Cymbicort vs. Phuck Yew - PHUCK WINS

CymbiCort · 11-25-2013, 01:13 PM

10 lines.
Due whenever
Try not to take a piss.

Check.

KwaL!ty · 11-25-2013, 01:50 PM

@CymbiCort il show by saturday.

@Sharp Nine

Cym's links:

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=27505
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=214983#post214983

My links:

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=24994
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=31362

^^^ i edited in the links instead of another post ..

CymbiCort · 11-25-2013, 04:29 PM

@Phuck Yew Cool.same here. Ill most likely have it up by tonight.

CymbiCort · 11-25-2013, 09:29 PM

It took me 3 months to acknowledge this fag wanted to battle me
Now watch as I make 'Phuck Come To an End" like Penis Amputees
My Strategies to leave you lifeless like used dry cells
Should I send anthrax to his crib..? nahhhh, he already got killed by Mael..
last night my dick went between your mom's titties
Bag on her head to Void' coming to An ugly Conclusion like Yew vs .my dog, Witty.
I'm ready to bomb ya riders while my dick drips wit ya moms saliva
And leave Phuck dead in a hole like necrophiliacs with Saddams Advisors
You look like Shrek.do chicks a favor. Give In to ya Health
In ur Pic battle with Rican I couldn't tell if you were dissing Him or Yourself!

Cym.

KwaL!ty · 11-26-2013, 09:54 AM

@CymbiCort

Quote:

Originally Private Messaged By -CymbiCort
Message Subject: Battle?

10-15 lines ya down?

that Message you sent i felt was a claim you could see me?
so i decided to show up in 'Sims Town' ... w/ no intention of playing games 'On The Pc'
ur lame shit is easy! i'll nail ya if ya try to step
no Asthma Attack as i ruin 'Symbicort Breathing' from 1 shot like an 'Inhalers Side Effects'
why ya flex? the 'Marge'in il beat you by, will leave this head in a baggie
to prove this battle is a 'Cymp son' & will end w/ 'Homers' & me making a 'Maggie'
Dead@ ur avy! in your last 4 battles you've lost, at least let the scars set
quick to 'Swipe CC' of anything that hes 'Banking On' ... quicker then 'Credit Card Theft'
stop acting like a hard vet, ur a 'North Pole' rapper we 'Doubt Ur Heat'
& if you keep 'Lion' il give 'Simba Threat' that'll provoke him to jump from 'Mountain Peaks'

enjoy!

Puma · 11-26-2013, 11:02 PM

I honestly felt Cym took it...

His punchline's just hit harder and he was witty with almost every line.
And personally that's what get's me the most.... you gotta just come with straight punches all day. And in this case Cym came more prepared with that..
No hate to Phuck you did your thing... but damn that Necrophilac line was insane imo.

V/Cym

Good bout.

Lotto Smirk · 12-07-2013, 06:06 AM

I think phuck just slightly edged this punches was on point few good nameplays,think cym come good just not good enough in this battle

mvgt- phuck

Zen · 12-10-2013, 11:52 AM

Cym: The opener was very weak in my opinion and what followed was more of the same from that point on. Better wording and they would have hit harder. The best part of this was it was all directed at phuck instead of generic punch lines.

Phuck: Wasn't feeling too much of this to be honest. I enjoyed your verse against lotto but not too much here. There were some creative ideas here, but your wording was a little off as well. Still, I think you did enough for the W.

V/Phuck

KwaL!ty · 12-10-2013, 04:00 PM

2-1

Texcellence · 12-12-2013, 10:58 AM

You look like Shrek.do chicks a favor. Give In to ya Health
In ur Pic battle with Rican I couldn't tell if you were dissing Him or Yourself!

CymbiCort I wasn't feeling your verse at all. Your last line was probably your best despite the terrible set up.

\/s

that Message you sent i felt was a claim you could see me?
so i decided to show up in 'Sims Town' ... w/ no intention of playing games 'On The Pc'

Dead@ ur avy! in your last 4 battles you've lost, at least let the scars set
quick to 'Swipe CC' of anything that hes 'Banking On' ... quicker then 'Credit Card Theft'

I didn't realize dudes were still doing 'this' to emphasize their schemes! But overall a much better verse. I feel you had some good concepts that you didn't execute very well but the effort was there along with a few more punches which is why I am giving my vote to: Phuck Yew

KwaL!ty · 12-17-2013, 09:22 AM

3-1 uppin for some feed ..

Texcellence · 12-17-2013, 09:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phuck Yew

3-1 uppin for some feed ..

