Cashius vs. Mael - CASHIUS WINS

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@Mael @Cashius

[Mael]

10, gl.

[Cashius]

Sent 10.

[Mael]

Extension please, mate.

[Mael]

I'll be dropping soon, mayne.

[Mael]

lol @ full-stops before each wack punch. Ya style's the lamest dude
The way your Periods amount to nothing mimics ya life after failing school
You'll be blue balling it forever. Bro, I'ma just laugh at your name
Virginity to you is like a common consumer experience; got Cash but no change
Have this fag walk in my shoes, he'd go thru blood, sweat & sores
After a Miley would get his face smashed through the wall like a Wrecking Ball
He got destroyed by Joe in SC. It's clear this faggot thinks like a girl
Even after the Helmets put you through, you cried it didn't match ya pink tricycle
Congrats on NBL S6, but your shitty rep is surely destined to fade
Only time you'll go down in History is cuz your other professors were straight

[Cashius]

I don't know you but...


Say whatever you'd like. You get NO pussy...so, fuck all your fables
I'd ask to see your box score...but the stats are prolly smaller then the ones in the paper
Don't act like you got warrants out...You don't do nothing that's real illegal
Only time you'd turn yourself into a cop is dressing like the one from the Village People
You make up shit to try and fuck...lol, you're never gonna skeet
Cause the only way you can socialize is by telling them to every girl you meet
Don't you gize understand?! He wants to see how many butts the dude can pipe
Soooooo, let me put that in layman terms for you people...he fucks like two a night
The only girl you can pull is fat...but you'd think that gal was your life's dream
I mean, you're used to bitches dipping in the night...but not to finish a gallon of ice cream

[KwaL!ty]

You'll be blue balling it forever. Bro, I'ma just laugh at your name
Virginity to you is like a common consumer experience; got Cash but no change
He got destroyed by Joe in SC. It's clear this faggot thinks like a girl
Even after the Helmets put you through, you cried it didn't match ya pink tricycle
^flow was off though,
Congrats on NBL S6, but your shitty rep is surely destined to fade
Only time you'll go down in History is cuz your other professors were straight



vs


Say whatever you'd like. You get NO pussy...so, fuck all your fables
I'd ask to see your box score...but the stats are prolly smaller then the ones in the paper
You make up shit to try and fuck...lol, you're never gonna skeet
Cause the only way you can socialize is by telling them to every girl you meet
Don't you gize understand?! He wants to see how many butts the dude can pipe
Soooooo, let me put that in layman terms for you people...he fucks like two a night
The only girl you can pull is fat...but you'd think that gal was your life's dream
I mean, you're used to bitches dipping in the night...but not to finish a gallon of ice cream


MVGT- Cash, jsut more well rounded verse had more sting & better read.

[Tic]

The last line from Mael could have been a real nice punch, but it was worded terribly.

With that said, I didn't think much from Mael stuck out, to be honest. Half of it barely rhymed and it didn't flow that well. Cash didn't have much I thought was great, either, honestly. His first last was okay, and the last line was pretty cool though. V/Cash

[Sintro]

Mael had periods amount to nothing which was worded ok but not real hard. I thought helmets cuda been hella dope but the punch shuda been waayy harder. Miley bars didn't rhyme n down in history is hella played. U seem like u got the jest of how or write punches id just suggest u check out how the more successful battlers word their shit on this site n follow suit. Pretty ok verse tho.
Cash had dip in the night that was pretty tight. Opener was ok but didn't rhyme. Village ppl was worded ok; shuda been "only way u cud" instead. Socialize n layman didn't work for me either. N layman hasn't been used for awhile but still kinda played. Pretty nice verse overall.
I got cash here by a little. I think he had two nice punches that connected where maels wording kinda fucked him.

[Beyond]

lol @ full-stops before each wack punch. Ya style's the lamest dude
The way your Periods amount to nothing mimics ya life after failing school
Have this fag walk in my shoes, he'd go thru blood, sweat & sores
After a Miley would get his face smashed through the wall like a Wrecking Ball
Congrats on NBL S6, but your shitty rep is surely destined to fade
Only time you'll go down in History is cuz your other professors were straight

vs

Say whatever you'd like. You get NO pussy...so, fuck all your fables
I'd ask to see your box score...but the stats are prolly smaller then the ones in the paper
Don't act like you got warrants out...You don't do nothing that's real illegal
Only time you'd turn yourself into a cop is dressing like the one from the Village People
You make up shit to try and fuck...lol, you're never gonna skeet
Cause the only way you can socialize is by telling them to every girl you meet


Dope battle. Two of my favorites. Periods was a nice opener. Wrecking Ball was good, too. Fresh Cyrus flip. Down in History was a slick flip. Box score was dope. Turn into a cop was roflz. Social lies was slick. I was feeling dipping, too. Laymen seems familiar, but even that I was kind of digging. Wording maybe slightly off, though. Cash but no change was okay, not really too good. Needed more to the connection. Helmets was a nice concept and line up until it didn't rhyme I guess that's just your shit accent. Either way, I thought Cash's dipping line was good so I would of quoted that as well and didn't like the change line while laymen was better. So overall close battle where both had some haymakers, but Cashius was just too consistent here per usual. Props to both.

