07-25-2014, 12:21 AM | #1 |
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07-30-2014, 01:29 AM | #2 |
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Orc’s dead, mad cuz I’m the favorite to win? you better gimme more cred I’ve been better than u… since the days multies had more squiggly lines than ur forehead It’s on! Got a 5 battle win streak on u, whether u posted verses or missed some Yea, no-shows are gay… but your last three ducks weren’t as feminine as this one Bet you’ll be blaming them, but u’re not winning! so why u complaining then? with that pink poncho… the only thing that could be on ur radar is Raining Men don’t be hating when, me fuckin ur mom should be the smallest of this geek’s trouble yes, we are tight… but at least it doesn’t affect your blood flow & make ya knees buckle queer u’re blind, ur style’s 30 yrs behind, my deadly punches would wreck & punk him this a good old fashion ass whoopin & I dare the 80’s frat boy with the sweater round his neck to jump in honestly, what u know about drive-bys with gangstas holdin a nine? This phony would die cuz in my city if they roll-up they’re blowin ur mind, in urs… they’re like show me your thighs! I’m here to beat-up gays, I could give three fucks who these retards praise This just looks like the beard evolution chart got stuck in the peach fuzz phase drinkin a couple of beers is what u call partying? I take 10 shots to start, coward u don’t know how to get faded… so u go to the barber & ask for the Marv Alberts
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07-30-2014, 01:35 AM | #3 |
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Orc: ur a 40 yr old man wearing a 16yr old fathers clothes wow. it's ironic this dude drinking Fosters & his Children would rather those dude, hell.. u looking like moms spoiled u at a huge sale they say 40's the new 30.. but judging by ur dress sense it's the new 12 wow. that pics really cool from a Jordan lover but Kobe fan so u're a Step Away from that 23... now just do that to the clothing brand This 37yr old text vet aint never Hall of famed. was it worth it!? U've Cracked Under Pressure enuff times to makes that Pavement look perfect Nik u an old ass dude.. son ya prolly wheeze if you laugh how u rocking Jumpman. if you ever did that both ya Knees would collapse Nik's hair fading.. tho we ain't ever thought you get a hoe U don't got a Hint of gray. that's a full Cheat Book & Walkthrough Video it's reaaal sad how u come across to other men when ya type ironic U wearing Terminator glasses. & we all hoping u put an end to ya life U a flabby faggot with nuthin' remaining of past brawn That arm is an 'Awful Tense Situation' like the docs explaining ya passed on |
07-30-2014, 12:00 PM | #4 |
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dope shit by both
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07-30-2014, 01:10 PM | #5 |
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I must agree with Hush. This was the strongest showing of the tournament thus far, which is no surprise.
ill nik-A: Your biggest hits were the beard evolution line and the pink poncho line, but most of your verse connected. The duck line would've been a standout had he been making a duck face. The thighs line similarly didn't work because that's not happening in the photo. I found your setups formulaic and often a bit lame, but most are. This verse was strong. Orc: No one told you to stop capitalizing your concepts? The hint of gray and 23 lines were your best, but you also had no major misses. The Terminator line was weak, and the Fosters line was worded poorly. You used "wow" to start two of your first three punches. I think what costs you this very close battle is your last handful of lines. You weren't as harsh as ill nik-A and ended weakly. Vote: ill nik-A |
07-30-2014, 01:13 PM | #6 |
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I think ducks is in ref to them ducking in the picture.
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07-30-2014, 02:30 PM | #7 |
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It’s on! Got a 5 battle win streak on u, whether u posted verses or missed some
Yea, no-shows are gay… but your last three ducks weren’t as feminine as this one Bet you’ll be blaming them, but u’re not winning! so why u complaining then? with that pink poncho… the only thing that could be on ur radar is Raining Men don’t be hating when, me fuckin ur mom should be the smallest of this geek’s trouble yes, we are tight… but at least it doesn’t affect your blood flow & make ya knees buckle queer u’re blind, ur style’s 30 yrs behind, my deadly punches would wreck & punk him this a good old fashion ass whoopin & I dare the 80’s frat boy with the sweater round his neck to jump in - Dope references using the picture, props. vs wow. that pics really cool from a Jordan lover but Kobe fan so u're a Step Away from that 23... now just do that to the clothing brand This 37yr old text vet aint never Hall of famed. was it worth it!? U've Cracked Under Pressure enuff times to makes that Pavement look perfect Nik u an old ass dude.. son ya prolly wheeze if you laugh how u rocking Jumpman. if you ever did that both ya Knees would collapse Nik's hair fading.. tho we ain't ever thought you get a hoe U don't got a Hint of gray. that's a full Cheat Book & Walkthrough Video - Solid references. OVERALL: This was a dope battle, actually. Enjoyed both verses, however, do feel Nik edges this tho w/ consistency. Nik's Duck, Pink Poncho & Fashion ass whoopin bars were dope, IMO. vs Orc's crack under pressure & Jumpman bars were his strongest connections. Dope battle fellas but... v/NiK |
07-31-2014, 04:54 AM | #8 |
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Awesome battle.
Squiggly lines was cool just cuz both of you have been around for a long time. Ducks was ight Raining men was a nice jab The one about his mom was dirty and rude bro. Dirty and rude The one about his friend with the sweater missed bad for me tbh The show me your thighs was corny IMO Beard evolition was cool Marv Albert was lulz As for Ireland Fosters line was worded awkward IMO, cool concept it just didn't hit for me New 12 was alright Step away was dope Pavement cracked line was very meh Jump man was solid Hint of gray was swag. Really nice Terminator glasses was ok. Wasn't feeling it to much Closer was ok . Idk. It's close. Nik with the lotb gets it for me tho Voting nik
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07-31-2014, 05:05 AM | #9 |
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It’s on! Got a 5 battle win streak on u, whether u posted verses or missed some Yea, no-shows are gay… but your last three ducks weren’t as feminine as this one Bet you’ll be blaming them, but u’re not winning! so why u complaining then? with that pink poncho… the only thing that could be on ur radar is Raining Men don’t be hating when, me fuckin ur mom should be the smallest of this geek’s trouble yes, we are tight… but at least it doesn’t affect your blood flow & make ya knees buckle queer u’re blind, ur style’s 30 yrs behind, my deadly punches would wreck & punk him this a good old fashion ass whoopin & I dare the 80’s frat boy with the sweater round his neck to jump in Orc dude, hell.. u looking like moms spoiled u at a huge sale they say 40's the new 30.. but judging by ur dress sense it's the new 12 wow. that pics really cool from a Jordan lover but Kobe fan so u're a Step Away from that 23... now just do that to the clothing brand This 37yr old text vet aint never Hall of famed. was it worth it!? U've Cracked Under Pressure enuff times to makes that Pavement look perfect Nik u an old ass dude.. son ya prolly wheeze if you laugh how u rocking Jumpman. if you ever did that both ya Knees would collapse Nik's hair fading.. tho we ain't ever thought you get a hoe U don't got a Hint of gray. that's a full Cheat Book & Walkthrough Video it's reaaal sad how u come across to other men when ya type ironic U wearing Terminator glasses. & we all hoping u put an end to ya life U a flabby faggot with nuthin' remaining of past brawn That arm is an 'Awful Tense Situation' like the docs explaining ya passed on Okay, so I have this 7-4 Orc, but it was a lot closer than that. The 4 bars I quoted from Nik were all part of a segment that was pretty fucking brutal. Great, great stuff. Orc had alot of funny material for a pic where he didn't have as much to go on as Nik did. I thought his opener, had it been worded better, could of been LOTB. The New 12 and awful tense closer were my favorite quotes from Orc. LOTB honors go to Nik for that entire segment. I think it was strong enough to match 4, maybe even 5 bars that Orc had. Hilarious stuff guys. v-Orc |
07-31-2014, 08:30 AM | #10 |
