09-15-2014, 08:25 PM | #1 |
The Clown Prince
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Venezuela VooDoo
I'm lost to a singular vision, no polarities subside
no periphery pride, no conscience of the blindness inside in light the thought has been shining so bright... I'm in disbelief at myself for looking deprived... no contact has shown me the evil that's living in I Back to square one, the logic is the same the cross and the blame, this debacle and shame the dirt and the earth, the caskets locking embrace the key and the lock with the body rotted away I'm sorry to say, it's been a problem these monotonous ways I swear you should be hit harder then Bobby Bouche... in the lobby, touche, I'm waiting to see if there's room between, "my heart hurts" " I'm the shit" blah blah boo... Down in the valley, in the caverns where dragons roam I'm hitting on fire flowers with my princess packing bowls... tortoise shells...one blew you away when you riding in first you were Lucifer but I've been God & supplying the earth I'm clipping wings from Minotaurs to Angels... I'm happy as long as dinner's off the payroll messing with you is literally wasted time... leave them ho's sprinting...they basic dimes... shit I'm bored now... talk bout Tom Ford now give me an award now... chilling in a whorehouse saying hi to your moms
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09-18-2014, 09:26 AM | #2 |
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Down in the valley, in the caverns where dragons roam
I'm hitting on fire flowers with my princess packing bowls... ^^Nice. It's been awhile since I've seen you on here. Where you been? Anyway, this was dope. Maybe not the quality that I'm used to from you, but your unique wording is still here. Good to see you back. Here's you a free up. |
09-18-2014, 09:38 AM | #3 |
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concept was kinda out there....overall some nice ideas...juz thought they could be made with a lil' more creativity...
like how u kept it short tho'...solid verse, and some nice imagery in there.. good drop |
09-18-2014, 12:08 PM | #4 | |
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I think the rest of it was fair, at best; concentrating on dragons and other imaginary beings from WOW, or whatever game you've been wasting your time on. I'm gonna give you a "POS'd". Never see people say "Pos'd"... just "negged"... maybe I haven't been on here long enough. |
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09-20-2014, 07:43 PM | #5 |
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Lol @ WoW
but thanks yall
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09-21-2014, 02:56 AM | #6 |
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You didn't like my red bull reference...
I should have used the de niro line :(
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09-21-2014, 08:12 AM | #7 | |
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// In this verse, ya seemed to stand for everything and for nothingness, saying everything but saying nothing.. |
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09-26-2014, 04:26 PM | #8 |
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Magic
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