show me an S&F swaggier and flowier than this - Page 2

dull boy · 09-11-2013, 06:34 PM

How do those work?

Miracles.

Geno · 09-11-2013, 07:08 PM

Eyo namix... go peep me and pent ups snf battle in the ba. A vote isn't necessary, but I think me and pent both murked this vs in qoutes tbh. Nothing against my man rawn tho

Pent uP · 09-11-2013, 07:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide

Eyo namix... go peep me and pent ups snf battle in the ba. A vote isn't necessary, but I think me and pent both murked this vs in qoutes tbh. Nothing against my man rawn tho

Rofl I already plugged us twice in here. We're worse than Mormons

Geno · 09-11-2013, 07:24 PM

Blahaha. Wtf. I didn't even notice hahaha. Good shit

Chyeahhh!!! · 09-11-2013, 07:27 PM

Rawn is a formidable foe in the S&F arena. Dude's inner multis, structure, flow, transitions all combined in an almost short/medium bar format not to mention some damn good word placement has him on my hit list for sure. Speaking of which, I need a rematch :)

PancakeBrah · 09-11-2013, 07:27 PM

HEY @Pent uP AND @Genocide IF YOU VOTE ON A TAG MATCH YOU'LL GET A VOTE.

Pent uP · 09-11-2013, 08:34 PM

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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

HEY @Pent uP AND @Genocide IF YOU VOTE ON A TAG MATCH YOU'LL GET A VOTE.

Im banking on the fact u have a battle in the BA and youd rather read our battle for ur votes then others' battles.
That goes hand and hand with the fact that im banking on no one voting today on tag team shit

Geno · 09-11-2013, 07:36 PM

Lol. I know, I gotta put my votes in. There coming.

I got you cake, its pretty mandatory anyway. So I don't expect a vote in ba. But that would be cool

PancakeBrah · 09-11-2013, 07:39 PM

word. i actually read this already, tough vote. you guys are swell at rhyming.

Seyance · 09-11-2013, 07:43 PM

lotta shit didn't work, was forced in.. maybe would rhyme in real life better though. lacked witt and wordplay, plus the wording used didn't feel very natural so the swag factor didn't come through much. quite a few of the "multi syllable rhymes" weren't even multi's as there were words in that didn't rhyme, so it throws the whole multi off.

a few references didn't work, seemed like they were put there to just rhyme. knowing people are idiots and don't actually read verses properly, they just skim and miss it. things like the week old mastiff line, surely a week old mastiff wouldn't have that much adrenalin yet.. as it has only just opened its eyes and probably can't even walk. maybe i'm missing something with that one.

shit was alright yeah, but not thread worthy.. if you want to look at good snf.. go find championship matches. it's like when people ask questions on here and facebook, when googling it would be waaay easier, faster and more accurate.

2c.

namix · 09-11-2013, 08:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Seyance

lotta shit didn't work, was forced in.. maybe would rhyme in real life better though. lacked witt and wordplay, plus the wording used didn't feel very natural so the swag factor didn't come through much. quite a few of the "multi syllable rhymes" weren't even multi's as there were words in that didn't rhyme, so it throws the whole multi off.

a few references didn't work, seemed like they were put there to just rhyme. knowing people are idiots and don't actually read verses properly, they just skim and miss it. things like the week old mastiff line, surely a week old mastiff wouldn't have that much adrenalin yet.. as it has only just opened its eyes and probably can't even walk. maybe i'm missing something with that one.

shit was alright yeah, but not thread worthy.. if you want to look at good snf.. go find championship matches. it's like when people ask questions on here and facebook, when googling it would be waaay easier, faster and more accurate.

2c.

your critique was solid until the analogy of google searching

it was waaay easier for me to create this thread than making a fruitless attempt at searching through archives of nothingness yo ;)

Chyeahhh!!! · 09-11-2013, 07:45 PM

@Genocide

snf match whats good?

PancakeBrah · 09-11-2013, 07:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chyeahhh!!!

@Genocide

snf match whats good?

