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Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow. An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does. Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds Allen Knight Anthony aka old dirty bagstard aka jim blaze aka sharted while working out Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene We all kno u fuck w/ dudes & pick'em up at gay bars Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag only dude to win custody of his kid, ...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag
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Eats her heart out was lol. String of dudes was alright, played concept tho. Rest was ok'ish - opener was funny too, tho.
Vs Gym membership was lol, casey anthony was dope, IMO. Grave yard was eh, photo bomb could have been executed better. Concept dope but execution dissappointed me. Closer was cool too. V/AK - consist, IMO. Think his punches landed effectively. Bags verse was pretty good tho, definitely a cool battle. Was actually impressed by Bags. Dude actually pretty nice with it. Props to both! |
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And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow. An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording vs Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene 3 v 3 for the quotables imo, yet ak had the lotb with gold gym that shit was hilarious and tbh nothing else really missed from ak, photo bomb n the dirt on top of men were both good and if tweaked a bit would've bin quotables for sure..custody/record a mag was a pretty direct hit as well. bags verse was consistent as well but just didn't have the same impact ak did through out so for that i have ak getting the dub. dope battle |
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And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow. An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does. Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds vs Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag only dude to win custody of his kid, ...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag excellent battle gentlemen...I think Allen had a stronger verse here...bags had good lines but AK had that fire in his writing... v/AK
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And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does. Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds Vs. Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag only dude to win custody of his kid, ...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag Man this was a dope and close battle and could really go either way depending on preference bags had a string of hard hitting lines but damn that closer from ak was funny as fuck and hit for me, I like those kinda direct hits tho hence y this is based on preference close but.. Vote is for Ak |
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Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent
Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts float rent/ joe metts? barely. punch is funny though nice concept And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet "u ain't about that life" isn't that a miley cyrus line? creative angle for a decent hit But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow. An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out funny shit, made me laugh but the flip was pretty obvious All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule naa, just didn't connect.. both the flip and wording was prety weak But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording seen far too many alkaline flips before for this to have an impact, tad stretched An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does. Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds didn't like it.. wording wasn't great and the concept was weak started off really strong, went pretty creative.. a couple of good together but seemed to tail off towards the end, might of run outta inspiration.. but some good clowning in there vs Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public hahaha funny shit, good way to open the verse.. Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club oh jeez, your going in like that? very direct personal AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene nice flip on concept, creative and it worked well good setup too We all kno u fuck w/ dudes & pick'em up at gay bars Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard funny, but there's just no impact from the punch, obvious really U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter made me laugh out loud, rhyme could've been smoother but it didn't matter Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag only dude to win custody of his kid, ...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag hahaha, truuee.. probaby not really. i'd hope not anyway. kinda obvious flip tho went off straight from the start, strong momentum and kept it interesting with a few different angles and creative flips, the verse was mostly well worded.. with a few low points also but came off the stronger of the two verses to me v/allen
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Bags I liked the eat your heart out line and time capsule lines. Most of your verse was pretty funny I thought it was pretty good.
Ak I liked the hitches explode in laughter line...was prob the lotb to be honest record the mag was ok...ww2 line was kinds tucked up lol.. I thought this was a good a battle and even though Ak had the lotb I was feeling bags a little bit more I'm not sure why but I think he made me laugh more with that eat her heart out line.. Good job fellas Vote bags |
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first read i thought allen won it clearly but i read again and changed my mind. the alkaline was creative and fire and so was the fire cracker. time capsule was ill too. allens verse was funny tho and photobomb was lotb. i liked the closer too. i thin Bags's verse was a little more creative and technical & im swayed towards that. ill battle tho best i've read in a while. i think Bags got it. dope shit gents
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Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent
Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts lold And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet didn't like it But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow. An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out lmao All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule Nah But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording Dope An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does. Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds Cool vs Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public saw it coming but still lold Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club Damn lol AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene Cool wordplay, kinda old concept but it was cool We all kno u fuck w/ dudes & pick'em up at gay bars Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard nah U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter not bad Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag only dude to win custody of his kid, ...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag lmao Allen's last bar was probably my favourite of the battle, but bags had two (the eat your heart out & alkaline bars) that made me lol irl. Both had some nice personals, which isn't surprising cuz they are used to insulting each other, but I got bags taking it, barely.
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V/ak...Both came with some stuff but Allen had harder hits but this was Def a nice battle props |
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Bags had shadow puppet, time capsule... Cash McDs was good current event flip, alkaline was ok, firecracker had great creativity. One of the better, cleaner verses I've read from Bags. Good stuff
AK had Casey Anthony, gold gym was ok but I'm picky in certain instances and it's golds gym, rest of verse was cool concepts but reminded me of concepts I would have on a throwaway verse. Good battle, Bags wins here.
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Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent
Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow. An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag only dude to win custody of his kid, ...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag close as fuck... same number of quotes but I thought aks were just a little harder hitting overall but this could totally go either way v/allen |
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Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts ---u know this ain't a punch. Wasted And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet ---fire But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow. An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out --like it All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule --nah light But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording --seen it to much ok flip tho An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does. Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds --dece Allen Knight Anthony aka old dirty bagstard aka jim blaze aka sharted while working out Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public --ok Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club --lol dig it AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene --- dayum fire We all kno u fuck w/ dudes & pick'em up at gay bars Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard --light U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter --lotb Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag only dude to win custody of his kid, ...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag --straight foward dig it V/ Allen
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@Allen Knight, I just got to reading this. Definitely the best verse I've read from you (not that I've read that many). How long were you sitting on some of these concepts, though?
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And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow. An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out vs Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag only dude to win custody of his kid, ...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag not that close of battle & Allen ended it with the Casey Anthony line was fucking sick ... good shit fellas .. Allen came with some sick fucking concepts .. while bags on the other hand was trying to be funny and use statement bars instead of swinging. |
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