure a little shaky with the Bars meh. you can't tell me you haven't seen a seizure flip before Don't place em with the stars, he wouldn't even fake pop like diet rite I'm not buying rounds when Im giving out shots tonight this is a common flip so i would have liked to see something more creative Allen Knight gotta Hanzo blade ready for the attack route cuz Visa faggot & i'll swipe his face w/ the side till his life max out didn't like the setup but the punch is coo ur the type to run from fights, ima boss w/ horror cuz Claiborne a bitch & u can smell the sent of pussy off his aura i would have taken this name play a different direction but aight & ur moms a huge slut, that my crews hittin sloppy we Ultron get in that pussy cuz she stays jumpin to different bodies this is a little forced but i like the 80s giant robot reference everything u drops played as fuck, its a bore & tragic bars Clay Figures dope been molded into verses yrs before this faggot wording is awkward but nice concept ur hoes enormous & ugly, every day she gotta feast cuz u Feta till she was sloppy & her pussy smelt like rotten cheese she should work on her hygiene. i'll crush ur skull w/ fists, thats why ur fuckin hiding fool hooks smash Clayface till it shape shifts into somthin unrecognizable this was cool but almost the same concept as the clay figures bar Mutilate had the GOAT bar, that was cool, but nothing much stood out in the rest of the verse. Some of the concepts you picked have been done to death, so it helps if you come up with some extra flair to make it original. Allen Knight did his thing. Solid verse. Decent levels of creativity and nothing was horribly played or forced. Kinda out classed the competition here. Vote: Allen Knight |
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05-11-2015, 04:19 PM | #12 |
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mayweather, seizure kinda played
vs. visa, clay figures, ultron cool battle, allen was hitting harder v/allen |
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