30 day pink slip swag and flow. 20 lines.

Chyeahhh!!! · 09-11-2013, 07:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

30 day pink slip swag and flow. 20 lines.

fair nuff. Would you mind setting the thread?

PancakeBrah · 09-11-2013, 07:55 PM

let me handle pryde. then ill set it.

Chyeahhh!!! · 09-11-2013, 08:00 PM

coo

09-11-2013, 08:15 PM

Word chyeahhh handle cake n then I got u

PancakeBrah · 09-11-2013, 08:16 PM

....

you cant be serious. i'd fucking ruin you rawn. once i take care of chyeah, permanent pink slip offer.

PancakeBrah · 09-11-2013, 08:17 PM

I bet Rawn literally got sexually aroused that a topic was made about him

Chyeahhh!!! · 09-11-2013, 08:25 PM

ahh man we really need an SnF league to pop off

09-11-2013, 07:08 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Eyo namix... go peep me and pent ups snf battle in the ba. A vote isn't necessary, but I think me and pent both murked this vs in qoutes tbh. Nothing against my man rawn tho __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

09-11-2013, 07:24 PM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Blahaha. Wtf. I didn't even notice hahaha. Good shit __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

09-11-2013, 07:27 PM	#5
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,398 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663351	he speaks.... Rawn is a formidable foe in the S&F arena. Dude's inner multis, structure, flow, transitions all combined in an almost short/medium bar format not to mention some damn good word placement has him on my hit list for sure. Speaking of which, I need a rematch :) __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

09-11-2013, 07:27 PM	#6
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	HEY @Pent uP AND @Genocide IF YOU VOTE ON A TAG MATCH YOU'LL GET A VOTE. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

09-11-2013, 07:36 PM	#8
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Lol. I know, I gotta put my votes in. There coming. I got you cake, its pretty mandatory anyway. So I don't expect a vote in ba. But that would be cool __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

09-11-2013, 06:34 PM	#1
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	How do those work? Miracles.

09-11-2013, 07:39 PM	#9
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	word. i actually read this already, tough vote. you guys are swell at rhyming. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

09-11-2013, 07:43 PM	#10
Seyance - Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,059 Battle Record: 0-4 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night VII Rep Power: 0	lotta shit didn't work, was forced in.. maybe would rhyme in real life better though. lacked witt and wordplay, plus the wording used didn't feel very natural so the swag factor didn't come through much. quite a few of the "multi syllable rhymes" weren't even multi's as there were words in that didn't rhyme, so it throws the whole multi off. a few references didn't work, seemed like they were put there to just rhyme. knowing people are idiots and don't actually read verses properly, they just skim and miss it. things like the week old mastiff line, surely a week old mastiff wouldn't have that much adrenalin yet.. as it has only just opened its eyes and probably can't even walk. maybe i'm missing something with that one. shit was alright yeah, but not thread worthy.. if you want to look at good snf.. go find championship matches. it's like when people ask questions on here and facebook, when googling it would be waaay easier, faster and more accurate. 2c. __________________ i'm truely renaissance.. dominate the web, television, movies and beyond when a leader gets to speaking, it's your duty to respond.. i'm a leave these niggas leaking like i'm julian assange.

09-11-2013, 07:45 PM	#12
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,398 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663351	@Genocide snf match whats good? __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

09-11-2013, 07:55 PM	#15
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	let me handle pryde. then ill set it. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

09-11-2013, 08:00 PM	#16
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,398 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663351	he speaks.... coo __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

09-11-2013, 08:15 PM	#17
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	Word chyeahhh handle cake n then I got u

09-11-2013, 08:16 PM	#18
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	.... you cant be serious. i'd fucking ruin you rawn. once i take care of chyeah, permanent pink slip offer. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

09-11-2013, 08:17 PM	#19
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	I bet Rawn literally got sexually aroused that a topic was made about him __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

09-11-2013, 08:25 PM	#20
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,398 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663351	ahh man we really need an SnF league to pop off __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff