Week 5 Prediction and Discussion - Page 2

NYCSPITZ · 10-27-2014, 06:26 PM

word we should slay some real life OMs or some shit like on some old school NY tip

Certain · 10-27-2014, 06:47 PM

I don't live in New York anymore.

CopyPat · 10-27-2014, 07:22 PM

Certain ruins everything

Certain · 10-27-2014, 07:38 PM

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Originally Posted by CopyPat

Certain ruins everything

Especially your hopes of ever getting an accomplishment.

King Ra. · 10-27-2014, 07:48 PM

Lmfaooooo.

Greed · 10-27-2014, 08:03 PM

Ayo I got too many losses i should still be at 21 somebody added my loss the day I didnt show.

King Ra. · 10-27-2014, 08:05 PM

No show = loss.

Soulstice · 10-27-2014, 09:42 PM

Champion:Certain (4-0) vs. Witty (3-0) - great battle
Contender:Buddha(3-0) vs. Mr. J (3-1)
NYC(3-1) vs. Kan(2-2) - great battle. kans been low key great. nycspitz less lowkey still great
3PA(2-1) vs. Dead man(2-2) - great battle. 3 didnt seem inspired last week whereas dead had the votw in my eyes
CopyPat(3-1) vs. Soulstice(2-1) - this topic appears to suit copypat well. i will approach it "tangentially" ;)
Greed(1-3) vs. Asylum(1-2) im not really sure
Mike Wrecka(0-1) vs. Time(2-2) - hes only participated one week? didnt he dq bb at least
Zygote (1-0)vs. Dominate(1-0) - if he rhymes more.
Inno(0-3) vs. Jah (0-1) why you 0-3?
Pinot (1-2) vs. Frank (1-2) - another great battle that slipped to the bottom somehow
Defiant( 2-1) vs. CampBell(1-2) - this is a pretty good battle too. dont know much of either though

sig check fail averted.

Greed · 10-27-2014, 09:51 PM

Thats what im saying that loss was added already when I was at 21

Certain · 10-27-2014, 10:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Greed

Thats what im saying that loss was added already when I was at 21

OK.

NYCSPITZ · 10-27-2014, 10:21 PM

im at least .500

kannon · 10-27-2014, 11:10 PM

Straight up, I'm depressed that I lost last week. No disrespect to Buddha, I didn't even read his verse, but I really liked my shit, and it makes me sad when people called it underdeveloped :( I also feel like it was mad slept on amongst the battles, which made me double :(:(

Also, I lived in NYC for a while. Twice.

Certain · 10-27-2014, 11:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kannon

Straight up, I'm depressed that I lost last week. No disrespect to Buddha, I didn't even read his verse, but I really liked my shit, and it makes me sad when people called it underdeveloped :( I also feel like it was mad slept on amongst the battles, which made me double :(:(

I feel like I was the only one who got what you were going for, which is weird because it wasn't complex. Then again, you missed about (admittedly subtle) seven layers of foreshadowing in my verse. So ...

Dominate · 10-28-2014, 12:34 AM

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Originally Posted by Certain

I don't mind the idea of writing to music as long as no one even attempts to mention "the flow didn't fit the beat" because fuck you.

Right.

Actually I was thinking of like... A solo piano, a flamenco guitar, etc... Rather than a hip hop instrumental.

kannon · 10-28-2014, 12:38 AM

Certain, I'm open if you want to shoot me a PM about what other 6 layers I missed. I re-read your first two stanzas about 6 times to try to pull anything more out of it. I got a bit out of her, but little from the brother.

If you don't feel like elaborating, well then

, too.

UnbornBuddha · 10-28-2014, 01:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kannon

Straight up, I'm depressed that I lost last week. No disrespect to Buddha, I didn't even read his verse, but I really liked my shit, and it makes me sad when people called it underdeveloped :( I also feel like it was mad slept on amongst the battles, which made me double :(:(

Also, I lived in NYC for a while. Twice.

To be honest due to my lowly inferior writing I am surprised I bested you. I have many faults, and I am less experienced in this topical forms of writing, and do not wish to hurt anyone over what I see as a friendly bout. A spar of good will.

I for one truly enjoyed your verse, and wish you well as you progress in this endeavor/ personal cultivation. But, please my friend do not be sad over such trivial things. Yes, I know writing is a significant part of our lives. But, remember that this is all in good fun. May peace beckon your heart into :) instead of the heart wrenching :(

Certain · 10-28-2014, 01:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnbornBuddha

To be honest due to my lowly inferior writing I am surprised I bested you. I have many faults, and I am less experienced in this topical forms of writing, and do not wish to hurt anyone over what I see as a friendly bout. A spar of good will.

I for one truly enjoyed your verse, and wish you well as you progress in this endeavor/ personal cultivation. But, please my friend do not be sad over such trivial things. Yes, I know writing is a significant part of our lives. But, remember that this is all in good fun. May peace beckon your heart into :) instead of the heart wrenching :(

Mr. J · 10-28-2014, 01:58 AM

Giraffe

Spoken · 10-28-2014, 02:02 AM

Could I sign up for wk. 6??

asylum · 10-28-2014, 02:42 AM

nope. sign ins are closed. didnt u get the memo?

10-27-2014, 06:26 PM	#21
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	word we should slay some real life OMs or some shit like on some old school NY tip __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

10-27-2014, 06:47 PM	#22
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	I don't live in New York anymore. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-27-2014, 07:22 PM	#23
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742222	Certain ruins everything __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

10-27-2014, 07:48 PM	#25
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Lmfaooooo. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

10-27-2014, 08:05 PM	#27
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	No show = loss. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

10-27-2014, 08:03 PM	#26
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975684	Ayo I got too many losses i should still be at 21 somebody added my loss the day I didnt show.

10-27-2014, 09:51 PM	#29
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975684	Thats what im saying that loss was added already when I was at 21

10-27-2014, 10:21 PM	#31
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	im at least .500 __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

10-27-2014, 11:10 PM	#32
kannon kickthekan Join Date: May 2014 Location: fresh coast Posts: 1,204 Battle Record: 9-6 Champed - The Mic Check Rep Power: 22752195	Straight up, I'm depressed that I lost last week. No disrespect to Buddha, I didn't even read his verse, but I really liked my shit, and it makes me sad when people called it underdeveloped :( I also feel like it was mad slept on amongst the battles, which made me double :(:( Also, I lived in NYC for a while. Twice. __________________ lnk.bio/kickthekan FIRSTCLASS

10-28-2014, 12:38 AM	#35
kannon kickthekan Join Date: May 2014 Location: fresh coast Posts: 1,204 Battle Record: 9-6 Champed - The Mic Check Rep Power: 22752195	Certain, I'm open if you want to shoot me a PM about what other 6 layers I missed. I re-read your first two stanzas about 6 times to try to pull anything more out of it. I got a bit out of her, but little from the brother. If you don't feel like elaborating, well then , too. __________________ lnk.bio/kickthekan FIRSTCLASS

10-28-2014, 01:58 AM	#38
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,028 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	Giraffe __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-28-2014, 02:02 AM	#39
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Could I sign up for wk. 6?? __________________ WP Po'ethics

10-28-2014, 02:42 AM	#40
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 993 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214208	nope. sign ins are closed. didnt u get the memo?