Vote on some battles.

Bender · 01-02-2014, 01:06 PM

It took me 3 months to acknowledge this fag wanted to battle me
Now watch as I make 'Phuck Come To an End" like Penis Amputees

look like Shrek.do chicks a favor. Give In to ya Health
In ur Pic battle with Rican I couldn't tell if you were dissing Him or Yourself!

vs

stop acting like a hard vet, ur a 'North Pole' rapper we 'Doubt Ur Heat'
& if you keep 'Lion' il give 'Simba Threat' that'll provoke him to jump from 'Mountain Peaks'

I gotta say Cym barely edged it, I liked Yew's last line that was cool but other than that there wasn't alot of hard hitters, most were kind of forced.

Vote-Cymbicort

Dope girl · 01-03-2014, 06:48 PM

Vote- Cym
Reasons: I felt like his verse stronger than P, Punchlines hit harder than P.

Simon SeversTons · 01-04-2014, 07:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phuck Yew

@CymbiCort

that Message you sent i felt was a claim you could see me?
so i decided to show up in 'Sims Town' ... w/ no intention of playing games 'On The Pc'

^ This was ehh. Not bad. Alright opener.

ur lame shit is easy! i'll nail ya if ya try to step
no Asthma Attack as i ruin 'Symbicort Breathing' from 1 shot like an 'Inhalers Side Effects'

^ Pretty consistant.

why ya flex? the 'Marge'in il beat you by, will leave this head in a baggie
to prove this battle is a 'Cymp son' & will end w/ 'Homers' & me making a 'Maggie'

^ Umm... The wordplay in this was alright. Nothing major.

Dead@ ur avy! in your last 4 battles you've lost, at least let the scars set
quick to 'Swipe CC' of anything that hes 'Banking On' ... quicker then 'Credit Card Theft'

^ Hmmmm... a bit better, probably one of your best lines.

stop acting like a hard vet, ur a 'North Pole' rapper we 'Doubt Ur Heat'
& if you keep 'Lion' il give 'Simba Threat' that'll provoke him to jump from 'Mountain Peaks'

^ This was a bad ender.

enjoy!

Simon SeversTons · 01-04-2014, 07:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CymbiCort

It took me 3 months to acknowledge this fag wanted to battle me
Now watch as I make 'Phuck Come To an End" like Penis Amputees

^ This was ehh... a bit corny and really played.

My Strategies to leave you lifeless like used dry cells
Should I send anthrax to his crib..? nahhhh, he already got killed by Mael..

^ This was another ehh line. Couldve done more.

last night my dick went between your mom's titties
Bag on her head to Void' coming to An ugly Conclusion like Yew vs .my dog, Witty.

^ Word play on Bags, Void, Conclusion... not bad.

I'm ready to bomb ya riders while my dick drips wit ya moms saliva
And leave Phuck dead in a hole like necrophiliacs with Saddams Advisors

^ Didnt like this line. Really forced. Bad line you wrote.

You look like Shrek.do chicks a favor. Give In to ya Health
In ur Pic battle with Rican I couldn't tell if you were dissing Him or Yourself!
^ Got a chuckle out of me. Line was ehh.

Cym.

Tbh... My conclusion:

Phuck Yew - Had bars and a set of multisyllable rhymes. Several lines did hit but they were a little light yet still were average at best. Felt like you couldve came from a different angle and approach to overcome Cymbicort officially. Not definitiely your best bars though.

Cymbicort - You started off a bit rocky in your opener. But managed to succeed to pull out some hitters, felt like you forced a whole alot of times like that saddam line. Yeah, I wasnt feeling that line. You need to write and think more carefully before youre okay with the stuff you post. Nevertheless, this battle shows potential.

MVGT: Phuck Yew.

KwaL!ty · 01-07-2014, 10:40 AM

4-2 or 4-3?

01-08-2014, 10:20 AM

It took me 3 months to acknowledge this fag wanted to battle me
Now watch as I make 'Phuck Come To an End" like Penis Amputees

Think you could have played with this concept a little more. Could have been taken in a different direction to have more of an impact. Your wording kind of made it come off statement'ish, IMO.

My Strategies to leave you lifeless like used dry cells
Should I send anthrax to his crib..? nahhhh, he already got killed by Mael..

I take it, this is a personal shot. Mediocre.

last night my dick went between your mom's titties
Bag on her head to Void' coming to An ugly Conclusion like Yew vs .my dog, Witty.

Another personal shot, I'm assuming. Not feeling it tho, way to statement'ish rather then a diss.

