The Realest Shit I Ever Wrote: Pt 2.

Natural · 12-04-2013, 09:10 PM

I'm not sure why you are so sloppy with you're structure as of ...pretty much since I've been gone...you used to have some even lines...tightly packed rhymes.
I personally preferred it when you did.
You're steeze is pretty much the same though....its smooth and decriptive and mildly witty.
However I think its really time for you to reinvent yourself as a writer
Because I honestly believe AS IS....you've peaked. You're really not improving anymore
You're just going through the motions. You need to really challenge yourself.
Are you a "good" writer? Yeah. But you're style is played
Repetitive. I get through two bars and know its you behind it.

Look at eminem...he is the perfect example of someone successful who understands the need to change up styles.

12-04-2013, 09:10 PM	#6
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	I'm not sure why you are so sloppy with you're structure as of ...pretty much since I've been gone...you used to have some even lines...tightly packed rhymes. I personally preferred it when you did. You're steeze is pretty much the same though....its smooth and decriptive and mildly witty. However I think its really time for you to reinvent yourself as a writer Because I honestly believe AS IS....you've peaked. You're really not improving anymore You're just going through the motions. You need to really challenge yourself. Are you a "good" writer? Yeah. But you're style is played Repetitive. I get through two bars and know its you behind it. Look at eminem...he is the perfect example of someone successful who understands the need to change up styles. Last edited by Natural; 12-04-2013 at 09:14 PM.