The Impatient Cosmos

Illume · 02-14-2014, 05:30 PM

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Vulgar · 02-21-2014, 01:23 PM

Cool title. @Illume

You wrote this small snippet from the perspective of God thinking about returning to Earth and solving the world's problems...but deciding fuck it. The descriptions throughout were alright. In order to really flesh the concept out and thoroughly execute it, you'd have to go for a longer piece.

Good little verse.

Keep doing you

02-14-2014, 05:30 PM	#1
Illume Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 145 Rep Power: 671780	The Impatient Cosmos Deleted Last edited by Illume; 12-03-2016 at 10:37 AM.

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02-21-2014, 01:23 PM	#2
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Cool title. @Illume You wrote this small snippet from the perspective of God thinking about returning to Earth and solving the world's problems...but deciding fuck it. The descriptions throughout were alright. In order to really flesh the concept out and thoroughly execute it, you'd have to go for a longer piece. Good little verse. Keep doing you