I'm ready to bomb ya riders while my dick drips wit ya moms saliva
And leave Phuck dead in a hole like necrophiliacs with Saddams Advisors

Don't like this simile, tbh.

You look like Shrek.do chicks a favor. Give In to ya Health
In ur Pic battle with Rican I couldn't tell if you were dissing Him or Yourself!

Way to basic, not effective, IMO.

vs

that Message you sent i felt was a claim you could see me?
so i decided to show up in 'Sims Town' ... w/ no intention of playing games 'On The Pc'

Cool concept/Play off his name but came off statement'ish, IMO.

ur lame shit is easy! i'll nail ya if ya try to step
no Asthma Attack as i ruin 'Symbicort Breathing' from 1 shot like an 'Inhalers Side Effects'

Had to read this a few times, wording a little off but I see the concept and name play, decent.

why ya flex? the 'Marge'in il beat you by, will leave this head in a baggie
to prove this battle is a 'Cymp son' & will end w/ 'Homers' & me making a 'Maggie'

Forced IMO.

Dead@ ur avy! in your last 4 battles you've lost, at least let the scars set
quick to 'Swipe CC' of anything that hes 'Banking On' ... quicker then 'Credit Card Theft'

Cool concept/Name play.

stop acting like a hard vet, ur a 'North Pole' rapper we 'Doubt Ur Heat'
& if you keep 'Lion' il give 'Simba Threat' that'll provoke him to jump from 'Mountain Peaks'

Lion/Lying word plays are mad played but you executed it well here considering the play off of his name. Decent.

IMO: This battle was pretty one sided. Phuck definitely had way more of a consistent verse with a lot more creativity and plays off of his opponents name. Props to both, not too bad.

Vote: Phuck.

KwaL!ty · 01-08-2014, 11:36 AM

@Sharp Nine this one is finished either 5-2 or 5-3 either way I win ..

11-25-2013, 01:13 PM	#1
CymbiCort Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 184 Battle Record: 4-13 Rep Power: 34	Cymbicort vs. Phuck Yew - PHUCK WINS 10 lines. Due whenever Try not to take a piss. Check.

11-25-2013, 01:50 PM	#2
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	@CymbiCort il show by saturday. @Sharp Nine Cym's links: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=27505 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=214983#post214983 My links: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=24994 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=31362 ^^^ i edited in the links instead of another post .. Last edited by KwaL!ty; 11-26-2013 at 11:15 AM.

11-25-2013, 09:29 PM	#4
CymbiCort Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 184 Battle Record: 4-13 Rep Power: 34	It took me 3 months to acknowledge this fag wanted to battle me Now watch as I make 'Phuck Come To an End" like Penis Amputees My Strategies to leave you lifeless like used dry cells Should I send anthrax to his crib..? nahhhh, he already got killed by Mael.. last night my dick went between your mom's titties Bag on her head to Void' coming to An ugly Conclusion like Yew vs .my dog, Witty. I'm ready to bomb ya riders while my dick drips wit ya moms saliva And leave Phuck dead in a hole like necrophiliacs with Saddams Advisors You look like Shrek.do chicks a favor. Give In to ya Health In ur Pic battle with Rican I couldn't tell if you were dissing Him or Yourself! Cym. Last edited by CymbiCort; 11-26-2013 at 09:31 PM.

11-25-2013, 04:29 PM	#3
CymbiCort Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 184 Battle Record: 4-13 Rep Power: 34	@Phuck Yew Cool.same here. Ill most likely have it up by tonight.

11-26-2013, 11:02 PM	#6
Puma Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 17 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	I honestly felt Cym took it... His punchline's just hit harder and he was witty with almost every line. And personally that's what get's me the most.... you gotta just come with straight punches all day. And in this case Cym came more prepared with that.. No hate to Phuck you did your thing... but damn that Necrophilac line was insane imo. V/Cym Good bout.

