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07-30-2014, 05:13 PM | #2 |
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when ur aunt Kerry finally died i was effing glad cuz i ain't seen a bitch make such a melodramatic exit since that prima Donna left ur dad in HS u moved weight cross country n' kept heat u were so fucking boss u ran every block in Roslyn NY.............while training for ur next meet I remember when Donna said to pound the trim but b4 I reminisce ab old flames.................we can watch ur self-confidence go down in them i pick Mandy up to fuck n' she cling to the dude take her back to Sonic......place an order n' get a quickie in the whip b4 he brings us our food Kate's a slut n' idk how many loads her muff seen but when Kerry was dying............i told her there wasn't a cure n' she still chose to suck peen took Mandy to Aruba, got engaged/bad decision cuz then she wanted to experience Arikok n' Eagle Beach..with her legs spread in that position I pinned Manda down, wowed her n' it's damn true cuz when i gave her the D. Bryan...she was screaming YES! YES! YES! louder than his fans do so to recap ur fam's a bunch of dumb facking curs n' while u spend ur ext on Bags personals.......Amanda's in my master bedroom unpacking hers Last edited by Hush; 08-20-2015 at 04:18 PM. Reason: edited out personal info |
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Cuz the truth of it is, this battles so far in the Bags it substitutes as your dick I can’t get thru 1 of ya verses. w/ stretched bars each line is reachin I mean…The Strain is so bad it's beginning to make that show look kinda decent Ya girl loves my cock & bum so I’ll thrust til I see spots of cum I run the Train allll night & after the Third Rail it looks like she hopped on one There's a reason ya Promoting failed. You bombed, that's not good Ya audio Flat, Broke. And you couldn't give away Freestyles @ a Salon in the hood Quote:
I feel bad. But the Maury hears it the sooner he'll realize his kids aren't actually his Each drop is brazen w/ haste, you should consider takin a break Your verses aren’t Misguided. They’re Ebola making its way to the States You're on ya last leg, embrace it homie. You winning? Not in this shit Just take ya Bags & leave text. You'll finally show ya Cum Into Grips...probably < his Your music is awful. I’m not lovin the beat, nothing is sweet Dog, I’d rather Slit my Wrists in a shark tank listening to Lyfza Gamble on fuckin repeat |
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07-31-2014, 08:38 AM | #4 |
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u were so fucking boss u ran every block in Roslyn NY.............while training for ur next meet -dope took Mandy to Aruba, got engaged/bad decision cuz then she wanted to experience Arikok n' Eagle Beach..with her legs spread in that position -haha ok n' while u spend ur ext on Bags personals.......Amanda's in my master bedroom unpacking hers Hardest hitting bar...thats how a Closing bar s'pose to land Honestly I think maybe it was a bad choice to focus so much on all the personalz but we'll see when I check wha' he did wit' his verse Tic- I mean…The Strain is so bad it's beginning to make that show look kinda decent - thats straight I run the Train allll night & after the Third Rail it looks like she hopped on one - haha Ya audio Flat, Broke. And you couldn't give away Freestyles @ a Salon in the hood -ehh I feel bad. But the Maury hears it the sooner he'll realize his kids aren't actually his - don't like the direction of the bar...but neva seen More-he/Maury nice Your verses aren’t Misguided. They’re Ebola making its way to the States -flowz sick on this section Dog, I’d rather Slit my Wrists in a shark tank listening to Lyfza Gamble on fuckin repeat -Whoooooaaaa Dope ending this was kinda close...I feel Tic's flow was on another level an he showed more of a variety of attackz instead of juz focusing on one aspect of battling... Vote- TIC |
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U thought this’d be easy but ya goin home in this round & I’m provin it bitch Cuz the truth of it is, this battles so far in the Bags it substitutes as your dick I can’t get thru 1 of ya verses. w/ stretched bars each line is reachin I mean…The Strain is so bad it's beginning to make that show look kinda decent There's a reason ya Promoting failed. You bombed, that's not good Ya audio Flat, Broke. And you couldn't give away Freestyles @ a Salon in the hood You’re a good Father. That's what ya girl tells me when I'm smackin her clit I feel bad. But the Maury hears it the sooner he'll realize his kids aren't actually his Each drop is brazen w/ haste, you should consider takin a break Your verses aren’t Misguided. They’re Ebola making its way to the States Broke in HS u moved weight cross country n' kept