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Old 10-27-2013, 01:26 PM   #1
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yes
this is the pretty pixels my mind's been wishfully wishing
a vicious envision
this crazy queen I certainly would not be missing
due to the 9mm pistols precision
listen, this precious vixen brings shivers down my neck
like the wings of a hunting hawk, i'm still blunted dawg
no angels ushers me as I seem to be lost - today the guns will talk
cause my mischievous mission is masterminded to set on this very devious day
feelings of hate, a female operates in mysterious ways in means to get paid
so the scene shall seamlessly be played..
without regret i'll let a deathwish go further
my best bet is murder, damn.. i'm upset and hurt here
the flirts were not a cause to concern her
undercover stoolpigeons presented me the cold proof
that told the resentfull truth... she sensed the loot
now nobody can prevent the inevitable event of pursuit
the simple and plain plan of pay-back was proceeding in motion
as I went to shoot
equipped with a heart of ice, now, even our house is cold
this caring castle was the life we chose
seeing that this trifling hoe only liked the gold
it's high time my wife's disposed
this shady cap is about to get peeled,
I'm trapped in disbelief strapped to the teeth
the frustration of a king is mighty extreme - when being jacked by a queen
while packing the heat..
backflashing the frames before the blasts would go boom:
"oh..honey, you're back so soon?"
little did the hoe know her fine ass was so doomed
without speech i'm just gazing in the greedy eyes of this girl
my Carol sighs stunned..
the silence is shattered as justice errupts from the barrels of my guns
seven sloughing slugs consumes the sluts lungs
even before a "please" is pleaded
no remorse is felt.. the whore falls on her knees..
now bitch, how about a please?
remember we once flashed our redeemed rings in a perfect pose?
our flesh were close
a hyena progressed and chose the lion in the freshest clothes
yet a novice should never test the pro
finally.. as i'm falling back it's all in black
perceiveng the sounds that I really can't hear
and imagining that same mental picture inside my head
damn it.. it ain't clear..



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