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I’ve been better than u… since the days multies had more squiggly lines than ur forehead -this is Crack-in-a-Way cuz that was my style Back-in-da-day with that pink poncho… the only thing that could be on ur radar is Raining Men -haha don’t be hating when, me fuckin ur mom should be the smallest of this geek’s trouble yes, we are tight… but at least it doesn’t affect your blood flow & make ya knees buckle -think the mom jokes are corny fa' real I dare the 80’s frat boy with the sweater round his neck to jump in -haha ok verse..thought ur last round was stronger...lotta lines seemed stretched to me an juz didn't really connect ORC_ they say 40's the new 30.. but judging by ur dress sense it's the new 12 -haha so u're a Step Away from that 23... now just do that to the clothing brand -diggin' that U've Cracked Under Pressure enuff times to makes that Pavement look perfect -Whoa how u rocking Jumpman. if you ever did that both ya Knees would collapse -haha U don't got a Hint of gray. that's a full Cheat Book & Walkthrough Video -Yesssiiiir fire endin was straight... overall orc has better flow bars were set up a lil' nicer in my eyez...harder punches too Vote- ORC |
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07-31-2014, 12:52 PM | #12 |
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Nik
Orc’s dead, mad cuz I’m the favorite to win? you better gimme more cred I’ve been better than u… since the days multies had more squiggly lines than ur forehead It’s on! Got a 5 battle win streak on u, whether u posted verses or missed some Yea, no-shows are gay… but your last three ducks weren’t as feminine as this one Bet you’ll be blaming them, but u’re not winning! so why u complaining then? with that pink poncho… the only thing that could be on ur radar is Raining Men don’t be hating when, me fuckin ur mom should be the smallest of this geek’s trouble yes, we are tight… but at least it doesn’t affect your blood flow & make ya knees buckle queer u’re blind, ur style’s 30 yrs behind, my deadly punches would wreck & punk him this a good old fashion ass whoopin & I dare the 80’s frat boy with the sweater round his neck to jump in honestly, what u know about drive-bys with gangstas holdin a nine? This phony would die cuz in my city if they roll-up they’re blowin ur mind, in urs… they’re like show me your thighs! I’m here to beat-up gays, I could give three fucks who these retards praise This just looks like the beard evolution chart got stuck in the peach fuzz phase Orc ur a 40 yr old man wearing a 16yr old fathers clothes wow. it's ironic this dude drinking Fosters & his Children would rather those dude, hell.. u looking like moms spoiled u at a huge sale they say 40's the new 30.. but judging by ur dress sense it's the new 12 wow. that pics really cool from a Jordan lover but Kobe fan so u're a Step Away from that 23... now just do that to the clothing brand This 37yr old text vet aint never Hall of famed. was it worth it!? U've Cracked Under Pressure enuff times to makes that Pavement look perfect Nik's hair fading.. tho we ain't ever thought you get a hoe U don't got a Hint of gray. that's a full Cheat Book & Walkthrough Video it's reaaal sad how u come across to other men when ya type ironic U wearing Terminator glasses. & we all hoping u put an end to ya life First let me say this is battle of the week hands down. Okay Orc knows he's my brother but i feel he got edged on this one and real niggas vote fair, Both was throwing haymakers back to back to back but I feel like Nik's verse was almost perfect aside from a couple lines, his shit was hilarious, Orc dropped some bombs but because all the ones that hit were so solid and clean the ones that missed looked a little bad... this is one of the best pic battles i've ever read though props to both, can't wait to see who wins this cause its definitely gonna go back and forth. V/Nik
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07-31-2014, 01:30 PM | #13 |
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vs step away, crack under pressure I got nik w/ one more quotable good shit from both v/nik |
07-31-2014, 03:55 PM | #14 |
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08-02-2014, 03:57 PM | #15 |
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I can't lie though, Nik had me laughing although that pic was just too easy. Orc had a few good lines but to me it just wasn't near the same level of consistency. Nik did have the one whack bar about the kid jumping in, didn't hit at all. But aside from that I liked the rest a lot. While orc was consistent, but consistently decent only. Foster line was dope though.
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08-03-2014, 08:06 PM | #16 |
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Close.
Nik better wording. Orc had lotb with pavement. Nik was more creative imo. Terminator n ass whoopin were about even misses. Ima Go with nik for consistency n more variety to his wording. V nik |
08-03-2014, 08:07 PM | #17 |
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ill nik-A wins 7-3.
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