Week 7 chat and predictions

[Diode]

@Certain

my battle is locked so..

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=30093
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=30096
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=30101

[Certain]

Thanks, all. That leaves us with this breakdown at the three-hour mark:

I need one more vote: @Mr. J, @Vividlyvague.

I need two more votes: @NYCSPITZ, @Just Write, @Clockwise, Innovator.

I need three more votes: @YDK, @Frank, @Zenland.

Innovator, I see you voting. I'm going to put laundry in and vote on what's left.

[Certain]

@ThisisDAM, don't worry, I saw your votes.

[patrown]

@Diode - feels like a car crash. gone in a flash/ ride for others/ gauges are filled/ and i guess parking lot would be indicative of driving but.. i still felt it from your word choices.

favorite line..
cause and effecting your affection, you're leaving me ill
least favorite line..
depression and dejection, you know i'm serving it

altogether you hit the topic very well. instead of giving some kind of literal story, you instead captured the essence of the photo and drew some emotion out of it's perception. well executed, although a tad abrupt.

@breathless - fuuuck. almost halfway through i wanted to start typing out something along the lines of, " it's missing something," but once i got to the end.. i realized you were setting me up for that final moment of "oh fuck," which i did experience. i can take this piece apart and dissect it stanza by stanza.. but really, in the end, i feel like you wrote a compelling tale and led your audience along with a bitter ass(es) carrott. great job. well done.

[ThisisDAM]

Thanks. Nice job too Symmetrik

[Certain]

For the record, I have no idea what would happen if Frank doesn't vote.

@Mike Wrecka

[Diode]

thanks for the feedback, patrown.

[e11even]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=2...d=1#post205333

YOU'RE NEXT!!!!! Diode...

[Frank]

Voting from my phone, pardon the brevity.

[e11even]

@Diode

This was a somber, concetrated piece a lot more serious and emotion driven than last week. The narrative intertwined with that consistent flow really made the piece standout in my mind afterwards. Even though the clearest connection to the topic came at the end, it felt like a culmination-to rather than a thrown in notion to tie it in. I would have had a tough time with that one, but LGBT rights may have played a role if that pic was my topic. MVGT diode (lol).

I loved the drop, Diode. I hope you go against a physical opponent next week. That was a waste of a lotta dope.

[Certain]

Battles are closed. Thanks to everyone who voted. Pray for my laptop, or you may not get Certain's Corner this week.

[Zen]

Sorry bout the lack of voting. I'll vote in future weeks to make up for my douchebaggery.

[breathless]

@patrown thanks for the feed broskie

[YDK]

Originally Posted by patrown

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is it about the wins or about the practice my friend?

tell me it isn't about the wins. say it aint so.

yoh. @YDK. this is literally one of the only things i wake up for everyday. don't dumb it down coz of some status quo. seriously bro. your potential has been realized, but recognized? here's your stage..................... FUCK EM.

I did it for practice but tbh I'd rather win now. I done published a book an been published so I'm good on the practice lol just liked experimenting with different styles here and I'm satisfied with my own work