heat u were so fucking boss u ran every block in Roslyn NY.............while training for ur next meet I remember when Donna said to pound the trim but b4 I reminisce ab old flames.................we can watch ur self-confidence go down in them I pinned Manda down, wowed her n' it's damn true cuz when i gave her the D. Bryan...she was screaming YES! YES! YES! louder than his fans do so to recap ur fam's a bunch of dumb facking curs n' while u spend ur ext on Bags personals.......Amanda's in my master bedroom unpacking hers This was a cool battle, a lot of hype behind it and you both showed up pretty well, I feel like Broke and his research was a good strategy but I don't think every bars should have been based on it, he should have threw a couple other punches in there to mix it up i feel as though he leaned on that info a little too much, Tic came with some heat and his punches were hitting clean and more consistent to me so i gotta give him the edge in this one.. good battle to both of you though, v/ TicTac
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U thought this’d be easy but ya goin home in this round & I’m provin it bitch
Cuz the truth of it is, this battles so far in the Bags it substitutes as your dick Ehh...ok personal...bags flip super played tho. I can’t get thru 1 of ya verses. w/ stretched bars each line is reachin I mean…The Strain is so bad it's beginning to make that show look kinda decent Average Ya girl loves my cock & bum so I’ll thrust til I see spots of cum I run the Train allll night & after the Third Rail it looks like she hopped on one LMAO. Fire. There's a reason ya Promoting failed. You bombed, that's not good Ya audio Flat, Broke. And you couldn't give away Freestyles @ a Salon in the hood I like this You’re a good Father. That's what ya girl tells me when I'm smackin her clit I feel bad. But the Maury hears it the sooner he'll realize his kids aren't actually his Cool wordplay. Decent hit. Each drop is brazen w/ haste, you should consider takin a break Your verses aren’t Misguided. They’re Ebola making its way to the States Not feelin You're on ya last leg, embrace it homie. You winning? Not in this shit Just take ya Bags & leave text. You'll finally show ya Cum Into Grips...probably < his Lmao. This is cool. Your music is awful. I’m not lovin the beat, nothing is sweet Dog, I’d rather Slit my Wrists in a shark tank listening to Lyfza Gamble on fuckin repeat Nothin clever here. Not even really funny. when ur aunt Kerry finally died i was effing glad cuz i ain't seen a bitch make such a melodramatic exit since that prima Donna left ur dad This shit. Lol. Fuckin brutal. in HS u moved weight cross country n' kept heat u were so fucking boss u ran every block in Roslyn NY.............while training for ur next meet Its relevant . An personal. ..but the concept is still played...an didnt hit great to me I remember when Donna said to pound the trim but b4 I reminisce ab old flames.................we can watch ur self-confidence go down in them This is nice i pick Mandy up to fuck n' she cling to the dude take her back to Sonic......place an order n' get a quickie in the whip b4 he brings us our food Eh....which family member r u fucking now? Lol. Sonnick/sonic is cool. Kate's a slut n' idk how many loads her muff seen but when Kerry was dying............i told her there wasn't a cure n' she still chose to suck peen Lmao. Cool board joke from bb da bb an nice personal tie....tho...again u banging sum1 in his family lol took Mandy to Aruba, got engaged/bad decision cuz then she wanted to experience Arikok n' Eagle Beach..with her legs spread in that position More sex I pinned Manda down, wowed her n' it's damn true cuz when i gave her the D. Bryan...she was screaming YES! YES! YES! louder than his fans do More sex. Concept didnt really floor me eother so to recap ur fam's a bunch of dumb facking curs n' while u spend ur ext on Bags personals.......Amanda's in my master bedroom unpacking hers Personals about me? I dont get it.....and....more sex Ayo Ill say i got 3 quotes for broke and 4 for tic tac. Tic tac good bars were leagues better then shit he wrote last week....tho his unqoutes were more of the same wack shit he had....but his good ones were dope. Brokes verse.....lol....the research an dirt dug up was crazy. But i mean i and you...i feel...couodve done so much more with it ...by the end of the verse i was half expecting u to bang the kids dad and finish off the endless fuck marathon u put on his whole family lol. Too many bars about fucking women. Opener was almost crucial enuff for u to take this anyways...but as it stands i feel like tic tac had better bars in total. V tic tac |
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lol wtf? This why I hate battling. Yeah nigga I read the votes. But guess what faggot you still a sheep.
