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Yo' scripts childishly wack while my shit is snoopa-fly!/
You could "bite the kids show" and we still wouldn't say "your lines super, Y"!!/
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You're more frail than the plastic doll avy an its fake grin too
Bitch i don't need to pass gas to break Wind (ew!)
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I actually get windu cuz I got kids, it's a TV show named super why. But "bite the show " and snoopa fly are whack. YDK at first I thought it was gonna some dumb shit, and it was, but funny and it hit harder
V YDK
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Ydk a faggot and his line is trash.
But windu line was god awful V ydk |
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Windu your punch was ok, just need to simplify it a little more.
YDK had a cool punch. set up was weird tho, kinda threw the flow off Vote-YDK |
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YDK's was hilarious. Windu's was creative but I just didn't like the setup and execution.
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lmaooo wow
I dont even understand windu line, he needs to tone down shit smh sometimes simpler is better. YDK line wasnt good either but atleast i got it.. V/YDK smh
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read this twice and i gotta say neither was knockouts
wind had a punch that you got to be in tune with kids to get YDK used a weak nameflip. i have kids, so i know who that is the pass gas/break wind (ew) was too stretched as well, the eww killed it for me. Vote: wind
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never heard of super Y
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Wins setup was too wordy. Better setup might have taken this.
Yz bar wins it off pure execution n comedy. Lol V y |
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