BLACK - Padmasana

Zen · 06-11-2014, 03:12 PM

I get angry when I read a piece from you because you have an almost poetic grasp of language and rhyming that I can only tap into on a base level. You've mastered it.

You're descriptions of settings are your strongest point I think. You paint pictures with your lyrics. The nitrous to muscles ripping apart section was my favorite example of that in this section. In all honesty that's a great talent that could be utilized better than topicals. I'm trying to sit down now in my free time and write a novel, you should absolutely at least attempt to write one. Seriously.

Well, I think I've patted you on the back enough lol. Enjoyed as always. Peace.

06-11-2014, 03:12 PM	#1
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I get angry when I read a piece from you because you have an almost poetic grasp of language and rhyming that I can only tap into on a base level. You've mastered it. You're descriptions of settings are your strongest point I think. You paint pictures with your lyrics. The nitrous to muscles ripping apart section was my favorite example of that in this section. In all honesty that's a great talent that could be utilized better than topicals. I'm trying to sit down now in my free time and write a novel, you should absolutely at least attempt to write one. Seriously. Well, I think I've patted you on the back enough lol. Enjoyed as always. Peace.