Vividlyvague vs. Kin - Kin wins

Meth · 08-21-2014, 12:51 PM

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@Vividlyvague @Kin

Kin · 08-21-2014, 04:06 PM

checkin in

Kin · 08-21-2014, 04:07 PM

Catch him at tha ATM, Gloves on, Give him a Shank
so there's no Fresh Printz when I See Vivi-in Banks!

e11even · 08-21-2014, 11:55 PM

This faggot's a cardigan sporter, pardon the spoiler yo,
but kin's always hard-on his brothers, mountain their backs n going for broke.

BROKE LESNAR · 08-22-2014, 03:05 AM

Lol. Heads up Kin, that Vivian Banks concept was used a cpl weeks ago when he battled Camp. Fresh Prince/Vivian Banks. Not saying you bit, just wanted to let u know. I'm sure he's probably heard it before at some point and alot of concepts are recycled anyway. Cool flip tho. Nice and succinct. Vivid..it's strange to see a "go for broke" line that isn't necessarily directed at me for a change, LOL.

Going with vivid regardless.

v-vivid

Kin · 08-22-2014, 07:01 AM

Oh word to camp.....great mindz think alike....

Meth · 08-22-2014, 02:16 PM

Yeah there's really no way I can give kin the nod when he used a concept we all saw 2 weeks ago
Not that it's his fault or anything

But yeah

Voting vivid

Drunken Master · 08-22-2014, 02:53 PM

I thought both of these were cool, Fresh Prince/Vivian Banks vs Broke back mountain I thought both concepts were pretty cool and executed well (although Vivid was a wee wordy).

It's really a toss up but I'll have to give this one to Kin... just thought it was a crisper cleaner hit.

Certain · 08-26-2014, 01:52 AM

Kin: Someone (Camp Bell?) used a vivy nameplay a couple weeks ago. The execution here was better, though. That was a smoothly written line.

Vividlyvague: Your wordplay was tortured and stretched, and your line had nothing to do with your opponent. I prefer at least a nameplay attempt.

This is awkward. Kin used the same nameplay concept that someone used a couple weeks ago, but he did it better. Vividlyvague had a bad line. I'll go with played over bad.

Vote: Kin

MKG · 08-26-2014, 03:03 AM

I wasn't here two weeks ago so to me that pw and execution was sick

The kin line was cool too but I thought kind was harder

Vote kin

Blanco Bishop · 08-26-2014, 10:26 AM

V viv.

Had a dope mountain play.

Viv banks was solid but Used on him already

Notebook · 08-26-2014, 05:45 PM

Kin, your bar at first glance is very simple & straight-forward, but you anchored in some pretty creative wordplay. At first, I was opposed to whole "gangster-appeal" that you kicked for your setup, but the punch created a connected & enjoyable effect. Very well-executed.
Vivid, I've seen a LOT of Brokeback Mountain lines...so that kind of took a lot away for me. However, you did a decent job of flipping it in a new way. Still, I think that if you simplified the punch and made it less wordy, it would've hit harder. Felt it to be a bit forced...

Vote: Kin.

Unfukwitable · 08-27-2014, 01:46 AM

Both bars was cool but I'm leaning towards the Fresh prince bar it had a nice spin on the nameplay to put a edge of extra creativity on the concept imo... v/King

Camarac · 08-27-2014, 06:38 AM

I'm going with Kin here, line was fresh to my eyes at least, though i can imagine its been done at some point

Kin just had his shit worded better imo

Destroyer · 08-28-2014, 01:32 PM

I hadn't seen Vivian banks before

v/kin

KnowP · 08-28-2014, 09:22 PM

V. Kin

Used or not, that was a dope flip. I haven't seen it before. Broke back mountain flips are played as well and this one wasn't one of the fresher flips I've seen.

YDK · 08-28-2014, 09:34 PM

I gotta vote for vivid decent punch an kin used a concept that was just used so kinda takes away from the freshness of it

Camp Bell · 08-28-2014, 11:09 PM

i used that vivian banks against him already and it was harder.
i aint mad tho. but i cant give kin the nod due to those facts

vote: vivid

08-21-2014, 12:51 PM	#1
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489511	Vividlyvague vs. Kin - Kin wins The 1-2 Punch League Due Monday Midnight Pacific @Vividlyvague @Kin __________________ Crystal

08-21-2014, 11:55 PM	#4
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	This faggot's a cardigan sporter, pardon the spoiler yo, but kin's always hard-on his brothers, mountain their backs n going for broke. __________________ Ahem.

