10-01-2014, 05:34 AM | #1 |
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Championship Match: BROKE LESNAR vs. Camp Bell [BROKE LESNAR Wins]
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10-01-2014, 06:21 AM | #2 |
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Check, gl.
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10-01-2014, 11:09 AM | #3 |
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...yup.
i pass on the rebuttal.
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10-02-2014, 03:23 PM | #4 | |
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sucks, i'm sure god got em and he'll throw me the rest cuz i cant hit rock bottom when broke, sick an depressed
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10-02-2014, 08:30 PM | #5 | |
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ur collabos with bb's bitch were trash,ima clean u out n fold ur rap group so its fitting u roll with Gamble.....cuz Team Alpha's a load of crap,Shoot |
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10-02-2014, 10:06 PM | #6 |
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I like camps bar but didn't connect & hit home like Brokes did, he was creative on the nameplay & got a little personal.
Broke better execution.
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10-02-2014, 10:57 PM | #7 |
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camps bar felt too simple to me, wasn't a bad hit but Id consider it a light jab you'd throw in a battle with too many bars just for consistency points not a hay maker. Brokes was a cool personal, not sure why he posted the background check when he more so just attacked the sig from what I could tell lol.. eitherway, was feeling the setup and overall personal aspect to his hit.. wasn't hard but it landed better to me.
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10-02-2014, 11:24 PM | #8 |
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Camp was ok
I like some of his previous wrk better Broke did fairly well. Nothin spectacular but enough to win V broke
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10-03-2014, 07:31 AM | #9 |
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Camp...liked.the double rhyme in there...as a audio.dude.I.appreciate that structure..the play off him bein sick was cool...not very hard hitting tho
Broke...lil more stretched then usual...nice personal..hit.pretty solid to me...diggin it Vote...no Joke Broke |
10-03-2014, 10:48 AM | #10 |
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I feel camp couldve dropped something doper with the concept, Broke came with a nice idea and executed properly.. v/BL
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10-06-2014, 04:01 AM | #11 |
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Camp Bell: I thought this concept was clean and simple. Not that hard-hitting or creative but effective in its way.
BROKE LESNAR: I don't like the idea of using obscure secondary names. They have no impact. Also the personal felt dated even though it's only a month old. I just didn't think this connected. Vote: Camp Bell |
10-06-2014, 09:11 AM | #12 |
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I felt camps punch came
Off soft. He could have made it More harsh. Brokes bar was a bit stretched/choppy but I like how he tied in the personals. This was close but I'm giving this to broke |
10-06-2014, 01:41 PM | #13 |
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dang this was a dope battle lol i got broke taking this with a bit better personal even tho camps was dope too
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