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Old 10-02-2014, 10:46 AM   #1
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Elapsed time is unnoticeable when waiting for the bliss of forever love…

Such a splendid thought, but do I let her walk?
With out a penned stroke letter or feathered touch?

Thing is, I have too much heart and not enough rage..
mixed with two drops apart of drowning in "nothing is going to change.”

I was bested, disappointed, because I knew I was the best.
I was left with, poison, because she assumed all of the rest.
But a perfume can’t be smelt if the neck isn’t around…
And its not the lies that she tells, its how I accept the sounds.

I would sacrifice the facts of life for that tonight.
I would wrap whats right, tag insight, and cluster fuck myself…

Too many layers, my plato is losing stamina,
Juggling for normalcy but I can’t even balance her.

The most beautiful villain I have ever seen, with the beauty of a beauty queen.
Eluding me, refusing me, truthfully, its a movie scene,
and I see myself bleed.

How do I stop the stream?

Why would I stop the stream?

Because the worth of a man is knowing...

Not every beat comes from his drum,
nor does he fancy his hindbrain,
Yet he carries on.

So very wrong, but so very strong… Knowing…

The measure of a man?
his tolerance for pain;
his voice in a crowd;
his silence in passion;
his selfless love;

His ability to give unlimited digits of effort for the one.

You have to shiver to win during the mightiest wind…

Because,

The winter is cold,
yet - I donate the warmth of my heart.
The path will turn into wilderness,
and my spirit is exhausted by the climb.


Yet,

With every second, knowing that I am second, I never refute time.

I stand.

No despair gravitates my orbit.

For I know this...

A man loves,
with kind words,
with strong actions,
with his whole being.

Meaning…

With the world of doubt,
and a heart full of scars
I live for this thankless role.

You’re welcome.
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Old 10-03-2014, 10:50 AM   #2
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I like this shit, interesting how you mix up the classical and modern in this tragic take of unrequited love. I can see this being a nice audio although I probably wouldn't ever bump it myself but it's not you bro it just cuz Andy has no love for dem hoes.
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