08-22-2014, 02:16 PM	#7
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489511	Yeah there's really no way I can give kin the nod when he used a concept we all saw 2 weeks ago Not that it's his fault or anything But yeah Voting vivid __________________ Crystal

08-26-2014, 01:52 AM	#9
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Kin: Someone (Camp Bell?) used a vivy nameplay a couple weeks ago. The execution here was better, though. That was a smoothly written line. Vividlyvague: Your wordplay was tortured and stretched, and your line had nothing to do with your opponent. I prefer at least a nameplay attempt. This is awkward. Kin used the same nameplay concept that someone used a couple weeks ago, but he did it better. Vividlyvague had a bad line. I'll go with played over bad. Vote: Kin __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

08-28-2014, 09:34 PM	#17
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	I gotta vote for vivid decent punch an kin used a concept that was just used so kinda takes away from the freshness of it __________________

08-21-2014, 04:06 PM	#2
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	checkin in

08-21-2014, 04:07 PM	#3
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	Catch him at tha ATM, Gloves on, Give him a Shank so there's no Fresh Printz when I See Vivi-in Banks!

08-22-2014, 03:05 AM	#5
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Lol. Heads up Kin, that Vivian Banks concept was used a cpl weeks ago when he battled Camp. Fresh Prince/Vivian Banks. Not saying you bit, just wanted to let u know. I'm sure he's probably heard it before at some point and alot of concepts are recycled anyway. Cool flip tho. Nice and succinct. Vivid..it's strange to see a "go for broke" line that isn't necessarily directed at me for a change, LOL. Going with vivid regardless. v-vivid

08-22-2014, 07:01 AM	#6
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	Oh word to camp.....great mindz think alike....

08-22-2014, 02:53 PM	#8
Drunken Master - Hiccup - Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 77 Rep Power: 1947043	I thought both of these were cool, Fresh Prince/Vivian Banks vs Broke back mountain I thought both concepts were pretty cool and executed well (although Vivid was a wee wordy). It's really a toss up but I'll have to give this one to Kin... just thought it was a crisper cleaner hit.

08-26-2014, 03:03 AM	#10
MKG Senior Member Join Date: May 2014 Posts: 481 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	I wasn't here two weeks ago so to me that pw and execution was sick The kin line was cool too but I thought kind was harder Vote kin

08-26-2014, 10:26 AM	#11
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	V viv. Had a dope mountain play. Viv banks was solid but Used on him already

08-26-2014, 05:45 PM	#12
Notebook fanlink.to/Notebook Join Date: Feb 2014 Location: Hell. Posts: 49 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	Kin, your bar at first glance is very simple & straight-forward, but you anchored in some pretty creative wordplay. At first, I was opposed to whole "gangster-appeal" that you kicked for your setup, but the punch created a connected & enjoyable effect. Very well-executed. Vivid, I've seen a LOT of Brokeback Mountain lines...so that kind of took a lot away for me. However, you did a decent job of flipping it in a new way. Still, I think that if you simplified the punch and made it less wordy, it would've hit harder. Felt it to be a bit forced... Vote: Kin.

08-27-2014, 01:46 AM	#13
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	Both bars was cool but I'm leaning towards the Fresh prince bar it had a nice spin on the nameplay to put a edge of extra creativity on the concept imo... v/King

08-27-2014, 06:38 AM	#14
Camarac The Grinch Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 129 Rep Power: 848949	I'm going with Kin here, line was fresh to my eyes at least, though i can imagine its been done at some point Kin just had his shit worded better imo

08-28-2014, 09:22 PM	#16
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 222 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463488	V. Kin Used or not, that was a dope flip. I haven't seen it before. Broke back mountain flips are played as well and this one wasn't one of the fresher flips I've seen.

08-28-2014, 11:09 PM	#18
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	i used that vivian banks against him already and it was harder. i aint mad tho. but i cant give kin the nod due to those facts vote: vivid __________________ get high. write rhymes.

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