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Zen · 10-27-2013, 09:28 PM

Deep breath. Take it. Regrets, face it. I sleep best wasted. Jealously is bred in me especially when it's left tainted from desperate dreams. Everyone else it seems is jaded. I guess it's just me left in these restless sheets. Fuck this. I sound like a cry baby. My life lately has been time wasting around lines saying, " I think I've found a nice lady. She's even a dime." Maybe I fall to quick. I'm sick of all this shit. "It's all right baby." Shut up bitch. It's my fault I'm crazy on the cusp of fits. I've had enough of this - pause - I'm pacing like a dog with rabies and I'm lovin it. McDonald's bitch. Bonkers; crazy. I ponder, I'm thinking, I'm the moniker of hades. Arnold praised me after I shot Sarah Connor in the face hee hee.

Adonis · 10-27-2013, 09:45 PM

What the fuk??

You need a hug dog??? You make me laugh tho. Part your own back and close your eyes whilst picturing my av bruhv.

Zen · 10-27-2013, 09:49 PM

Lol will do.

King Ra. · 10-27-2013, 09:56 PM

"It's all right, baby." Shut up bitch.
LMFAOOOO.

That shit had me leaniiiin. This was a cool little display of your bipolarness. You're pretty much up there writing wise with your execution of a multitude of styles and I feel you are developing one of the cleaner flows on this site. Keep droppin', man.

Zen · 10-27-2013, 10:01 PM

Omg thanks guize!!!!!!!! You should go read my piece entitled "It". It's best read high though.

Geno · 10-27-2013, 10:46 PM

Pretty dope, bruh

10-27-2013, 09:28 PM	#1
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	biPolarLand Deep breath. Take it. Regrets, face it. I sleep best wasted. Jealously is bred in me especially when it's left tainted from desperate dreams. Everyone else it seems is jaded. I guess it's just me left in these restless sheets. Fuck this. I sound like a cry baby. My life lately has been time wasting around lines saying, " I think I've found a nice lady. She's even a dime." Maybe I fall to quick. I'm sick of all this shit. "It's all right baby." Shut up bitch. It's my fault I'm crazy on the cusp of fits. I've had enough of this - pause - I'm pacing like a dog with rabies and I'm lovin it. McDonald's bitch. Bonkers; crazy. I ponder, I'm thinking, I'm the moniker of hades. Arnold praised me after I shot Sarah Connor in the face hee hee.

10-27-2013, 09:45 PM	#2
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	What the fuk?? You need a hug dog??? You make me laugh tho. Part your own back and close your eyes whilst picturing my av bruhv. __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

10-27-2013, 10:46 PM	#6
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Pretty dope, bruh __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

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10-27-2013, 09:49 PM	#3
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Lol will do.

10-27-2013, 09:56 PM	#4
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	"It's all right, baby." Shut up bitch. LMFAOOOO. That shit had me leaniiiin. This was a cool little display of your bipolarness. You're pretty much up there writing wise with your execution of a multitude of styles and I feel you are developing one of the cleaner flows on this site. Keep droppin', man.

10-27-2013, 10:01 PM	#5
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Omg thanks guize!!!!!!!! You should go read my piece entitled "It". It's best read high though.