09-16-2014, 05:31 PM | #1 | |
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theMuzzl3 vs. Beans [Beans Wins]
theMuzzl3 vs. Beans theMuzzl3 theMuzzl3 has had a rough introduction to NC. He has been roasted on numerous occasions (personals can be found by utilizing the "Search" feature and inserting "theMuzzl3" either into the "Keywords" or "Username" search.) He has a very unique style that doesn't translate well with any voter that has checked his battles ever. But, with a few months of concerted effort and attention to criticisms, I can see theMuzzl3 working his way into the low-tier and finding a place for himself there. My advice is to remain humble, take the bumps as a learning experience, and set yourself up for a strong 2015. If you really want to text battle, you have to be willing to alter your approach to writing. Beans Beans is genuinely thoughtful. Due Monday 12am PST Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 09-16-2014 at 09:01 PM. |
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09-16-2014, 08:36 PM | #2 |
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Lmao dead at that intro.. Muz drop early cool?
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09-17-2014, 08:07 PM | #4 |
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09-17-2014, 08:27 PM | #5 |
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Visited yo momma's stankin crib yesterday and she was foreva breakin fuckin wind;
broke words of fartin out retarded babies, poop out the shoot, das why you neva win. @Beans
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09-18-2014, 04:56 PM | #6 |
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Word I'll do this quick while I'm on the shitter
I get stiff as a board nail'n ya girl, she say u drill like a faggot So if muzzl ever apply wood? I'll use it to build him a casket |
09-18-2014, 05:01 PM | #7 |
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Muzzl3's bar looks underwhelming at first glance (bc it is) but I'm not going to lie when I first read it I lmao'ed at it. Beans win this with a better structured and more creative bar.
Muzzl3 if you decide to stay in the league for next week I will break your bar down and provide more in-depth analysis in your intro. v-Beans |
09-18-2014, 06:41 PM | #8 |
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Muzzle keep trying is the best I can say- try an use others work for elevation. Beans you came ehhhh went with a wood/dick refernce which is kind of like a cum line- but in this it did just enough.
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09-18-2014, 07:01 PM | #9 |
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Yea muz....take ya time next match an get creative....use less words to tighten the rhyme an youll be straight..
Beanz...solid...setup fit the play...thought this was nice V....mean beanz |
09-18-2014, 09:04 PM | #10 |
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i like muzzle, hated his punch tho.
the setup was off and not sure how farting and stanking cribs end up with him not winning anything. beans was direct and connected well. flowed nicely as well. cool beans. vote: beans
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09-18-2014, 09:18 PM | #11 |
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Muzzle swung and missed
Beans struck with a jab Vote beans |
09-22-2014, 10:26 PM | #12 |
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Muzzle is workin on his nc style. I can tell.
Beans with a better overall execution. V beans |
09-23-2014, 08:46 PM | #13 |
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Both bars weren't that hard hitting here... Beans was just all around better though, Muzzle try to be sharper with your setups
v: Beans
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09-24-2014, 09:07 AM | #14 |
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Both were meh beans just hit slightly
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