Natural & Genocide: Untitled.

Geno · 12-20-2013, 07:19 PM

Natural:
Now wait a minute let me break out my case of spinach
Increase my strength by way of classic sailor gimmicks
I'm the only brute that's brave enough to break the limits
Straight to rebellious rage the audience craves for dinner
I'm sharp now baby taste my blades-bleed and quiver
Now let's cut the act I shit on this display of public trash
Bust some ass with this cut throat blast of explicit sass
Addicted? Fact. Digits start to rivet past a million fast
I'm wielding an auditorium of fans that reach the ceilings brass
It's time we light this bitch up- no feelings still intact
Ya'll took the time to build the map, let us fill the gap
It's just us two kats proving that we're still Ill with rap...

Geno
Still in the casket, hatching my return to text
Cause I ain't fall in love, I just had to flirt with death
Insert, connect, the dirty whore gave me perfect sex
And asked me why my heart so cold, its a birth defect
Fans search the net thinking I went hush or suntin
I been getting high, waiting for this buzz to plummet
diggin through the dust and rubbage, made a deal in hell
To change the game when the rite signs reveal themself
Hot enough to cause rubber gaskets and seals to melt
I beams in the cielings swell and cynder blocks explode
And the debris'll be where I take my conscience home
Build and destroy, do it twice, call it constant growth

143 · 12-22-2013, 05:27 AM

Nat:

I like the mix that you had in your verse. A murdercore verse not traditionally done. What stood out the most is the way you place and used your similies. It gave the right spark to th imagery of your verse. Good shit

Geno:

You came with some hard storytelling. You didn't have the technical impact like Nat did but I would think that it would have made this collab one sided, You did come with a very descriptive verse that gave the impact from the actions of the topic. Overall this was a good verse that kept the fire burning that Nat passed to you. Good Shit...

Natural · 12-22-2013, 04:19 PM

Appreciate it.

This was just a key from us both tbh.

Just Write · 12-22-2013, 04:30 PM

This was pretty dope. Enjoyed first half of nats and same for geno. First couple bars were the best. Nice little flex collab from u two. Hmu for the next one. Peace

12-20-2013, 07:19 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Natural & Genocide: Untitled. Natural: Now wait a minute let me break out my case of spinach Increase my strength by way of classic sailor gimmicks I'm the only brute that's brave enough to break the limits Straight to rebellious rage the audience craves for dinner I'm sharp now baby taste my blades-bleed and quiver Now let's cut the act I shit on this display of public trash Bust some ass with this cut throat blast of explicit sass Addicted? Fact. Digits start to rivet past a million fast I'm wielding an auditorium of fans that reach the ceilings brass It's time we light this bitch up- no feelings still intact Ya'll took the time to build the map, let us fill the gap It's just us two kats proving that we're still Ill with rap... Geno Still in the casket, hatching my return to text Cause I ain't fall in love, I just had to flirt with death Insert, connect, the dirty whore gave me perfect sex And asked me why my heart so cold, its a birth defect Fans search the net thinking I went hush or suntin I been getting high, waiting for this buzz to plummet diggin through the dust and rubbage, made a deal in hell To change the game when the rite signs reveal themself Hot enough to cause rubber gaskets and seals to melt I beams in the cielings swell and cynder blocks explode And the debris'll be where I take my conscience home Build and destroy, do it twice, call it constant growth __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est* Last edited by Geno; 12-20-2013 at 07:22 PM.

12-22-2013, 04:30 PM	#4
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	This was pretty dope. Enjoyed first half of nats and same for geno. First couple bars were the best. Nice little flex collab from u two. Hmu for the next one. Peace __________________

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12-22-2013, 05:27 AM	#2
143 Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 11 Rep Power: 0	Nat: I like the mix that you had in your verse. A murdercore verse not traditionally done. What stood out the most is the way you place and used your similies. It gave the right spark to th imagery of your verse. Good shit Geno: You came with some hard storytelling. You didn't have the technical impact like Nat did but I would think that it would have made this collab one sided, You did come with a very descriptive verse that gave the impact from the actions of the topic. Overall this was a good verse that kept the fire burning that Nat passed to you. Good Shit...

12-22-2013, 04:19 PM	#3
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	Appreciate it. This was just a key from us both tbh.