/v cashius

[Dominate]

Originally Posted by Mael

lol @ full-stops before each wack punch. Ya style's the lamest dude
The way your Periods amount to nothing mimics ya life after failing school
ehhhh... I can't really dig the period wp, even with what you added to it and being a personal... I've just seen toooo many of them over the years
You'll be blue balling it forever. Bro, I'ma just laugh at your name
Virginity to you is like a common consumer experience; got Cash but no change
OK. Wording's a bit weird... not bad
Have this fag walk in my shoes, he'd go thru blood, sweat & sores
After a Miley would get his face smashed through the wall like a Wrecking Ball
good. Fresh miley flip
He got destroyed by Joe in SC. It's clear this faggot thinks like a girl
Even after the Helmets put you through, you cried it didn't match ya pink tricycle
good personal & wp... the emphasis on the rhyme was a little off for me which took some impact from it, but still dig it
Congrats on NBL S6, but your shitty rep is surely destined to fade
Only time you'll go down in History is cuz your other professors were straight
nah, man... I must have seen this exact same wp/flip at leeeast 5 times... the highly relevant personal wasn't enough to save it

vs

Originally Posted by Cashius

I don't know you but...


Say whatever you'd like. You get NO pussy...so, fuck all your fables
I'd ask to see your box score...but the stats are prolly smaller then the ones in the paper
I don't get this tbh
Don't act like you got warrants out...You don't do nothing that's real illegal
Only time you'd turn yourself into a cop is dressing like the one from the Village People
heh, cool.. funny flip made it work
You make up shit to try and fuck...lol, you're never gonna skeet
Cause the only way you can socialize is by telling them to every girl you meet
coo, not bad
Don't you gize understand?! He wants to see how many butts the dude can pipe
Soooooo, let me put that in layman terms for you people...he fucks like two a night
good. havent seen that wp before, that's fresh to me & I like how you worded
The only girl you can pull is fat...but you'd think that gal was your life's dream
I mean, you're used to bitches dipping in the night...but not to finish a gallon of ice cream
dece...not bad not good... I feel neutrally about this one

I got cash taking this on consistency. Mael's opener and closer hurt him... the miley and mets lines were good but Cash had that laymans line and his others weren't bad


v/ Cash

[Unfukwitable]

lol @ full-stops before each wack punch. Ya style's the lamest dude
The way your Periods amount to nothing mimics ya life after failing school
-it's ok, felt you couldve worded this better
You'll be blue balling it forever. Bro, I'ma just laugh at your name
Virginity to you is like a common consumer experience; got Cash but no change
-maybe im buggin but,consumer or customer?... its was cool tho
Have this fag walk in my shoes, he'd go thru blood, sweat & sores
After a Miley would get his face smashed through the wall like a Wrecking Ball
- seemed real basic imo .
He got destroyed by Joe in SC. It's clear this faggot thinks like a girl
Even after the Helmets put you through, you cried it didn't match ya pink tricycle
- nah .
Congrats on NBL S6, but your shitty rep is surely destined to fade
Only time you'll go down in History is cuz your other professors were straight
- lmaooo nice

Say whatever you'd like. You get NO pussy...so, fuck all your fables
I'd ask to see your box score...but the stats are prolly smaller then the ones in the paper
- wasn't a strong impact but liked it
Don't act like you got warrants out...You don't do nothing that's real illegal
Only time you'd turn yourself into a cop is dressing like the one from the Village People
- lmaoo funny and nice
You make up shit to try and fuck...lol, you're never gonna skeet
Cause the only way you can socialize is by telling them to every girl you meet
- good wp nice line .
Don't you gize understand?! He wants to see how many butts the dude can pipe
Soooooo, let me put that in layman terms for you people...he fucks like two a night
- this was ok
The only girl you can pull is fat...but you'd think that gal was your life's dream
I mean, you're used to bitches dipping in the night...but not to finish a gallon of ice cream
- ehh wasn't feeling this much

felt one just came with more hits than the other a good read for me though, this read kind helped me out in some areas, Gb tho.

V/Cash

[Mael]

Originally Posted by Beyond

Helmets was a nice concept and line up until it didn't rhyme I guess that's just your shit accent.

lol.. yeah I don't know what I was thinking with half these end rhymes. Props to Cash though.

[Mael]

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