06-11-2013, 12:49 AM | #1 |
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Biographic Meltdown of a Reformed Psychotic Higher Power
Biographic Meltdown of a Reformed Psychotic Higher Power
Take a walk inside me, send requesting my faith I call it like I see it at the end of the day Don't let the seconds escape from the Destiny Lake Look beyond the reflection, the depth is amazing From inception till lately, to death I was faithful But I left and betrayed it like the lessons of Abel Went from wrestling angels to reppin a halo in days I was blessed with redemption and Nephalem cadendce Draw these lexicon paintings with whats left on the pages But wait.. Regrets can't harness my exodus lately, it's sent to betray me My brain is 'sex on mescaline' crazy, perfected subconscious ....CLICK. Leave this little man resting somber for testing a texting monster This bitch will itch and regret starting, like symptoms of Meth Hit em with fists to the chest hard till his ribs rip the flesh, scarring Nigma's destined to draw blood like a crip with a sketch artist Test heart like tweezers and needles, mosquitoes and leeches From textcee to martyr, you'll bleed for the people to grieve with They regard you as students, believe that the teacher is me Introducing Mr. E, my pupils will see all the feudal influence I'm whats before and after humans like baboons and mutants Bitch which pool you in? Either two of you buffoons are stupid S'like Hellen Keller with a rubix cube, you dudes are mute and clueless Too conducive to the bluesh hue of bruises, witness all the hazards clump You don't see shit, your views are usesless, you're droppin Caspar dumps Y'all paint a dark scene, I print the bigger picture like art geeks I'm an artist whos bars eat, you're the heart of this dark feast This bitch is ripped apart with more sharp teeth then shark week Got that Phoenix ferver, matches burning to reoccurance in the ashes Murder with stats, it's Copernicus tactics, attacks hitting perfect in math So when observing wackness I'm sure that yer attached like a virgins vag is You claiming superlative master yet you're purely just average Fuck a courtesy, I blast him.. And nothing triggers insecurity like laughter
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08-11-2013, 12:33 AM | #2 |
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bump, this was a random freewrite I did that never got fed
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08-11-2013, 05:34 AM | #3 |
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you can tell you mastered your flow you can feel the personality in the song with out even seeing you not bad def got the aggressive battle vibe with this one
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08-14-2013, 10:39 PM | #4 |
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@Nigma lol this is not what I expected. A cryptic Van Helsing chronicle-like title with a matching piece of art that reminded me of the villain from the League of Extraordinary Gentlemen, set to a customary braggadocio backround. Sweet chin music for the metallic Constantinoples. You have an impressive flow because you approach it with little fear for the consequences of taking risks. Symmetry to you is optional when you can dictate the shape of the rhyme scheme as a whole, trying new things. There is a writer from Project Rhyme who I feel you would learn a lot from reading his work briefly: millz. Your style reminds me of his though you do more battle-related flexes while he usually stuck to traditional topical ventures.
I'll quote some of my favorite bars from this: Test heart like tweezers and needles, mosquitoes and leeches From textcee to martyr, you'll bleed for the people to grieve with ^CoHpe. You claiming superlative master yet you're purely just average Fuck a courtesy, I blast him.. And nothing triggers insecurity like laughter ^Pretty rugged. Keep doing it |
08-16-2013, 12:26 AM | #5 |
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Introducing Mr. E, my pupils will see all the feudal influence
I'm whats before and after humans like baboons and mutants Bitch which pool you in? Either two of you buffoons are stupid S'like Hellen Keller with a rubix cube, you dudes are mute and clueless Got that Phoenix ferver, matches burning to reoccurance in the ashes Murder with stats, it's Copernicus tactics, attacks hitting perfect in math So when observing wackness I'm sure that yer attached like a virgins vag is You claiming superlative master yet you're purely just average Fuck a courtesy, I blast him.. And nothing triggers insecurity like laughter this two stanza stuck out for me. top one mainly liked the whole which pool u in? im guessing referring to gene pools liked it... I like seeing your stuff on this site compared to svw. svw was mainly a battle site and that being so I think limited a lot of us from seeing your versatility with the art of words. if you got time get at me with the collab we started @Nigma send what you have of mine also.
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