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EϛO
Join Date: Sep 2014
Location: Yo momma room
Posts: 11
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Yall scared of this egotistic criticist
Will criticize for an infinite Til you're obliderized and finished with You steady dissing my poetry cause you're not a poet You're a rapper, I'm a martian you're a fag, and you know it I'm so potent, that i'll deliver a storm, like zeus While fucking your mom. Dr. Seuss I just came but its been too long I got game but i came too strong yall scared, whats wrong? Afraid that this poet will make you long gone Who cares what yall suckas think Cause all you do is think and think too long I'm an egotistical maniac Crazier than freddy, and that ugly bitch bettie put together Chasing her to maybe, give that bitch a baby, and a cover Yall dont even know me yet you've just started a war Sitting here typing with my back turned to the computer and my eyes on the wall, i could do this in my sleep but i'd rather be concious...Cause I'm Ego |
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Arm the Homeless
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,104
Battle Record: 22-24
Champed - Art of Writing League
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I remember a time, seems like years ago now, where I would open up the Open Mic and damn near every post on the front page was either dope, or at the very least worth a read. Now I open up the Open Mic and see one or two drops that I can read from start to finish. You are not one of them. Your posts are not good. Like not even a little bit. And if you are who I think you are, your other posts weren't good either. I hate leaving feed where I'm doing nothing but saying that someone is just bad, but it needed to be said. Your ideas are not original or creative in anyway, which would be fine if you at least had the slightest grasp of rhyming, but you don't. Each line is predictable and after I read through one of your posts I hate myself because that was time off of my life that I just wasted. My advice to you, would be to keep the "bars" to yourself and edit them because the wording is awful. Go through a couple of edits and then, and only fucking THEN, should you post it. And stop posting so many god damn threads a day. Jesus fucking Christ I need a cigarette.
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2014
Posts: 26,349
Battle Record: 0-1
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PR's Finest
Join Date: Aug 2013
Posts: 14,157
Battle Record: 12-7
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consults Lloyd
Join Date: Aug 2013
Posts: 4,075
Battle Record: 0-8
Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast
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lol
Writing bars is all about imitation. You're doing it wrong. |
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Lime Life
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 16,810
Battle Record: 30-41
Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded
Champed - Lyric Olympics
- Summer Classic
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He listens to voices inside of his mind
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6ft of Seperation
Join Date: Aug 2010
Posts: 1,541
Battle Record: 3-5
Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015)
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Keep droppin bro
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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900% this is muzzle
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