Strawberry Cough

Coup · 03-04-2013, 10:59 PM

I'm sorry to each and everyone of you.
I was the gum you chewed.
Was the fun you used.
On soles of shoes run through roots.
Illegible. An incredible imbecile too.
Tomato juice drunk down artery trough.
My loss, is gained in strawberry cough.
Love, laugh, life. Force it.
Just as pinnacle then in invincible pause
I was the rum you boozed
So sorry to each and everyone of you.
I was the rooster you cooped.
The pun overused.
Truth.

Staring.
Empty skeleton.
Wherein. Plenty therein.
When is my identical twin ?
Both are expendable. It has been.
Medical niacin chocking oxygen.
In my mind as elephant.
So Roll it up as medicine.
Set it all up as bowling pin.

Delineate in all my way.
Blind my eye to charcoal haze.
Dye my mind in mid April-May
It has been. Water. Purple rain.
Daisy if I do. Daily regimen.
Flying under sky adrenaline.
Exhibit my mental picture.
Exquisite little sick bird.
Crush me with a rolling pin.
I was normal in a loony bin.
So lost in the Sim City sim.

To be continued...

Frank · 03-04-2013, 11:06 PM

flying under sky adrenaline

word

Zen · 03-07-2013, 12:59 PM

Shit I been sleepin on OM pieces lately. What up Coup? I honestly gotta say this is the best shit I've read from you fam. Good shit and literally no complaints with it at all. You got a very unique way with words man and you embrace it. Props.

PancakeBrah · 03-07-2013, 06:56 PM

I had no idea what you were talking about but it all sounded very nice and the title was cool

03-04-2013, 10:59 PM	#1
Coup Don't believe the hype Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 572 Battle Record: 4-5 Rep Power: 0	Strawberry Cough I'm sorry to each and everyone of you. I was the gum you chewed. Was the fun you used. On soles of shoes run through roots. Illegible. An incredible imbecile too. Tomato juice drunk down artery trough. My loss, is gained in strawberry cough. Love, laugh, life. Force it. Just as pinnacle then in invincible pause I was the rum you boozed So sorry to each and everyone of you. I was the rooster you cooped. The pun overused. Truth. Staring. Empty skeleton. Wherein. Plenty therein. When is my identical twin ? Both are expendable. It has been. Medical niacin chocking oxygen. In my mind as elephant. So Roll it up as medicine. Set it all up as bowling pin. Delineate in all my way. Blind my eye to charcoal haze. Dye my mind in mid April-May It has been. Water. Purple rain. Daisy if I do. Daily regimen. Flying under sky adrenaline. Exhibit my mental picture. Exquisite little sick bird. Crush me with a rolling pin. I was normal in a loony bin. So lost in the Sim City sim. To be continued... __________________ What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.

03-04-2013, 11:06 PM	#2
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	flying under sky adrenaline word __________________ *VETWORK*

03-07-2013, 06:56 PM	#4
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	I had no idea what you were talking about but it all sounded very nice and the title was cool __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

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03-07-2013, 12:59 PM	#3
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Shit I been sleepin on OM pieces lately. What up Coup? I honestly gotta say this is the best shit I've read from you fam. Good shit and literally no complaints with it at all. You got a very unique way with words man and you embrace it. Props.