[BA S&F] Alvin Karpis [VS] Camp Bell [Alvin Karpis WINS]

[Paradigm]

BA Swag and Flow Tournament

@Alvin Karpis @Camp Bell

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due SATURDAY,
  July 26th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due FRIDAY, July 25th 2014
• Voting ends MONDAY July 28th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours
• You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 12 lines
• Max. = 24 lines
• Limit MUST be agreed upon

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will be disqualified.
• A check in IS mandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Camp Bell]

......i keep a cal strapped when i'm on the bluegrass haze...
.....aye, in case i gotta flash on a wildcat then blast you, k?
if i'm scoping views, your life overdue.....i got past due range
my bullets is covert too, so jus relax.....the pass through late
action jackson with a tattooed face, cooking crack two ways
i'll give you this work with half the passion in a fast food pace
i've scrapped with galactus, you'll get dragged through space
i been evil, i'll leak dude til vin diesel splashed on saturns rings
i'm meeting hov when the round done, i need a match to flame
my doubts reasonable cuz this al bum, just faded to black w/jay
the black david blaine, training statements to eliminate this trick
i drowned a week ago but got ya act on display, entertaining kids

[Paradigm]

Alvin Karpis:

You soft hater just watch player, I’ll have my goons masked up like Darth Vader
I’m a lot greater….& I get cake w/ out leavin the crib I’m like Lebron’s neighbors
I’m a reefer blazer so If I ever meet my maker, I’ll be puffin trees bumpin Anita Baker
What I achieved is greater n I’m a fiend for danger…. I hold shit down & don’t need an anchor
You run the streets w/ traitors not g’s and players I’m smart like Screech but a beast like Slater
Obscene behavior, I’ll travel back in time & smack the shit outta ya mother while she’s in labor
Dudes amped but my goons clap n hold the steel that’ll explode ya grill, I’m the true champ
They’ll roll n peel, you’ll fold n squeal….cuz you know the drill when they Boot Camp
Fuck food stamps, I know dealers on the block that’ll have the the heat drawn
When the police gone they got that white girl in each palm like King Kong
You wack as hell Camp’ll yell when I body em they can’t track his smell
Come catch this L, I’m makin history and takin ya Liberty when I crack this Bell

[Paradigm]

Open for votes. Get links up please.

[Camp Bell]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=74883
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=84640

[Paradigm]

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

......i keep a cal strapped when i'm on the bluegrass haze...
.....aye, in case i gotta flash on a wildcat then blast you, k?
Cool, solid
if i'm scoping views, your life overdue.....i got past due range
my bullets is covert too, so jus relax.....the pass through late
connection isnt there swag off... past due range wat
action jackson with a tattooed face, cooking crack two ways
i'll give you this work with half the passion in a fast food pace
you are sacraficing content for multis
i've scrapped with galactus, you'll get dragged through space
i been evil, i'll leak dude til vin diesel splashed on saturns rings
doesnt rhyme content isnt there bro
i'm meeting hov when the round done, i need a match to flame
my doubts reasonable cuz this al bum, just faded to black w/jay
this concept played kind of a stretch
the black david blaine, training statements to eliminate this trick
i drowned a week ago but got ya act on display, entertaining kids
nah content. connection is weak

Originally Posted by Paradigm

Alvin Karpis:

You soft hater just watch player, I’ll have my goons masked up like Darth Vader
I’m a lot greater….& I get cake w/ out leavin the crib I’m like Lebron’s neighbors
lol nice
I’m a reefer blazer so If I ever meet my maker, I’ll be puffin trees bumpin Anita Baker
What I achieved is greater n I’m a fiend for danger…. I hold shit down & don’t need an anchor
weak concept. lol at ur multis
You run the streets w/ traitors not g’s and players I’m smart like Screech but a beast like Slater
Obscene behavior, I’ll travel back in time & smack the shit outta ya mother while she’s in labor
cool flow content lacking here tho
Dudes amped but my goons clap n hold the steel that’ll explode ya grill, I’m the true champ
They’ll roll n peel, you’ll fold n squeal….cuz you know the drill when they Boot Camp
okish... multis cool
Fuck food stamps, I know dealers on the block that’ll have the the heat drawn
When the police gone they got that white girl in each palm like King Kong
this is cool
You wack as hell Camp’ll yell when I body em they can’t track his smell
Come catch this L, I’m makin history and takin ya Liberty when I crack this Bell
ehhhhhh ok

Both lacked content and sacrificed it for multi syllable schemes. Content > metaphors > concepts > rhyme schemes and multis. Both kind of had the same flow and schemes. Alvin had better concepts albeit simple was enough to take it here.

Vote: Alvin Karpis

[Zen]

It's gonna be quick because I'm on my phone.

Camp Bell you had a good flow in the first half even though it was a bit predictable. After the Saturn line the verse seemed to go downhill from there. There wasn't much creativity here either which is something I'd expect from an S&F verse. I've seen much better from you.

Alvin Karpis you're verse had much better concepts. The Lebron line could've been much better if it was reworded somehow, but the boot camp bar was great I thought. Line of the battle imo. This was cool.

V/Alvin Karpis

[Sho Money EMG]

Karp is a fucking beast lol

Vote ap
Slater skreeth
Crack bell
Boot camp

Loved it g

No quotables from cb, cool flow but forced alot of shit for the sake of havin multis connect

[Paradigm]

I fucked up on the voting rules. Voting is supposed to end Wednesday. Championship Rules. First to 7. 5-0 KO.

This is now for the title.

3-0 Alvin Karpis

[Certain]

Camp Bell: I liked the Kentucky opener a lot, as it was kept subtle enough that it worked even if someone missed the connections. The fast food line also was good, and the Saturn line could have worked had "rings" rhymed with "space." But your verse never connected. This is a swag-and-flow battle, so it really shouldn't feel like couplets strung together. You never had real swagger here and never picked up momentum.

Alvin Karpis: This is a huge step up from last round. Your punchlines are sharp, and you kept the rhymes coming in droves. It also had a smoother cadence than last round. I was impressed here. Almost every line had something worth noticing. If anything, you could probably tone down the creativity in favor of a little more swagger. This verse was on the level required if you want to compete with Neighbor (or is this the championship now?).

Vote: Alvin Karpis

[ribbit]

Aye i also got alvin taking this with better concepts and harder hitting punches thot it seemed like he put a lot of thot into his verses whereas camp bell just seemed to be trying to hard with his concepts i also liked the boot camp and liberty bell nameplays

[jilti]

Campbell..
liked the first half of ur verse, not so much the second half. Flow was on point, just needed content to match. These were ur standout lines..

if i'm scoping views, your life overdue.....i got past due range
my bullets is covert too, so jus relax.....the pass through late
action jackson with a tattooed face, cooking crack two ways
i'll give you this work with half the passion in a fast food pace


Alvin..
Liked every bar except the last one. These bars were fire..

Dudes amped but my goons clap n hold the steel that’ll explode ya grill, I’m the true champ
They’ll roll n peel, you’ll fold n squeal….cuz you know the drill when they Boot Camp
Fuck food stamps, I know dealers on the block that’ll have the the heat drawn
When the police gone they got that white girl in each palm like King Kong

also enjoyed the lebron line


so mvgt Alvin

[Paradigm]

Alvin Karpis wins.

The new S&F Champion.

Alvin Karpis: (3) +5W-2links=6pts
Camp Bell: (0) -3L+2Links=0pts