12-07-2013, 06:06 AM	#7
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665830	I think phuck just slightly edged this punches was on point few good nameplays,think cym come good just not good enough in this battle mvgt- phuck

12-10-2013, 11:52 AM	#8
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	Cym: The opener was very weak in my opinion and what followed was more of the same from that point on. Better wording and they would have hit harder. The best part of this was it was all directed at phuck instead of generic punch lines. Phuck: Wasn't feeling too much of this to be honest. I enjoyed your verse against lotto but not too much here. There were some creative ideas here, but your wording was a little off as well. Still, I think you did enough for the W. V/Phuck

12-10-2013, 04:00 PM	#9
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	2-1

12-12-2013, 10:58 AM	#10
Texcellence 7 were no shows Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 193 Battle Record: 0-11 Rep Power: 0	You look like Shrek.do chicks a favor. Give In to ya Health In ur Pic battle with Rican I couldn't tell if you were dissing Him or Yourself! CymbiCort I wasn't feeling your verse at all. Your last line was probably your best despite the terrible set up. \/s that Message you sent i felt was a claim you could see me? so i decided to show up in 'Sims Town' ... w/ no intention of playing games 'On The Pc' Dead@ ur avy! in your last 4 battles you've lost, at least let the scars set quick to 'Swipe CC' of anything that hes 'Banking On' ... quicker then 'Credit Card Theft' I didn't realize dudes were still doing 'this' to emphasize their schemes! But overall a much better verse. I feel you had some good concepts that you didn't execute very well but the effort was there along with a few more punches which is why I am giving my vote to: Phuck Yew

12-17-2013, 09:22 AM	#11
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	3-1 uppin for some feed ..

01-02-2014, 01:06 PM	#13
Bender Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 264 Battle Record: 11-5 Rep Power: 146916	It took me 3 months to acknowledge this fag wanted to battle me Now watch as I make 'Phuck Come To an End" like Penis Amputees look like Shrek.do chicks a favor. Give In to ya Health In ur Pic battle with Rican I couldn't tell if you were dissing Him or Yourself! vs stop acting like a hard vet, ur a 'North Pole' rapper we 'Doubt Ur Heat' & if you keep 'Lion' il give 'Simba Threat' that'll provoke him to jump from 'Mountain Peaks' I gotta say Cym barely edged it, I liked Yew's last line that was cool but other than that there wasn't alot of hard hitters, most were kind of forced. Vote-Cymbicort

01-03-2014, 06:48 PM	#14
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Vote- Cym Reasons: I felt like his verse stronger than P, Punchlines hit harder than P.

01-07-2014, 10:40 AM	#17
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	4-2 or 4-3?

01-08-2014, 10:20 AM	#18
Sicc Guest Posts: n/a	It took me 3 months to acknowledge this fag wanted to battle me Now watch as I make 'Phuck Come To an End" like Penis Amputees Think you could have played with this concept a little more. Could have been taken in a different direction to have more of an impact. Your wording kind of made it come off statement'ish, IMO. My Strategies to leave you lifeless like used dry cells Should I send anthrax to his crib..? nahhhh, he already got killed by Mael.. I take it, this is a personal shot. Mediocre. last night my dick went between your mom's titties Bag on her head to Void' coming to An ugly Conclusion like Yew vs .my dog, Witty. Another personal shot, I'm assuming. Not feeling it tho, way to statement'ish rather then a diss. I'm ready to bomb ya riders while my dick drips wit ya moms saliva And leave Phuck dead in a hole like necrophiliacs with Saddams Advisors Don't like this simile, tbh. You look like Shrek.do chicks a favor. Give In to ya Health In ur Pic battle with Rican I couldn't tell if you were dissing Him or Yourself! Way to basic, not effective, IMO. vs that Message you sent i felt was a claim you could see me? so i decided to show up in 'Sims Town' ... w/ no intention of playing games 'On The Pc' Cool concept/Play off his name but came off statement'ish, IMO. ur lame shit is easy! i'll nail ya if ya try to step no Asthma Attack as i ruin 'Symbicort Breathing' from 1 shot like an 'Inhalers Side Effects' Had to read this a few times, wording a little off but I see the concept and name play, decent. why ya flex? the 'Marge'in il beat you by, will leave this head in a baggie to prove this battle is a 'Cymp son' & will end w/ 'Homers' & me making a 'Maggie' Forced IMO. Dead@ ur avy! in your last 4 battles you've lost, at least let the scars set quick to 'Swipe CC' of anything that hes 'Banking On' ... quicker then 'Credit Card Theft' Cool concept/Name play. stop acting like a hard vet, ur a 'North Pole' rapper we 'Doubt Ur Heat' & if you keep 'Lion' il give 'Simba Threat' that'll provoke him to jump from 'Mountain Peaks' Lion/Lying word plays are mad played but you executed it well here considering the play off of his name. Decent. IMO: This battle was pretty one sided. Phuck definitely had way more of a consistent verse with a lot more creativity and plays off of his opponents name. Props to both, not too bad. Vote: Phuck.

01-08-2014, 11:36 AM	#19
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	@Sharp Nine this one is finished either 5-2 or 5-3 either way I win ..