show me an S&F swaggier and flowier than this

[StarFaggot]

Vote: Rawn

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by Aero

Vote: Rawn

Problem, little guy?

Cake I've ignored u without using the feature

this began a while ago tho

Not to mention I was speaking to chyeahhh not to pancakecerealbowl

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by Rawn M.D.

Cake I've ignored u without using the feature

this began a while ago tho

Not to mention I was speaking to chyeahhh not to pancakecerealbowl

I offered a truce.

Don't let namix's quote fool you. You use the A and I vowel schemes that have been done a thousand times without saying a damn thing.

[StarFaggot]

None at all you big bear faggot.

Rawn is dope at S & F...

You're good at what you do but I'd advise you to stay in your lane.

I say mucho

and the scheme sounds dope which is what snf is in my eyes

audibly to me it sounds very dope bc of the vowels

and I didn't make the thread...

[StarFaggot]

Seyance you're a faggot. Namix asked you to provide a better swag n flow verse not be a bitter bitch and breakdown a verse that no one asked you to.

[namix]

as a whole i typically view swag & flow as an excuse to be conceptually lazy

but i liked rawn's verse - and am interested in reading others that are of equal or greater caliber


Pent & Geno - will check your battle out tomorrow for sure.

[PancakeBrah]

Aero want me to send you nudes? Or sex pics? I will.

Rawn I'll admit the scheme and flow was dope. But A-I based verses are done to death, and it wasn't what I look for in a sanfor verse.

[veritas]

Rawn got skillz.

[veritas]

@Hush

Hush when you exit your current co dependent mom live in life partner situation then you may have a chamce of mattering in the realm of opinion you insect faced beetle larvae.

[Hush]

Originally Posted by VERITAS

You ain’t seeing me like Mr. T’s neck:

VERITAS:

The psychological, the metaphysical, the warrior:
And any obstacle neva stops the pinnacle’s thought euphoria.

I whip a Challenger, so rip the calendar, cuz I’m outside of space and time,
400 horse traveler, clip every caliber, come collide with the great Divine.

To flex on the net aint shit son, I mastered life by the time I was thirty,
The 9th diffusion of consciousness: Motherfucker VERITAS aint earthly

Inter-dimensional warlord equipping plasma swords, lavish words, and phantom hordes;
These average bores can’t fathom wars I ravage boards with a savage Lord’s master force

The Last Star-fighter-carbon-fiber-Hemi-driver-rhyme provider:
The flow of my saliva pipes a preggo bitch with it’s dick dipped in Godiva.

I got that Iron man, call me Cal Ripken the survivor, givin dirt naps in Peruvian lava,
Peep my Nasdaq’s in a sauna amidst exotic fauna, making ya bitch sing Hakuna Matata.

Bet my dick stretch her in pleasure, skeet on her eyepatch, make her wait to taste treasure
My Swagnum P.I. mustache rubs her clam’s hatch, b squirts until u need a tub to measure

parasite worms spread germs and brains squirm, my Psych-Ops turn oceans to rain drops
Real life Psychologist, so know I got cash to burn, and “I won” like the face of Cyclops.

Drip divine drops of sun spots, electroswagnetic pulses implode terrestrial infrastructures,
Make her thirsty till my cum stops, V stay in a bitch mind like extraterrestrial abductors.

Got carrots like extra-vegetable lovers, dressing cleaner than your funeral’s ushers
Eye contact ya bitch and bring beautiful blushes, while u focus on writing pitiful punches,

With the minimal functions, while V shines and feeds u the law like Levitical luncheons
VERITAS is Voltron formed from Galactus, my flows anoint, on point like a ***tus

But the point is I’m matchless, smoke a joint and ash on what ever cash hatches
Conceptual master wit complex patterns, lines full of more dope than Mexican caverns,

Hit ya bitch like Lexington stabbing, till her nose looks like Owen’s in wedding crashers
While exposing my woody wearing Treyvon’s hoodie in front of some Klan pastors.

VERITAS: The infinity exhibit, never fitna see a limit, your thoughts are all my minions
VERITAS: the physics of cybernetic wizards’ visions of your dollar menu decisions

Swim in loot like Scrooge McDuck, my guns called whammies triggers press your luck
Make any competitor suck, My life makes change, you talk cash, but just passin the buck

Originally Posted by VERITAS

@Hush

Hush when you exit your current co dependent mom live in life partner situation then you may have a chamce of mattering in the realm of opinion you insect faced beetle larvae.

I bet u posted that terrible verse in here thinking someone would give a fuck

[veritas]

Originally Posted by Hush

I bet u posted that terrible verse in here thinking someone would give a fuck

Break down your future plan for your living arrangements please

[Seyance]

the back flips past is hat tricks black lips scheme has been done to death. probably one of known as one of the easiest multi sets around, very much like the similar take this fake is basic lame shit scheme.

when critiquing a verse.. one of the things i take into account is the difficulty of the craft. how hard was that to write? in similar way the judges critique say a diving competition, an easy dive would be safe and register a score, but would never be able to get a high score. a harder to complete dive has the possibility for a higher score.. but has it's own pitfalls when being so ambitious.

edit: stfu aero, me/pan vs you/rawn pinkslip forever?

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by Seyance

the back flips past is hat tricks black lips scheme has been done to death. probably one of known as one of the easiest multi sets around, very much like the similar take this fake is basic lame shit scheme

QFT 2x

One of the few times I agree with Sey.

That shit is so easy to rhyme. Challenge yourself.

[Eŋg]

Originally Posted by Seyance

the back flips past is hat tricks black lips scheme has been done to death. probably one of known as one of the easiest multi sets around, very much like the similar take this fake is basic lame shit scheme.

when critiquing a verse.. one of the things i take into account is the difficulty of the craft. how hard was that to write? in similar way the judges critique say a diving competition, an easy dive would be safe and register a score, but would never be able to get a high score. a harder to complete dive has the possibility for a higher score.. but has it's own pitfalls when being so ambitious.

edit: stfu aero, me/pan vs you/rawn pinkslip forever?

don't talk about craft until you learn how to use the possessive apostrophe, plz.

and what you're basically saying is you sit there and look at how long the guy must have lamented over contrived rhyme schemes. awesome, noble pursuit.

verse was tight.

I've already said why I elect to utilize that SC heme

and besides the two of u it seems to have been appreciated in general

u can't please everyone tho

[Zen]

This is pretty dope. Props

[namix]

i'd like to join the Aero/Rawn team vs. Seyance/Pancake in a permanent pinkslip? can you guys pick up another dude?

lets make it crazy as fuck for a dope perma ban match.

like literally - perma IP bans and subsequent bans if aliases are identified... let's make it hurt

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by namix

i'd like to join the Aero/Rawn team vs. Seyance/Pancake in a permanent pinkslip? can you guys pick up another dude?

lets make it crazy as fuck for a dope perma ban match.

like literally - perma IP bans and subsequent bans if aliases are identified... let's make it hurt

Haven't read the topic past this point, but I'm a bit hurt. I know I trolled you previously, but I respect you. You're not my cup of tea as an OM writer, but this is a bridge too far. This is almost out of character for you. And lumping me in with Sey (as a boarder) is a bit much.

We should collab. Srs.