Round 3: Utmost vs. Rawn MacDon {Rawn wins}

The Swag & Flow

This round is a Swag & Flow battle and will be the 3rd round of the Elements.



you know the rules to battling/topicals/snf we shouldnt have to explain them to you



lines min-10
line max-16

VERSES ARE DUE Tuesday THE 13thTH

goodluck to both participants

@Utmost @Rawn M.D.

check

@Utmost u showing?

[Utmost]

Originally Posted by Rawn M.D.

@Utmost u showing?

sorry man about the no check in, kinda busy this week.

I need an ext.

[Utmost]

Grip ya throat, All Hail to the hypnotoad..


Yes the kid is back.. reminscent of Sam in Pulp or Pitt in Snatch, shits a wrap
Mr. exact..blitz ya bitch, poet steez flow with a goatee Bag mentality
meanin she's gettin hit with a sack...the only moment worth ownin's the present
so opponents? I'll roll up and wreck em', the leader of the new schools been elected
foolish peasants, Im bringin cruel intentions, a Rob Roy mixed with Troy in perfection
let you have first choice of weapons...then void da halls, leave ya squad Old Boy'd in seconds
wrote the streets code too... a true bawss! pimp hand so strong its pro dude
Shiiit, if we even slapbox I'll fuckin K.O. you..chaos stricken, coldest crook EVER...say frost/nixon!
so you betta ALL listen. motto is darth maul n' mop victims..cough up ya coffers
or get toppled by Balrog cross.. the slaughters intense
push ya eye soooo far back..the other ones automatically getting grandfather'd in
the sole recipe for death, it'll get messy/degrading, yes.. Im deadin you here
put ur head on a spear...known to spice things up, call me Jesse from Breaking
so unless you wanna be Taken, be on ya best-est behavior
I posess a particular set of skills...clever, ill frees son.. Neeson mixed with Professor Xavier

Rawn M.D. more like a *yawn* emcee...

Shotty drawn at dweebs, I'll make you GONE tempt me..& whateva i decide to do
An evil tyrant in a spinny chair fingers in a maniacle triangle
so when shots collide with you, they'll open ur melon to the yellow... like papaya fruit
hand to hand, deuce deuce or bamboo shoots Im straight sonnin'
Deckard in bladerunner..take ya dame without even exchanging numbers
Im THAT good, spread influence by brain via radio waves, the up n'comer amazing wonder
sending my demands out so that even Cheyeeaahh can hear me in his cave bunker
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Leave em spellbound, got hound dogs n hell hounds
Who, when they smell foul reactor die like melt downs
Kicking karate with Mr magi real power in the wheelhouse
Chewing salami with lucha brazi moving bodies with steel out
golem giants prone to violence mikiah phifier paid in full
Doods who banged em tools way before gangs in schools
rage n anger-fueled with no deep end like training pools
my bitch got a firm ass, inject cement in the sht
Watchin her watch my designer wrist watch's str8 legit
taug-hauer, after hours-inner hips benz like the whip
twistin lambspread, lambskin deep inside her clit
I break bread, spend blood money dead presidents
On the street its all lovely, Walk and demand respect
Im knowingly Fresh, opening chess in moments of death
choking the pet over his head holding a check, solely adressed
Mi amigos massive, each blows only priemo grasses
In tuxedo fashion getting flamingo ass in casino bathrooms
Slang that Nino crack cut back with amino acids
G Code past Vito stats reloading three chrome magnums
My adrenals equal that of a week old mastiff
Or a sleak slow assassin doing evil magic hopkido backflips
When we roll past its as thick as the ass on my last bitch
after kegal classes spread eagle over my mandingo aspects
Im Frank Zito’s last kin involved in illegal actions
who's genome matches ba baracius with green hulk fragments
We talkin Greek god status when we bought Athens
tongue deep in a bad bitch thunder clappin deluged Baptists
Hit with the leadoff back fist and eat raw catfish
with a team all bat shit and guano where that deep draw cash is

[Cashius]

Utmost-

I liked the attitude and swag in the tone of the verse and it had some charisma but no only line stood out to me. Also, I couldn't catch the foe at all. It felt mad choppy...I know there were multis but they weren't used very well.


Rawn-

When I first started reading I thought you were going to lose. But the second half of your verse was very good. The whole verse flowed well and had multis but content wise it really picked up in the second part.


I'm going with Rawn. Just a more enjoyable, cleaner verse.

[Flow]

Utmost flow was all over the shop
Swag was ok

Rawns swag was average with a more consistent and polished flow.

Vote Rawn for better flow

[veritas]

Rawns flow, concepts, and cadence were superior:

MVGT Dr. Gregory