I'll start with tic. Nothing you wrote really floored me. The concepts were cool, but its the same formulaic lay out of each. single. battle. One about his girl, one about his lines not being good, and like 5 about bags. Which the first was kinda stretched, although that's me nitpicking, I admit. The Maury was probably the best. But it's more about nothing based on any substance. Nor was it that funny, or thought provoking. The ebola and closer were the weakest lines, not because they didnt have any substance, but because it was just little jabs compared to the other ones. You lack a lot of humor, and this is more of a diss-type verse. You didn't show any improvement, or demonstrated that you're better. You just said the same thing a lot of people say, with the little material you had, which is bags. Broke - Awesome verse. Hilarious, well researched, and just creative. Bags said the sex was boring - which is ironic because half your verses are about fake sexcapades with people you'll never meet. Which is funny, because, that's what this verse was, but it's the research, and thought provoking lines and quick subtle jabs - ( now I don't know the accuracy of this) but either way, it seemed to be accurate and tic hasnt really said anything about it. IF this is true, then this battle is easy in my eyes. Very easy. The D. Bryan was actually really good. and I don't even watch this garbage. I admit, the sex was rather repetitive, and had it been a bit different incorporating different fake aspects of fake battling, then yes, it wouldve been much more easier to determine - more than it already is. I read the suck peen part, and didnt even refer to myself in my head. Until I read other votes. It was funny - regardless. Do I think I'm funny, subconsciously. I guess so. But it was hilarious, because a.) it wasn't gay, and b.) it was just funny. The sex isn't really played out. Basically most of your lines is 5 semi personal lines and talking about how much sex you've had or withdrawn from them or someone important to them. THAT'S repetitive. This battle was creative. Both impressed, but broke had me in tears in some lines. Easy battle. Vote broke. |
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broke man, u just dont care for people in general i suppose, from beyond to this lmao, brutal, firs punch was nasty, the next one was ok, old flames was cool, then u kinda fell flat, perhaps the yes yes yes line works but i had to look it up.. tic, u had opener, third rail and salon... but wtf at that cum line n i get it but nooo...
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The amount of research broke did for this merits some sort of accomplishment,real talk.
Anyway....broke was brutal. Everything was worded well n the closer n opening were placed perfectly. I was feeling the sonic bar heavy status n the bryan was comedy. Tic was good but he did exactly what broke said he would in his closer. Iwas feeling third rail n ebola but missed baD on the cum line n it hurt. V broke |
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BROKE LESNAR: This verse was everything I look for in a battle verse. There were several very clever lines, but mostly it was mean and very directly personal. You fucked everyone in his family (which was a bit redundant) and brought up his aunt's death and a few other hard-hitting personal details. You obviously dug, but in the past few days I've thought about it, and you were only digging based on what you knew, what Tic Tac had posted about himself. Almost every line worked, though I thought the "suck the peen" line's wording was off and hurt what could have been a harsh blow. I still am not a big fan of your super-short setups and extended punchlines, as the style seems more rigorously stuck to than it needs to be. You could have cut wording in some punches and buffed up some setups and had a better verse. But you've been the best performer in this tournament thus far, and this was your best showing.
Tic Tac: Your improvement round over round is substantial. You obviously knew not to waste anything on your awful last opponent. The opener was great, really well-worded and personal, even if a little bit of the blow was lessened by BROKE LESNAR countering the obvious Bags personals. The "third rail" line was pretty clever. The ebola line was nice and topical. But you had a handful of misses, like the lines referencing The Strain and Maury that were somewhat clever but worded for little impact. Also, you do the same thing as Orc with capitalizing the important words, which isn't how capitalization works. It makes everything feel a bit forced. This was a strong verse, worthy of the quarterfinals. But it wasn't up to your opponent's level of viciousness. Vote: BROKE LESNAR
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Very cool match up. Broke, I like that all of your lines were personal shots. You built off of the quote very well, which I believe are those in some sort of kin/relation to him. Some of your lines were very comedic. But really, thats all most of your verse was.... comedy. You had about 2-3 lines that were hard jabs, especially towards the end like the closer. There were some lines that were a bit eh, despite having the humor in them. Tic, I was really feeling your verse. It seemed the punches that did connect were nice shots and your verse had more of a grimey feel to it than your opponent. The Strain and Third Rail lines were cool. But it was the second half of your verse that really took off. The Maury line was fresh and a stinger. I think my favorite line of the battle is your Misguided/Ebola line. Just came off smooth and delivered. Also liked the closer as well. Few misses like the opener, but the ones that did connect made up for it.
Entertaining battle, indeed. I thunk both really displayed some wits in this Elite 8 match up. While I enjoyed the humor and personal shots from Broke, I felt Tic just came a bit more harder overall. Both had misses, but when comparing the lines that connected, Tic just came much better in my opinion. Definitely see why this one is so tight. Good stuff. MVGT: Tic Tac. Good job by both competitors.
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in HS u moved weight cross country n' kept heat
u were so fucking boss u ran every block in Roslyn NY.............while training for ur next meet I remember when Donna said to pound the trim but b4 I reminisce ab old flames.................we can watch ur self-confidence go down in them i pick Mandy up to fuck n' she cling to the dude take her back to Sonic......place an order n' get a quickie in the whip b4 he brings us our food vs. I can’t get thru 1 of ya verses. w/ stretched bars each line is reachin I mean…The Strain is so bad it's beginning to make that show look kinda decent Ya girl loves my cock & bum so I’ll thrust til I see spots of cum I run the Train allll night & after the Third Rail it looks like she hopped on one There's a reason ya Promoting failed. You bombed, that's not good Ya audio Flat, Broke. And you couldn't give away Freestyles @ a Salon in the hood You're on ya last leg, embrace it homie. You winning? Not in this shit Just take ya Bags & leave text. You'll finally show ya Cum Into Grips...probably < his I felt Broke really OD'd on the family punches and most of them were exactly the same. Sex with this person....sex with that person, it really just got old. Some of them were executed really well, but others just had me thinking "okay...same thing again?". TicTac was up and down in his verse as well...some stuff that I've seen before like the dick in Bags reference and the Maury line, but he also had my favorite line of the battle with Third Rail. I think Broke could have easily taken this had he just used some of the personal lines and thrown in some other kinds of punches. With that said... V/ TicTac
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broke lesnar did something amazing here
all personal punches, with government names and shit that alone would have been enough, but then he came with amazing wordplay as well tic tac then dropped a verse doing exactly what broke said he would do, a bunch of bags personals, which just wasn't enough to come back from that lambasting v/BROKE |
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Opener was nuts Next meet was cool I've seen down in flames quite a bit, decent spin + personal makes it applicable Sonic bar was meh Damn. You nutting on their entire family bruh next bar was ight Arikok in eagle was cool D Bryan was cool Didn't get the closer tbh Edit: closer actually hits now reading tics verse Tic tac I mean... It's ok I guess. Overused concept plus super simple plus broke calling it makes this hit way less than it could have lol Te strain is ok Train bar was dope Flat broke was ok. But the concept on whole felt like a reach to mez idk. Maury was cool Ebola was Bleh to me Cum line bruh... Closer was k Broke got this I think. He probably shouldn't have fucked ALL of tic tacs friends and family... But tic tac just was very inconsistent to me Good battle though. Congrats on making it this far to both Broke
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@Paradigm, that makes it 7-5.
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